The Lost Light

January 11, 2012

Prelude: History

King Niefion stormed down the spiral staircase of his tower uttering foul profanities, his hair streaming behind him in perfect coordination with his black cape, in color and in motion. His eyes were dark as well, and black with anger. He wasn’t a small man by nature, nor sickly, yet his skin was pale as a winter’s moon and it clung to his bones like cobwebs to old furniture, the circles under his eyes revealed he hadn’t slept well in a long time. All in all, he was the worse for wear, but his stride was purposeful and his anger potent; there was no weakness in his bearing, it was, as is fitting, the bearing of a king. A righteous king. An enraged king.

In his bony hands he clutched an ancient tome, savagely tight, in an obsessive way, shielding it from his own wrath. The shadows around him responded readily to his rage, squirming and writhing, trying to be free from natures constraining laws. Soldiers and servants alike tried to avoid him, pressing up against the wall as their king stalked by leaving a trail of evil, warped magic behind him.

He stopped abruptly and slammed his foot on the stone steps with more force than should be physically possible. The steps around him fractured from the power and the men around him cowered further.

“Traitorous hag!” He raged to no one present. “I loved you! We were going to be the rulers of ALL Yorathia! And what did you do? Turn against ME!?!”

Niefion yelled again and punched the wall, shattering it and sending pieces skittering down the stairway. He then reached out a grasping hand toward a terrified guard, the guard’s own shadow ripped free of the ground and lifted the man into the air, hurling him at the wall. The man screamed before hitting the wall face first with a bone crunching report. He made no more noise, however, as he bounced off the wall and tumbled down the stairs. The other men stood still, silent as prey in the eyes of a hawk, hoping against hope to be overlooked. King Niefion ignored them all as he continued his furious descent into the depths of his castle, even stepping in the dead guards rapidly expanding puddle of blood without a downward glance.

He felt rather than heard the seven spell casters’ chanting, standing outside the walls of his castle. It reverberated in his head like a drum, each word a hammer’s blow driving another nail into his coffin. He could sense their magic forming to their will, rapidly bringing the spell to completion, the spell that would be the end of him if he didn’t act fast.

“Yes,” he sneered. “You have bested me, this battle is yours. But know this Eleri, dear, this war is not over. It does not matter if you battle beside them, the pestilence of this world, I will still win. I. ALWAYS. WIN!”

He bit out these words just as he reached a large double door deep in the bowels of his castle, two slabs of plain iron, completely unadorned and even lacking the handles to open them. Leaning close he put one hand on each side and started to whisper into the crack of the door. His words were soft, smooth, all the fury had gone out of his voice. As he was speaking, black writing flowed out from underneath his palms printing itself on the metal. Suddenly the doors moved as if of their own volition, opening into a large circular chamber with no windows. Inside something stirred, concealed by the shadows at the edges of the room. It produced a sharp clatter as it stood, like horse hooves on pavement, and as it moved the clanking of chains revealed its imprisoned state. However, the single blood red eye that glared through the darkness was not the gaze of an brainless horse and the fire it held is not found in a captive slave.

Niefion returned the glare with one of his own as he crossed the room.

“You will go to my son with these,” he snapped as he flipped through his book, tearing out pages, quite a contrast to the protectiveness with which he had previously held it. Desperation can force a man into a corner, and when trapped, a fox will gnaw off its own leg if only to survive.

He held the papers out to the creature but didn’t let go when it tried to take them in its clawed hand – bending close to it he whispered, “Tell him these are a gift and if he wants the rest….Well, he will have to come free me. Won’t he?”

He finished his statement with a small, sly, smile. Only then did he let the creature take the pages. Stepping back, he uttered a word and the sound of shattering metal filled the room as the chains holding the creature snapped, sending shards rebounding off the stone. The creature stomped its newly freed limbs without moving its gaze from Niefion. Niefion stared right back with a firm look that dared it to disobey his command. A moment lapsed, then the creature began to chuckle.

“The army on the plain, desperate but unbroken, and the king sulking inside his castle, so sure in his power.” the creature’s voice, mocking at first, turned deadly serious “They have something in common, they both only postpone an inevitable fate that will come when the chains are broken and the True Will unleashed. It is not the stroke of a sword that can be blocked or shattered, or a moment in time you can avoid or prevent. It is. Simple and binding, stronger than stone, and as undeniable as the rising of the sun or the falling of the rain.” The creature paused a second as if to say more, instead it let out a shrill, inhuman, laugh that echoed around the room. It kept laughing as it faded away and disappeared from the castle. King Niefion shook himself to dispel the chills that the creature’s words had invoked; abruptly he realized that his emissary had left not a moment too soon. He could already feel reality twist and come apart as the magics ripped into the fabric of the world. The distortion of reality was like a knife being twisted in his gut, even the spiders felt it as they scurried around in the dark room searching for a way out.

“Do your worst lowlifes,” he sneered in contempt. “And you Eleri, I applaud your initiative, bask in this victory, my dear, for there won’t be another. But, please, do not hurry, after all…” A grin split his face as he casually leaned up against a pillar with the book hugged once again to his chest. “I have all the time in the world.” He started to chuckle to himself as the chanting ended and everything went dark.

 

Lyris stood on a balcony of white marble looking out across the city while she tried to calm the crying baby girl in her arms. The entire city was made of the same stone as the balcony, so purely white that it glowed with the brilliance of the full moon, even if only a few stars peaked through the gloom overhead. It was a beautiful sight, with floating lights wandering the streets shedding light to help the wayward souls to find their ways home and a long wall with tall towers lending a sense of security to all that dwelt within. It wasn’t a large city, little over a mile from one side to the other, so small some would say it didn’t even warrant its impressive walls, but those were a necessity in these dark times. Her child shifted in her arms; a smile came to her lips as she watched her baby’s golden eyes drift shut and her breathing calm. She kissed her daughters forehead gently before returning her attention to the town.

She found her gaze pulled beyond the rooftop gardens to the pale walls and then , beyond… beyond into the shadow lands where a black mist hung eternally over the land, providing a safe haven for the creatures of living darkness that wandered and hunted within. Her smile disappeared as she looked at the mist, a constant reminder of what her people had lost, of why these walls were necessary. Even after hundreds of years, the sun’s light was still forbidden to touch the once green and rolling hills of her homeland, where cattle had grazed and wild beasts had foraged, only the shadows of the dead still walked. But those do not graze for grass nor forage for the bounty of the earth – no – their unquenchable appetite is saved for those of living flesh alone. There were few animals alive out there anymore but the living shadows do not die of starvation, they feed for the joy of killing alone, not for any nourishment their ethereal bodies might need.

She was pulled from her dark reverie when her husband, Missael, came up behind her and put his hand on her shoulder. In his other hand, he held a miniature sun; it floated above his palm chasing away the darkness in the corners of the balcony while the warmth of his hand on her shoulder chased the dark from her mind. Turning her head, she smiled lovingly up at his face. He yawned before returning her smile with a sleepy one of his own. He was a large man with a strong jaw and heavy brow, his eyes and hair, golden like that of all their race, lightly reflected the city’s glow. Stepping in closer, he looked down at their daughter, murmuring in her sleep. Lyris pulled away a little when he reached out to touch the child, her meaningful glare informing him wordlessly of the consequences that would come if he woke her. He grinned a little then smoothed the child’s small patch of hair gently.

Suddenly an explosion shook the balcony beneath them, and their neighbors’ houses, and all the rest of the city. A white cloud of dust rose from the city as stones, long held still by mortar, were disturbed from their motionless state. Missael’s arm snaked around Lyris’ waist supporting her, keeping her and their daughter from tumbling over the edge as they were thrown against the balcony’s rail. When they had recovered their footing they looked up to see the city guards gathering at a gap that had appeared in the wall, an entire ten foot section of the wall had been reduced to rubble; inside that breach living shadows of all shapes and sizes were gathering, dreadfully curious. Magic lights were popping up all over the city as people poured into the streets to see what was happening, a mistake on their part. The shadow creatures’ eyes lighted upon their new prey and they started forward, stepping on soil that had long been kept from them by barriers of stone and magic. They came hesitantly at first but with gathering confidence, until they swept forward into the ranks of the guards. Sulfur-yellow lights erupted angrily in the distant streets as the guards fought back against the hordes of maleficent creatures. Then the screams began, deafening, the people in the streets realized that they were under attack, the walls that had protected them for generations had finally failed. Panic took the streets as people ran rampant not knowing what to do now that the unthinkable had happened. The never-ending waves of monsters quickly overwhelmed the city guard and tore into the populace. Lyris stood frozen in place as she watched the white streets run red with blood; the women, the children, the old, the infirm – it did not matter to the beasts as they mindlessly slaughtered everyone within reach with wicked glee.

Unnoticed by the fear-ravaged people, several men in black cloaks now stood atop the walls, indifferently watching the carnage unravel.

Lyris stayed as she was, unmoving and rigid with fright, until Missael grabbed her shoulders, turning her towards him and breaking her from her trance.

“Go,” he said urgently pushing her down the corridor into their home. “Save yourself – save her. Take the back stairs and head to the citadel. You should be safe there.” He kissed them both quickly before dashing down into the street to help where he could.

Lyris took a deep breath then turned and ran into the house. The jostling woke the baby who started to cry, tears of fear and desperation seeped out of Lyris’s eyes as she ran down the hallway; she headed for the stairs as Missael had told her. Running full tilt, she grabbed the banister, pivoted right, and charged down the steps. But she stopped short as the door at the bottom of the stairs exploded inward, the heavy wood splintering with a crackling sound. Pieces of it clung to the frame as the door fell to the floor with a thud; the air forced out from under it became a small breeze that blew away the dirt on the floor, raising a small dust cloud. Through the opening came one of the living shadows, it was in shaped like a man, standing tall, shoulders back, but it seemed to be made of a dense black mist, like the mist that covered the rest of the land, but thicker. The only parts that seemed truly solid were its teeth and its clawed fingers, which were like polished obsidian, solid and shiny and deadly sharp – they dripped the blood of previous kills – as it stalked into the house. Lyris didn’t hesitate, she turned and ran back upstairs; turning, she ran into the bedroom. Immediately she stopped short, knowing she was at a dead end, she had entered the room through its only door; turning in a circle, she searched for options, only one came to mind. She placed the baby on the bed and ran to the door. The shadow creature came out of the stairwell, just as she reached it, blocking the only way out; when its bottomless black eyes met her golden ones it howled with feral glee. She screamed and slammed the door as it began to charge. She put her back up against the door and quickly muttered a phrase, activating the magical lock just in time to feel the impact as the creature crashed into the wood. She darted back to the bed and took her daughter into her arms; kissing her baby girl- one last time.

“I wish I could have seen you grow up.” She whispered in a quavering voice. The beating on the door grew louder as more creatures arrived. A sob tore out her throat as she tossed the child into the air, words flowed from her lips in a strange, flowing language. The baby hovered at the peak of the throw as magic danced over her like light shining through a glass of water. With a pop the floating baby disappeared in a bright flash. Lyris smiled briefly before turning towards the door, magic running spilling from her fingertips like fountains of sunlight, ready to fight the undefeatable hordes.

“Goodbye, Sola.” she said.

 

Not long after in Angharad:

Davyn Owen sat on a bench outside his mother’s chamber attempting to blow his unruly brown hair out of his eyes. He was barefoot, as young boys will be on a sunny day like this, but his clothes were well-made and tailored personally to fit him. They were not extravagant clothes, no bright colors or jewels; instead practical and tough, perfect for the rough horseplay of childhood’s days.

Children have a tendency to notice small things that their parents assume they won’t pick up on, it is the obvious things that slip past them: that cats do not like to be squeezed or that bugs are not meant to be eaten. Such was the case with Davyn as well, he was innocently ignorant of the tension surrounding him, blatantly obvious though it was. He just pattered his bare feet on the cold stone and wondered what games the village boys would be playing on such a nice day.

His father, Baron Cadwallader Owen of Traheron, was pacing up and down the hall in front of his wife’s door – his hands clasped tightly behind his back, knuckles turning white. Cadfael Owen, Davyn’s grandfather and the former baron, was more in control of himself, sitting on a chair next to the window puffing on a pipe of abyss-weed, but he too sent frequent glances toward his daughter-in-law’s room.

Davyn fidgeted slightly as muffled sounds of pain came from behind the door. However, he was quickly distracted when a movement in the window caught his eye. Getting up he ran to investigate. Standing on tiptoe he stuck his head as far out the window as he could, looking right and then left, then up, then down. He saw nothing of interest, just the walls surrounding the keep and the village rooftops beyond them. It was a nice day, sunny, with an occasional cloud, a day meant for fun and mischief. But Davyn was stuck inside; not that he cared, much, not while his mother was finally giving birth to his new baby sister- or brother. He wiggled in excitement as he imagined all the things he would do with his new sibling, if it was a boy he would be his squire, if it was a girl she would be the damsel in distress.

Cadfael came over to lean against the windowsill beside his grandson.

“What is it lad?” he asked quietly, barely above a whisper, “What do you see.”

“Nothing, I guess.” Davyn replied, “Thought I saw a bird or something. Hey grandpa! Is it going to be a boy or a girl?”

Cadfael chuckled at the question. “Can’t say that until it’s born, it’s one of those cherished mysteries of life. Though Midwife Wynne has her suspicions.”

“I hope it’s a girl. Father says if it’s a girl I’ll have to protect her no matter what, so he’s going to train me to be a better knight than him or even Davyn Brychan.”

“Better than Prince Brychan was? Your namesake? Hmmm, your father had better train you hard then, I hear he was very good.”

He looked down at his grandson’s face. “You don’t look to happy about it.” He said softly.

“Well,” Davyn said scratching his head, “Being a knight’s alright, I guess, but I wanna’ be like you grandpa and make swords and armor and stuff.” He looked up excitedly. “Do you think you could teach me? Well grandpa?”

It was Cadfael’s turn to scratch his head. “Well… Your father won’t like that at all, besides you’re still too young to work the forge, maybe in a couple years.”

Davyn’s face split wide in a grin, revealing gaps and gums where his baby teeth had been.

The sound of a door opening disrupted their conversation and they turned to find Midwife Wynne leaving the baroness’ rooms, several red-gray hairs had escaped her tight bun and her wrinkled face was weary and sad.

“You might want to go in, my lord.” she said before they could question her, “she hasn’t much time”

Baron Owen let out a breath that sounded like a weak “no”, stricken he shoved past Midwife Wynne and a couple of maids bearing rags and hot water, into his wife’s chambers. The old woman shook her head sadly and let him go.

“The child?” Cadfael asked, “I heard no cries.” But the look on the midwife’s face and the faint sobs from the room behind her were answer enough. There was no child.

Cadfael’s face was grim as he followed his son into the room, a worried and confused Davyn right on his heels. Inside the room was well lit by a few candles and an open window that let in a warm summer breeze. Davyn’s father was not one for appearances and his mother, Ellen, was almost as austere as her husband, so their furnishings were not ornate, a wardrobe, a dresser, a canopied bed, only what was necessary. On the bed lay his mother, looking pale and tired, holding his father’s hand. Cadwallader knelt next to the bed talking softly to his weeping wife not even noticing the tears that stained his own face. Ellen held the unmoving babe in her arms, wrapped in a blanket she had so lovingly made months before.

Cadfael stopped several feet away from the bed and watched. Davyn stood wide-eyed, his hand fisted in his grandfather’s tunic. Cadfael let out a sigh that sounded almost like a groan. Closing his eyes, he pinched the bridge of his nose as if he had a headache, his jaw rippled slightly as he clenched his teeth, trying to contain his grief.

Davyn turned to his grandfather, questions spilling from his lips.

“What’s going on, grandpa? Is it a sister or a brother?” His voice grew more frantic. “Why is father crying? What’s wrong with mama?”

His Grandfather’s hand came down upon his head, not an answer but a simple comforting gesture. Then Cadfael gently pushed him forward towards the bed, Davyn clambered up beside his mother and looked quizzically down at the still form she held.

“She is a girl.” Ellen told her son weakly.

“Oh…” Davyn said sheepishly, “She’s just sleeping then.”

Ellen sobbed but tried to smile. “That’s right Davyn, she’s sleeping, and mama has to sleep now too.” Her voice grew fainter even as she spoke the words. “Your sister and I are going to sleep for a very long time… and one day, when you sleep to, I’ll see you again.”

“Huh?” Davyn said his brows scrunching together in confusion.

Ellen just kissed his forehead and said, “You will understand someday when you’re older.”

Turning to Cadwallader she tried to raise her hand but her strength finally failed her. Instead, Cadwallader leaned in close and kissed her lightly, and then he took the hand he still held and brought it to his lips. Tears leaked from the corners of his eyes. Ellen’s eyelids drooped lower and lower and her breaths become shallower and shallower. Finally her eyes shut completely and the small smile froze on her face.

Davyn still did not understand why his father was crying but, seeing that his mother was sleepy, decided not to make any noise that might disturb her or his sister. He was looking around the room for something to play with when something spectacular caught his eye. In the window floated something nearly invisible, most would have ruled it off as a trick of the light but children like Davyn knew exactly what it was.

“A Fairy.” Davyn immediately concluded. Awed, his jaw hung open as he watched it drift into the room, the thing was only about a foot and a half long and it looked just like golden sunlight passing through a wisp of mist. Though it was almost transparent, Davyn could make out some slight shadows within it that might have been construed as a face.

The creature twisted its way through the air towards the bed; Davyn didn’t dare move for fear of scaring it away or waking his mother and baby-sister, so he held perfectly still eyes glued to the fairy. It came to a stop right above the unmoving baby girl unnoticed by his father who wept silently over his mother, It seemed to hesitate a moment before it descended down to touch the child. As it fell it thinned out into a stream, like water from a pitcher, plunging into the baby’s forehead passing wraithlike through the skin. Davyn held his breath as a moment passed and nothing happened, then his little sister moved, her mouth opened and a wailing cry sounded through the castle. Cadwallader jerked his head up at the sound and stared in amazement at his daughter. Then he shouted for joy and jumped to his feet, taking her in his arms he started laughing through his tears.

“You did it Ellen, our daughter is alive! You did it.” He smiled and cradled the baby close. “We have already chosen a name for you little one, it’s the last thing your mother ever gave to you so treasure it, Creia.”

Davyn leapt from the bed, careful not to disturb his mother, and ran up to his grandfather who wore a large smile now as he watch his usually gruff son cuddle and coo at the crying Creia. Though he was smiling his eyes were thoughtful, almost intense.

“Grandpa! Grandpa!” Davyn whispered loudly, “Did you see that fairy? It woke up my sister.”

“Her name is Creia, Davyn.” Cadfael said, “And yes I did see the ‘fairy’.”

Chapter one

18 years later

It was a dreary day in early spring, the sort of day that was only appropriate for solemn funerals or silent battlefields. The trees wept under the drizzling rain, the roads were rivers of mud, and in the thin, clinging, white mist there wasn’t a songbird that dared sing its song. Gray clouds and gray forests were all nature had to display, and while the animals shivered, cold, in their burrows so also did the humans quiver in their hovels, hands outstretched toward meager fires.

Through this Davyn Owen rode with his travel worn and road weary company of knights. There were seven in all, including Davyn himself, all of them wearing suits of chain mail and sporting swords and wary gazes. It was an odd thing for men to wear armor of any sort when they had been traveling for a long period of time, a length of time made apparent by their weary, mud splattered steeds. But upon closer examination anyone could see that though the armor was well polished and cared for, it was also well used; scratches and nicks adorned the suits as well as their sword scabbards, fresh by the looks of them. All in all it seemed that the roads had not been kind, not even to knights of the realm.

But though there were seven men, they were not all seven of them knights, only the six men following Davyn claimed that title. They were knights sworn to the Baron Owen of Traherun. Davyn was the Baron’s only son and not a knight but a Wielder, one of the few people chosen by an elemental spirit of power to be its host and master. The Celestial church claimed that these spirits were sent by the gods to choose warriors to do their work on earth, since the gods could no longer freely transverse the heavens. They appeared to their chosen in vivid dreams and asked them to enter into a contract binding them together. Davyn was a Wielder of fire, as was evidenced by his smoldering green eyes and his flame red hair, which seemed to change between red, orange and yellow. His eyes had a subtle luminescence of their own that pierced the gloom of the fog, on this dull, colorless day, and his bright hair stuck out against the drab grays and browns that surrounded him.

Davyn was a tall man, not an inch under six feet, and he had layers of muscle built from hours and hours of hard labor. A strap across his back held a sheathed broadsword and a shield; an odd combination since the broadsword had to be used with two hands even by the most hulking warrior. Davyn, however, used both the shield and the sword at the same time, and with contemptible ease at that. The power the elemental spirits imparted to their Wielders was not limited to their magic, a Wielder’s speed, strength, and senses were beyond compare and in battle he had no equal. Songs were sung of the legendary few who had managed to kill a Wielder even if it were by trickery or some such method.

“ “The condition of the roads betray the state of the kingdom” ” Davyn sighed to himself, quoting one of the many books he had been forced to study over the past six years at the Wielder Academy in Freilds.

“Truer words were never spoken.” Said Sir Orthal with a  grim smile. ‘Grim’ wasn’t a look Sir Orthal had much, it didn’t suit his happy-go-lucky personality or his handsome face. Orthal was a knight straight out of those stories people begged the bards to tell over and over again: long, blond hair, devilish smile, chivalrous, brave. And a good swordsman to boot, which had served him well upon this journey. He was an inch or two shorter than Davyn, and of a somewhat slighter build. He wore what the rest of the knights wore, the green tunic emblazoned with a black embroidered lion clinging to a sword set point down- the Owen family crest.

Davyn had to agree with him, the words were true indeed. Six years had passed since the war with Arisland. But, bloody though the war may have been, how long could peace talks take? Something was wrong with the world, of that Davyn was sure, something had poisoned it against them: fields refused to grow, cities were rife with the plague, and the monarchs were too concerned with their political plays to be distracted by their peoples plight. On second thought, maybe there wasn’t anything wrong, it had been like this for as long as he could remember, could be this was how it always was. But the old men always told stories of how things were so much better when they were young; they worked hard, got paid, the nobles fought for their vassals and tenants, fairly and justly. They talked of prosperity as opposed to poverty, contentment instead of greed, honor instead of dishonor.

“My lord.” Sir Orthal said as they passed a lane. “Isn’t this the Obren family’s farm?”

Davyn looked at the place. The ramshackle buildings and pitiful fields did not need a gray day to make them appear grim, the state of the crop and condition of the buildings were sad enough. The fields were weed infested, no one had plowed them in over a year, the barn was overgrown with vines that wove in and out of the stone foundation slowly tearing it apart. It looked as if the next passing storm would blow it over. Already the equipment shed lay on its side, flattened, tool’s handles stuck out between the rotting slats of the walls. A rusty plow, half buried in mud, was surrounded by a small herd of sickly cows, there by choice if the broken fence was any indication.

A knot formed in his stomach. The Obrens were some of the wealthiest farmers around or had been years ago when he had gone north to the Wielder Academy. His father, Baron Owen, had held hhhhhh Obren in high esteem, letting him do whatever he pleased with the land the Baron gave to him.

Old man Obren’s secret to success was well known. “Run a tight ship”, a seafarer’s term that Obren clung to judiciously. hhhhhh claimed he was a descendent of the last captain to sail here from the Homeland, he said it was his great-granddaddy’s mantra and now it was his. Everything had a place on Obren’s farm, and it all was painstakingly maintained, nothing stayed broken for long. This mess of a place was hardly recognizable.

Davyn, Sir Orthal  and the other knights solemnly watched the farm as they rode by.

“I had been wondering,” Orthal whispered “I saw this happening in the rest of Angharad but… this is home, it’s not supposed to change.”

Davyn shook his head sadly and looked away. Orthal and the others followed suit. They continued on in silence once again, each occupied with his own thoughts.

In spite of the dreariness of the journey and the sad sight of the Obren homestead, a jolt of excitement went through Davyn as they rounded the next hilltop to see Traherun stretched out below them. A happy murmur ran through the knights at the sight, their spirits rising at last. The horses snorted and tossed their heads, sensing their riders’ enthusiasm.

“Well it seems not all has gone to the Accursed, eh?” Sir Orthal said, that familiar smile back on his face.

“Not all,” Davyn thought happily “not all indeed.”

Traherun, ruled by the Baron Cadwallader Owen, Davyn’s father, was a large, practical city tucked into the base of the Burmast mountains. The square, blocky keep was situated on a hill, higher than the inner walls of the castle which were also built taller than the houses and buildings of the city. The outer wall encompassed the city, it was twenty feet tall all around with a tower every quarter mile or so. It was well designed; the outer wall no taller than the city buildings, should an invading army take the wall they would be granted only a very limited advantage over the retreating defenders, who could take up defensive positions on the rooftops. Also, if the invaders took the inner wall the soldiers in the keep would still be at a higher point and able to pick off attackers easily from above.

It was a good layout. A simple layout. One to be proud of, though Davyn knew it was not something his family could take pride in. Traherun had been designed by some renown architect, —–, some four hundred years ago. It had been ruled by the Brychan family until it was given as a fief to Sir Andreas Owen a century and a half ago along with the title of ‘baron‘.

As Davyn’s cohort neared the gates, one of the two rain drenched guards on watch hailed the approaching company, a greeting and a warning. The soldiers hoisted their bows to the ready, arrows knocked in case of trouble, without actually drawing them.

“Ho! Who goes there? Don’t come any closer, friend.”

“This is about as close as I’d ever want to get to you Gwil.” Orthal called back. “We all know how you chew those nasty garlic cloves when you’re on duty.”

“Well if it isn’t the young master and his order of disreputable knights.” said Gwil, visibly relaxing at the sound of Orthal’s voice. They lowered their bows but, Davyn noticed, did not remove the arrows from the strings.

“Finished dancing wit’ dem pretty northern orcsies, have yeh?” Joined in the other guard. “’Ope yeh haven’t gone to soft or high n’ mighty to thresh some wheat. Or do yeh think now that yeh got some notches in yer blades that ’ol Baron Owen won’t send yeh out t’ the fields?”

The men all laughed at that. In Traherun no one was spared from harvesting save for the dead and the dying.

“I’m sure we’ll be back in shape come harvest time.” Davyn quipped. “But you two…” he gave them a scathing, mocking glance. “… might take a little longer.”

This brought on another round of boisterous laughter. The group had not had a reason to laugh in awhile and the liberating feeling of returning home left them all somewhat giddy.

Realizing they were keeping their friends out in the rain, the guards lowered the gate and ushered the troop under the portcullis into the city streets. After promising to meet again later to have drinks and swap stories, Davyn and company continued on toward the castle.

The city folk turned out to greet them despite the rainfall and cold early spring air. They gathered around the knights in droves, making progress slow. They did not care about the drizzle or the puddles that splashed them when the horses plodded through, and news traveled fast spreading to more and more people, who then came to see their old friends. Davyn was anxious to get to the castle- to get home- he needed to get his men off the road, out of the wet and back to their loving families. He, too, had family to see. Three years was a long time to be away from home. Impatience continued to well up inside him to the point of bursting. He shifted in his seat, half ready to holler at the crowd to remove themselves from his path.

With a glance over his shoulder that all changed, his restlessness drained from him with the rain at the scene before him. Shop owners stood in their doorways, men came from their houses. The women also left their chores and their baking and hurried into the streets. They all came out to welcome home their town’s sons; back from distant lands and strange adventures. It wasn’t something to be expected in such a large city, such a closeness, but it had always been in Traherun. Davyn couldn’t believe he had forgotten that. Many people kept pace with the group, chatting and exchanging news. His knights were desperate for local news, especially concerning their families. Davyn recognized most of the folk on sight, some had changed, grown a beard or a mustache, the children ,especially, had grown. Orthal’s brother-in-law, one of many, gave Orthal’s horse a friendly smack on the withers before sprinting off, presumably to spread the word, of the return of the family’s glory boy.

Davyn allowed himself a small smile as he turned back around releasing his tension into the wind. He felt no overpowering need to hurry to the castle anymore. He was already home. Right where he belonged, just like he remembered it.

He listened to the chatter around him continue as they rode on. From what he heard no one mentioned the Obren family, sad news was better left till last, but there were plenty of odd tidbits to be heard.

“… grew a carrot this big, but his wife chopped it up for…”

“… a healthy baby boy, cries all the time though…”

“… -aid he heard a banshee! Can you belie-…”

Davyn was so wrapped up in the conversations going on around him he started when a small hand grabbed his boot. He reigned in his horse as he looked down… right into the gaunt, hungry face of a young girl. Her right arm, the one not clutching him, was bandaged with a clean cloth, the white linen stood out against her dirty skin. Her blond hair was matted and unkempt, her bare feet were scratched and raw and her toenails were frayed from walking the cobbled streets. A tattered dress clung to her bony frame, it was brown now but looked like it had been yellow or white several owners ago.

“Alms sir?” the girl said in a trembling voice, holding out her right hand. “Have you a coin or two to spare?”

When she spoke Davyn instinctively raised his eyes to meet hers and what he saw there shocked him- fear. She expected him to lash out at her but she was hungry- starving even- and willing to risk some pain for a little food.

The conversation behind him went silent, the knights had stopped when he had and now sat utterly still upon their horses, staring at the shivering child with solemn expressions. However, the gathered people did not look at the girl, instead they turned their weighty gazes upon Davyn.

They’re waiting, He realized, waiting to see what I do. Three years is a long time, they want to see how I’ve changed.

          He turned back to the scrawny girl with the fear filled eyes. Jesting with the guards on the gate, being welcomed so warmly by friends; he had naively allowed these things to convince himself that Traherun was untouched. That it was above and beyond the influence of the rest of the kingdom. An influence that reared its ugly head everywhere, evidenced by the Obren farm, first, and now here with this little girl. Traherun was his home! Home doesn’t change. Not like this.      Davyn sighed and reached down to pry the child’s hand from his leg. She tensed at his movement but he kept it as smooth and unthreatening as he could so she remained where she was, frozen like a rabbit, hoping, waiting. He dismounted then. Once on the ground he realized that the girl was taller than he thought, she was probably somewhere between twelve and thirteen; older than he had thought her to be. The clean bandage on her arm and the fact that she had survived the winter led him to believe that someone had taken pity on her on numerous occasions. He realized now how thin the people around them were, their clothing was patched and their shoes had holes if they had shoes at all. Winter had not been kind to any of them, least of all this girl, but still the people of Traherun would not have let one of their own go unhelped. But still…

Davyn took out two copper nobles and pressed them into her outstretched palm. Before she could take them and run he asked softly.

“Why haven’t you gone to the church parish? The one next to the Sleepy Sun Inn?”

She gave him a shaky smile. “They are filled up there, sir. I go there from time to time for a few morsels of food or to visit my younger siblings.”

“And your parents?” He asked.

“My pa died of the plague, and my ma…” She hesitated and glanced away, uncertain whether to trust him. “…she is over there.” She gestured to the alley behind her.

Davyn looked up at the place she indicated, he saw a woman chewing on a piece of hard bread, the dark of the alleyway and the rain kept him from seeing any details but she looked even worse off then her daughter. She was not the alley’s sole occupant either, farther in a man slept on a plank of wood covered in a ragged blanket and a boy sat with his head in his hands, small shoulders shaking.

Davyn pulled out three more copper nobles and handed them to the girl. Her eyes lit up, she clutched them to her chest as she ran back to her mother.

Davyn turned back to his men who still waited silently.

“I need to see my father.” Davyn told them before he remounted his horse. They all nodded and rode on, a little faster this time. They would catch up with friends later, at this moment they had a duty to fulfill.

Seeing the troop’s new resolve the townspeople made a way for them, waving them on. Davyn caught several glances directed at him, the people threw him nods and smiles as he passed. They had wanted to know if he had changed, if he had apparently they approved.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Chapter Two

 

 

Davyn knew that word of their arrival had undoubtedly reached his father before they even reached the keep. On top of the gatehouse, it seemed, the entire castle guard had gathered. They let out a cheer when Davyn and his men came into sight. Davyn chuckled a little to himself, though his father would have their hides on a rack if he saw how lax their discipline was.

They passed into the courtyard, where the members of the general staff had also come out to greet them. The knights dismounted amidst more applause and cheering, and handed off their steeds to nearby stable boys.

The courtyard was sizable, with plenty of room to build any essential buildings. The castle itself was small, considering the size of the city it governed. Usually the castle grew with the city, the wealthier the city the more prestigious the keep, but Baron Owen refused to spend any money on frivolous things. In his eyes enlarging the keep, when there was already plenty of rooms in which they could conduct any necessary business, was indeed frivolous. It was this mindset that kept Traherun running so well, despite the condition other cities were in. The nobles taxed the people so they could live their luxurious lives, raising taxes even when the crop yield was low and the winter long. Baron Owen took only what he needed to pay the Kings taxes and keep Traherun safe. That and what he needed to keep himself in the cups.

Davyn’s thoughts turned to his father’s drinking habits. They had started after Ellen, Davyn’s mother, died giving birth to Creia, her loss had taken a toll on the burly baron. Not long after her death Cadwallader was called to duty by King Mabon to fight the Arisians, a war that had made Cadwallader a hero and a legend. But Davyn had never heard his father speak of the war. Ever. He had heard songs composed about the great Cadwallader’s exploits in battle: Capturing the gate house of Naldun single handedly, leading a small band of fifteen knights to victory against a hundred Arisians. The stories got more and more ridiculous after that, men said that he was secretly a Wielder of stone and used his magic to bring down the walls of the city, or that he was descendent from giants and stood ten feet tall. But Baron Owen would suffer no mention of the war, a minstrel had asked him about it once, wanting to compose a new song, the Baron’s face went hard as stone and his eyes cold as ice. Then he ordered the man out of the castle, out of the city too, actually. They threw him out of the gates with only the clothes he was wearing and his lute. That had ended all inquiry into that subject matter.

Making his way through the crowd amidst much back slapping, and “welcome home”s Davyn reached the large, carved, double doors, left ajar by the joyous staff. On either side of the doors stood two stern guards, their disciplined gazes swept the courtyard missing nothing, even in the throng of people gathered there. They flicked their eyes at Davyn as he passed but that was all the reaction they gave him. They were part of his father’s honor guard, veteran soldiers who knew their jobs well, some had served with his father in Arisland.

Once inside Davyn found himself in the great hall, the main room in the castle, used for all purposes. Dinners were taken here, guests greeted, and court cases heard. His father might not be one for trying to impress visiting nobles, but the great hall contained astounding craftsmanship worthy of the King’s own palace. The room was at least fifty strides long with the lofty ceiling held up by eight towering pillars, each adorned with carvings of legendary battles and hunts. On the walls hung embroidered tapestries depicting scenes from ballads and songs, these Cadwallader would have had sold long ago had not Ellen said the cold stone hall needed their warmth, he had never mentioned taking them down after her death.

Davyn made his way into the hall, eerily quiet to his ears after the noise from the staff outside. Sitting at the head of the table in an ornate chair was a large, burly man, drinking ale from a mug while reading a stack of parchment covered with numbers and lists. The air around him seemed to say “Do not come near“. His muscular frame and forceful stare gave him this imposing presence, but it was his multiple scars that made him so unapproachable. They decorated every exposed part of him, his skin was a map of war and pain, a lifetime’s worth of each and then some to spare. One intense brown eye lifted from the paper to gaze at Davyn as he walked closer, the other was a blank gray, empty and blind. A knife wound had done that, and left him with a gnarled scar running across his forehead, through his eye and down his cheek. It was deep and craggy like a crevice in a rock, and it wasn’t even his worse wound. Both the man’s arms rested on the table before him, his right hand holding the parchment, but his left arm was a useless stub of flesh ending just before the wrist. Some stories said that he had chopped it off himself when an enemy had grabbed a hold of it. Davyn could believe it, this man was the sort of fighter to do just that. He knew that well.

“Hello Father.” Davyn said as he came to a stop several feet down the table from the man.

Baron Cadwallader raised his head, shaking his long chestnut brown hair out of his face. It had more gray in it than Davyn remembered. The baron’s wrinkled, scarred, and weather beaten face had always seemed ancient to Davyn, though the baron was only now nearing fifty years of age.

“You are back, eh?” Baron Owen said unsmiling.

“Yes, just now.” Davyn replied.

There was a brief pause, it wasn’t awkward, but neither of them had anything to say. Then Baron Owen asked.

“How were the roads?”

Three years and that was the question he got. To the Baron fond greetings and drawn out farewells were naught but mind numbing drivel. The state of the kingdom‘s roads was useful information, something he needed to know, his son was obviously alive and healthy so he had no need to enquire as to how he‘d been. In Davyn’s eyes it was one of his father’s more redeeming qualities, he took after his father in his impatience for gestures of sentimentality.

Davyn sighed and sat down in one of the chairs, needing to get off his feet.

          Odd, Davyn thought, I’ve been riding all day and yet I need to rest my feet. He found the idea very amusing but stifled his smile and gave his father an account of the trip from Frields.

“We ran into two groups of bandits on the way, we were obviously well armed and they still tried to rob us. I can’t imagine what it is like for other travelers who are less well equipped. I expected to pass quite a few merchant caravans this early in spring but we only came across three, and they were small. None of them had more than three wagons of goods to sell.”

Baron Owen leaned forward, his one good eye focused on Davyn, soaking up everything he said.

“There were a surprising number of families traveling as well, ’moving to greener pastures’ they said. Thing was they were coming from all directions, some were fleeing Lord Barian’s lands and heading to Dimstane, people from Dimstane were heading here to Brychan lands. People are even leaving Bituwin, though it seemed better off than most cities when we passed through it, thanks to the church. But they all seem to think that they would be better off somewhere else.”

His father sat back, exhaling heavily.

“The King has been raising his taxes.” He said “But he cannot tax the nobles, our tithes to him are set and changing them would anger some important -and dangerous- people, so he taxes the common folk.”

“I saw the Obren farm on the way here, Father,” Davyn interrupted. “it was falling to pieces. What happened?”

“That is a different matter. Obren was always very good with his money, so even when whole crops went bad he still was able to pay the King his due. But the King’s taxes have hit hard on the sale of abyss weed, it has become very hard to get. Obren fell victim to the plague two years ago and died refusing to pay the exorbitant  prices the merchants wanted for their abyss weed. He was a stubborn old man and, I suppose, more tight fisted than a he should have been. Anyway, his sons were much less frugal and had no idea of how to run the farms finances, that was all done by Obren. I tried to help where I could but without him the farm was unable to keep going.”

“Abyss weed, eh? You have heard, I suppose, about the king’s sally into the Standing Forest?” Davyn said.

“I have heard rumors. Letters from court gossips and such. I did not think that he would actually do such a thing.” Cadwallader replied. “Did he really try to enter the Fralken forest?”

“Yes, he did. Earl Sayfius had just come back from court with the news before I left Frields. He says King Mabon tried to claim lordship over the Standing Forest, saying that it was inside the borders of his Kingdom and his families personal holdings giving him twice the authority over the it.”

“And the Fralken ignored him.” Cadwallader said.

Davyn nodded. “They refused him any entrance at all, stopped him at their borders like they do to everyone else. From what Earl Sayfius said, he was fuming mad at that.”

“Yes, King Mabon would be, wouldn‘t he?. His pride will not let him stop pushing the edges of his authority, he thinks that nothing is forbidden him; raising taxes, making war with his neighbors, banishing nobles, and now this. The Fralken have always been a reclusive people, no one has entered between the trunks of the Standing Forest in living memory… or before. Our past Kings were forced to keep a good relationship with them because the Abyss weed grows only deep in their secluded haunts. Without our trade with them a quarter of the people of Angharad would die from the plague in just a few short years, with more to follow after.”

He sighed and shook his head in disgust.

“Well, at the end of all things, he is still the king. We need only concern ourselves with that which we are able to change. So tell me. How was Freilds?”

“More bad news from there, I’m afraid.” Davyn said wearily. “The orcs are acting strange. Reports are that they have been fleeing from the Eternal Mountains in droves, the patrols can barely keep up. Earl Sayfius says he has never seen them so violent and restless.”

“Well,” Cadwallader said. “Orcs have always been prone to mood swings. And of course they’re violent, what does Sayfius expect? Peace talks? By the stars! They’re orcs!”

“Father,” Davyn replied quietly. “they reached the inner villages.”

His Father paused at that. The Orcs had been held at the border for years. Low level skirmishes had been commonplace for centuries but never any major invasions large enough, or determined enough, to get past the patrols sent out from the Guardian Cities; Frields, Sayastan, and Wanspar.

When his father didn’t say anything Davyn continued to explain.

“The orcs haven’t gathered any large forces but their raiding parties have grown more and more frequent over the course of the winter. And they almost seemed desperate and frantic when I fought them; Like they really needed to get into Angharad.”

Cadwallader let that sink in a moment

“You fought them?” He asked.

“Yes.” Davyn said, sensing where this was going.

“You kill any?” Cadwallader asked.

“Yes.” Davyn answered tensely.

“With magic?”

Davyn didn’t say anything, but his face started to heat up, slightly ashamed at his father’s accusing tone of voice.

“My son the Wielder.” Cadwallader said scornfully.

“Most fathers would be proud to have their son chosen like I was.” Davyn said. “Most consider it a position of honor.”

“Bah!” His father said, angrily swiping his hand through the air, no longer bothering to disguise his disgust. “Fighting with magic is a coward’s way to do battle. No son of mine should be scared to face his opponent with a blade in hand.”

Davyn stood up quickly, so quickly that the movement sent his chair skidding noisily across the floor. Cadwallader’s good eye flickered toward the heavy oak chair as it hit a pillar twenty feet behind where Davyn stood, a good distance to throw such a hefty piece of furniture much less knock it back by simply standing.

“I am NOT afraid. I would, were it up to me, face my enemies with my blade instead, but a Wielder’s place in battle is where he can help the most.” Davyn said quietly, tightly controlled anger raging behind his tone.

“Behind the lines with the archers and the women?” Cadwallader shot back. “Yes true honor is found there. That is where the battle is best fought at. Had I known that I would have stayed there while we slaughtered the Arisians down south!”

Davyn struggled to keep his anger in check. From him, a blow struck out of anger wouldn’t just knock his father down, it would kill him.

But why? Why didn’t his father understand? Of course he wanted to fight at the front lines as his father had but it wasn‘t his choice to make, the patrol commanders had their orders, and in battle the Wielders always stayed back. As physically destructive as they could be in hand to hand combat it was no match to what they could do with magic and the concentration required to do magic meant they couldn‘t do both. Cadwallader had trained Davyn in combat since he could walk, he had hoped that Davyn would become a knight someday. They had practiced Sword fighting, horseback riding, archery, even wrestling, though it was considered to be a low form of fighting by the nobility. And neglected many of his other studies such as poetry, music and dance. But the baron’s expectations were shaken early on when Davyn showed a severe lack of talent in horsemanship. During times of peace the tourney matches were where knights gained stature and renown, and jousting, the preferred game of knights, required, above all else, superb horse riding skills. Nevertheless, Cadwallader’s hopes were not destroyed until the morning Davyn had awoke seemingly burning with fever and rambling about a man with fiery skin standing in a burning field. No one knew what was wrong with him at first, thought him mad with sickness, until he had set several curtains and a serving boy’s clothing on fire.

After that Davyn’s fate was fixed, the law required all wielders to be reported to the landholder or shirereave of the area, Davyn‘s father in this case. Then they were shipped off to the academy for military training and were required to serve in the army of the noble who‘s land they had been found on. A Wielder could be chosen by the spirits at as young as ten years of age but they were never older than twenty. They were taken by force, if necessary, from their parents to serve the kingdom.

This was no problem for Davyn who had always known he was destined for military service, as the son of a noble, but his father had been crushed. Enraged that his only son would not follow in his footsteps he had nearly defied the law and refused to send Davyn to the academy. In the end he had, however, he given up on Davyn and drowned himself in managing his estates, raising his odd daughter, and ale.

Davyn looked into Cadwallader’s eye and saw something he hadn’t before- Cadwallader’s eyes were glassy and he was sweating to much for the coolness of the castle air. He grimaced as a few things that had just happened suddenly made better sense.

“You’re drunk.” Davyn said almost sadly.

His father looked confused for a moment, then the anger seemed to drain out of him and he slumped back into his chair.

“It doesn’t matter.” He half-mumbled.

“No it doesn’t. Does it?” Davyn replied wearily. He scrubbed his face with one hand, blinked several times, as if to reorient himself. Then he abruptly started toward one of the doors heading deeper into the castle.

“Where are you going?” His father called after him. “We are not done yet.”

Davyn turned briefly to say, “I need to rest and to go say hello to Creia and grandfather. We can talk later about courts and nobles and kingdoms later, father, perhaps when you are sober.”

 

Chapter Three

          Davyn stood outside his old room. He ran his hand over the wooden boards of the door, which were held together tightly by two bolt studded bands of iron, one at the top and one at the bottom. It was not as old as the rest of the doors in the castle, though, the wood was comparably newer, not as grayed with age. He smiled a little as his fingers found familiar knots and dents. He had built this door himself; his father had made him do it as punishment for burning it down in the first place.

It was deep in the winter months when it happened. A blizzard had snowed them in. With nothing to occupy his time but trying to stay warm he had had decided to do just that. He smiled a little, remembering how hard it had been to work magic back then before he had gone to the academy. Concentration is very hard for a young man of fifteen; there were so many distractions, even in the eerie stillness created by a winter’s storm: wind rattled the windows, his hands were too cold, his nose was too runny. The more he tried the worse it got, the rattling became louder, the cold colder, and his nose ever wetter. He kept pausing to wipe it but then he had to start all over again. And then there was his father’s voice calling out to him to help haul firewood. His annoyance became irritation, then quickly developed into anger, rage followed closely on anger’s heels. Flash! Bang! Boom! The door was gone, in its place sat burning cinders and warped metal.

Davyn sighed and rolled his neck as he remembered his father’s wrath. The baron might care little for fancy decoration and pretty embellishments but that did not mean he did not like to keep things in their best shape. In this case, in any shape at all.

One good thing had come out of all that, he realized, his father had ordered him to remake every piece of the door himself with no help, and so he had. It had taken him many long hours, days, and weeks, but he forged the bolts, bands, handles, and hinges he needed, then he cut the timber for the boards. His step became lighter as he remembered those days he had spent in the smithy, with fire and iron all around him. The feel of it is his hands, the musical sound of metal ringing on metal, smelling it in his hair and clothing as he fell asleep at night.

Opening the door, he entered his room for the first time in three years. It was cleaned and dusted but otherwise unchanged, a warm feeling rose in him at the sight. He would never accuse his father of sentimentality so Davyn figured that his room was vacant and unused because its state of availability had been kept hidden from the baron. Cadwallader left the rooming arrangements to his housekeeper, Missus Idelle wife of      , but had he known they had an extra space he would have found a use for it. That was just the way he was.

There was not much to the room: a bed, a wardrobe, a desk with a chair. A locked chest sat in the corner near the window, which had been covered with a woven matt to keep out the winter snows. Davyn shivered a little as he realized how much this room resembled his father’s, both were austere and simple. Most boys of his age and status collected random items or decorated their rooms with useless frippery; they wore lace and silk and owned a suit for every day of the year. Davyn bought what he needed, only what was necessary to life, sometimes he made it himself if he knew how. He didn’t care to admit how much he and his father had in common

After dropping his packs on the bed, he made a circuit of the room. He opened the wardrobe and, finding it barren; he turned and wandered towards his desk. On the desk sat a few items he had left behind, a fresh candle, a quill pen, and a inkwell, probably dried up by now. He picked up the candle and fiddled with it a moment, then he took a breath and concentrated on the wick.

He had used a candle as a boy to practice his magic, failed attempt after failed attempt to light it had taught him a lesson, that lesson was “it isn’t as easy as it seems”. The concentration required to light the candle was as great as the concentration needed to start a bonfire. And with a child’s mind, which is as flighty as a bird, it was near impossible to focus solely on the wick and the flame.

But that was years ago.

Davyn reached for his magic, drawing it from that secret place where it hid within him, pulling it though that gateway hidden in the recesses of his mind. He felt its familiar warmth spread out from his chest, down his arm and into his fingers like a gentle caress. It did not heat his skin, however, nor was he actually any warmer than before; it was an internal heat, an ethereal one; it did not touch his body, only his soul.

The candle sputtered into flame, leaping up a few erratic inches before settling down to a steady burn. That magical warmth bled out of him like a receding tide as he released his hold on it, and was replaced by a surge of self-satisfaction. Silly though it may seem for a grown man in his twenties to feel so proud to accomplish something he failed to as a boy, Davyn could not keep himself from smiling.

(This chapter is unfinished :P . I’ll get to it later. Eventually.)

Categories: Fantasy Fiction.

The Eater of Flowers by Hades

December 6, 2011

A story I wrote last year, but never thought to post until now.

Welcome to the Growing Land. The sun is high, and the earth is rich. The Growing Land BLOOMS. Not just during the spring like the Bright Land or the Red Land, but year round. The trees drip flower petals like clouds drip rain. No matter the season, there are at least two dozen different types of blossoms you can name, and probably twice as many you can’t. Welcome to the Land of Constant Spring.

But where there is wealth, there also is greed. Meet the Eater of Flowers. The Eater of Flowers lives in a cave, and ventures out once a year on New Year’s Eve. The Eater of Flowers is ancient, so ancient, and so hungry for the people that live amongst the blooms and blossoms and endless garlands. So hungry.

Once a year, on the night before New Year’s Eve, the people of the Growing Land select the best of their youth: the strongest, cleverest, most promising young man or woman to face the Eater of Flowers. None had ever returned.

This year, it was Chess’s turn. He was not looking forward to it. The walk itself was enough to kill, he thought. The path wound up the mountain, up and up, and up, between the flowering trees and bushes. And at the top, there was the cave. He could see it now: dark, but glowing dimly with some faint illumination.

At fifty feet, the smell of was cloying. At twenty, it smothered. Now, at the very lip of the cave, Chess was positively retching from the reek of flowers. Sweet odors wafted from the cavern’s dark recesses. Holding a cloth to his face, Chess edged into the cave.   

Hello Chess, said the Eater of Flowers. I have been waiting for you a very long time. Suncycles. Mooncycles. And you are here, today. Chess didn’t say anything. Cat got your tongue? I had hoped for some conversation. Chess was too busy to respond. When you’re face-to-face with the legendary Enemy of Your People, it is hard to engage in witty banter. This wa especially true when you were trying to draw a dagger from your belt without being noticed.

“Er…”

Er? It purred in a voice like rose petals. Er? You are inarticulate, and that is displeasing. Put the dagger away. Just because I only have one eye does not mean that I cannot see.

Chess scowled. The dagger clattered to the cave’s floor. Good boy, Chess. I don’t like games. Unless, of course I win them. I am a poor loser, you know. But, that is of no consequence. Today, I want to talk about your future. More specifically, your future in the next five minutes. The Eater of Flowers straightened its great, tree-trunk legs, and took a step toward Chess. It was directly between him and the mouth of the cave. He could smell its breath, faintly scented with honeysuckle. You see, Chess, every time the Growing Land sends a champion to face me, the same thing happens. I crack open their bones and suck out their soul flowers. Do you think this will play out any differently, Chess?

Chess did.

“I do.” he said.

And why is that? the rose petal voice was very low and sweet. Above all, it was close. Chess took a breath. The smell of flowers was overwhelming.

“Because I am different.”

He ducked under the Cyclops’s arm, and hurtled out of the mouth of the cave. Chess wasn’t brave, but he certainly wasn’t an idiot. He ran away, down the mountain path, dooming the Growing Land to another fifty years of terror.

Chess changed his name to Dreufus Duckweed, grew a beard and moved away to the North. There, he won an inn in a game of dice, got married, had five kids, and lived to the ripe, old age of ninety-seven.

The End

Categories: Fantasy Fiction, Fiction, Short Stories, WORST.

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Rune, the novel Chapter Eleven

June 28, 2011

Days passed, in which
Taren, Wheatweeve, Casey, and I all roamed further and further from Intisa. The
August air was dry, and bitingly hot. We ripped the sleeves of our garments in
order to keep from cooking inside our clothes. Casey grew increasingly bad
tempered, grumbling that it was too hot, that we ought to try to head to
another settlement, and that we were getting nowhere. I told him, equally
angry, that we had no clue how to get to any of the other settlements, and to
stop being such a whiner. Before I could lose my temper and punch every inch of
his body black and blue, Taren did.

“YOU COMPLETE *Beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep!
WE ARE LUCKY TO BE ALIVE, THANKS TO SILAS, AND YOU STAND HERE
COMPLAINING ABOUT THE WHEATHER?!? YOU
HAVE BEEN OF ABSOLUTELY NO HELP
WHATSOEVER! JERK!!! BLGAHGOIVWJFYUUIHUHFUCKIGYIGYIHGHOIHV…

*Reader- Note that I
have made some words unintelligible. This is because I don’t want to print
these foul (and often unintelligible) terms.

At this point,
Taren’s screams became completely incoherent, and she began punching every
single inch of Casey’s body. To my surprise, I found myself subduing her. “We have to stick together,” I whispered
to her as I dragged her away from Casey, who was now bleeding at both the lip
and the nose, “I know Casey’s an annoying
little shit, but he’s
part of our group.”

Taren nodded, still
glaring ferociously at Casey. I was also surprised to find that this
altercation didn’t make me happy that Taren didn’t like Casey anymore. The
latter was sitting on the dry grass, bleeding and sniffling.  I once again shocked myself by sitting down
beside him.

“Look Casey,” I said,
putting my arm uncertainly on his shoulder. He shrugged it off, “I know that we
don’t seem to be getting anywhere. But, look at us! We’re still alive! And
we’ve been out here for days! That’s certainly a feat that few have
accomplished!”

My words seemed to
cheer Casey, for he stopped crying and gave me a watery smile. I was just in
the act of returning the grin when Wheatweeve exclaimed, “Silas!”

I leapt up, grabbing
my sword as I went. I turned around to find that Wheatweeve and Taren were
standing, swords drawn, looking in fear at a group of twelve very grubby, very
dangerous looking men that had surrounded our camp. Bandits. These were people who had been exiled for murder, torture,
and other brutal crimes. I knew this because they had D, a tattoo given to dangerous criminals, tattooed on their biceps
and because they were carrying some very nasty looking knives and swords.

“Well, well, well,”
said the bandit furthest to the right. I took him to be the leader. “What have
we here? Poor, lost, little children by the looks of it. Ah, and I see that you
have some nasty swords. Nasty little children, then.”

The man was garbed in
a dark brown coat that reached his calves. He wore several rings on his
spider-like fingers, and had stubble that covered much of his chin and cheeks.
His hair was long and blonde, but dirty. And his cold, grey eyes sparkled with
cruel amusement. This man is going to
kill us
, I thought, and nothing we do
is going to change that
.

“So children,” the
man said, chuckling, “May I ask who the leader of this bold group of adventurers
is?”

My companions all
looked at me, so I said, as bravely as I could muster, “I am. And may I ask who
you are?”

At this point, the
entire group of bandits roared with laughter. “Kid,” said the leader, “You are
asking who I am? You’re in no
position to-NO!”

For Casey had roared
angrily at their laughter and swung his sword. It slashed cleanly through the
skin of one of the bandits’ stomachs. He crumpled to the ground, moaning as a
dark stain appeared on his dirty, green shirt. We didn’t wait for his group’s
reaction. We bolted through the opening Casey had created. I grabbed Casey’s
shirt and dragged him with me, because he was staring in horror at what he had
done. Wheatweeve and Taren had grabbed the packs, but they had to carry two
each, and they were slowing down. I sped up, Casey now running along with me,
and grabbed a pack from Wheatweeve. Casey snatched a pack from Taren, and we
sped up as a group. The bandits were hot in pursuit, and they were gaining. The
packs were still slowing us down.

“DROP THE PACKS!” I
screamed to my companions.

“ARE YOU CRAZY? THESE
HAVE ALL OUR FOOD IN THEM!!!” Wheatweeve yelled back.

“WE’LL BE PLANT
FOOD IF WE DON’T, WHEATWEEVE!” Taren told my sister, tossing her pack behind
her. It hit the bandit in the front, and he toppled backwards.

Wheatweeve chucked
her bag behind her as well, grinning as she heard a satisfying “AAARGH!” from
behind us.

Then there was
nothing. No ground beneath us. In our haste to escape the bandits, we had run
off a cliff. Genius, I thought
sarcastically to myself, pure god damn
genius.
Then, we slammed into the densely packed foliage of the top of the
Greenblade forest.

You see, in less than
three weeks, we traveled a little under 100 miles. That is slow! We must have
been walking less than a ¼ mile every day! What were we, turtles? Of course, it
wasn’t like we were trying to go anywhere. Our main plan involved staying
alive.

Right. Back to the
story I’m supposed to be telling, in which we had just slammed into the
Greenblade forest.

I fell through
several branches, bruising myself up a bit on my way down, but landing fairly
gently on the ground, which was preferable to the alternative of being
splattered all the way up a tree.

I looked around. It
seemed like all of my friends were okay, so I dared to turn my eyes to the top
of the cliff. All of the bandits, except for their leader, were looking at the
place where we had fallen. The leader was looking right into my eyes and,
even-though there were trees obscuring me from his view. I could swear he saw
me. Apparently, he had, because he mouthed, I’m
going to kill you
plain as day.

Categories: Fantasy Fiction, Fiction, Inspirational Fiction, Must Reads.

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Dungeon prologue

May 25, 2011

The darkness is overwhelming. But what is worse is the silence. The lack of noise. Of emotion. Of anything. I am totally alone, without the comfort of even someone’s tortured scream. It has been days since the guard came down to feed me. As for water, I am forced to drink my own urine. It is pain, to be locked in a dungeon because you are different, not because you have committed a crime.

At last, a noise. A skittering, scuttling noise that would cause the flesh of any normal being to break out in goose-bumps. I laugh at it. It is a relief to know that there is something in this stone prison besides myself.

I am lying on the floor, my face pressed against the lukewarm rock. Something furry brushes my face. Its slightly scaly tail slides across my cheek. A rat. I have grown to love the rats in the dungeon, and I believe the feeling is mutual. I once heard that rats show affection by licking, as dogs do. I feel this rat’s tiny tongue upon my cheek for a heartbeat of a second. Now, my furry companion curls up near my neck. I reach my hand up and stroke it. Now, many more rats are climbing over me, like a warm (albeit slightly dirty) blanket. Many of them nestle near my neck as the first did, but the majority of them are curled in my large, leathery, batlike wings.

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Pomegranate- chapter 2

April 16, 2011

AUTHOR’S NOTE: I have been working on this chapter for WAAY TOO LOOONG! I’m a busy high schooler, so I guess that can be my excuse, if it can be accepted. :P Stupid-tupid homework. But I hope you enjoy! I think the first chapter came out well over a month ago… THE LONG-ANTICIPATED OR MAYBE NOT ACTUALLY ANTICIPATED AT ALL CHAPTER OF POMEGRANATE IS UNLEEEEEASHED! And now you can read it.

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The basement is pretty much my “evil lair.” It’s where I keep my books, sit and think, do homework, and keep a secret stash of pomegranates. They’re my favorite fruit, and have been ever since I tried one when I was three. The little cooler sits in the corner of the basement, which is just one room, and not really that big. Inside the cooler is a few ice packs and my stash. Pomegranate season is from about October to January. The unfortunate thing is that, once that time is over, they’re very hard to find. The other bad thing is that I constantly have to replenish my stash, because they’re so good that I continuously eat them. On the far wall, I have my desk, covered in various papers and books, laptop sitting slightly right of the center. The laptop, of course, is black, and a Dell. I hate Mac computers. Too many times have I put up with the loading wheel, or Spinny Wheel of Doom, whilst working at school, so I refuse to use a Mac anywhere else. Against the right-hand wall, concealing the cooler from view, is a bookcase which stands about four feet tall, four shelves inside it, each filled with books. Most of the books are science fiction. Some old school projects, such as a children’s book I wrote for Spanish class, were shoved in there as well. Along the top of the bookcase there are stacks of more books, not too tall so that they don’t topple. Besides that, there never was much else in the room, besides a lamp to the left of the desk and a beige carpet on the floor, just brown enough to not clash with the white walls. Of course, it was difficult to see the walls anyway, because they’re covered in posters. The posters were movies, books, authors, musicians, bands, and plays. I’m sure that, at some point, you could see more than a square foot total of the wall, but now that’s not exactly the case.

If ever I truly wished to quit school and live in a hole in the ground, perhaps with the dead people, for the rest of my maybe quite long life, it would have been the day Apollo destroyed my hope to ever be good enough to prove to my brothers that I could get Persephone’s attention, and that she wasn’t just some blonde (she was brown-haired, anyway) like Demeter (also brown-haired), who cared about nothing more than being pretty and smelling flowers.

Now, most would hope to believe that Apollo is a really cool guy. And sure, he is, but he’s also a not-very-cool guy. If there is one clique in the school he doesn’t like, it’s definitely ours, not that I would call us a clique. We’ll take nearly anyone. Apollo is strong, covered in muscles, on the football team (among others), an archery champion, a horseback rider and a general heart throb to most females: he is popular. All the teachers love him for no reason, and all the students love him for every reason.

But I don’t.

It was a Friday in mid-October, and the days were getting dark and the air was getting cold. I had missed the day before because I was sick, and thus missed a day of gym class. The teacher told me to come in after school, but I did not know that this meant watching basketball try-outs and then playing a little once the candidates went out to run a mile around the field. Nobody noticed me sitting on the bleachers until I stayed behind when they went out.

The teacher threw me a ball and headed into his office, while his assistant went outside to watch the kids trying out for the team. I, a non-athlete and a non-carer for the sport, half-tried to shoot some baskets. I did just enough to make sure the coach could hear me and think I was being a good boy in detention. And maybe just six minutes later, Apollo came into the gym, sweating just barely and sipping a water bottle. He spotted me and came over.

“What’s up, Hades? Trying out for the team? Were you late?” he asked, trying to start conversation.

“No, I’m here for detention.”

“Chewed gum?”

“I was sick. It’s not technically a detention, but I’m pretty sure it’s the same thing I’d be doing if it were one.”

He watched me shoot the ball and miss horribly. Apollo then went over to pick up the ball and throw it back to me.

Apollo was wearing a light blue wife beater and yellow basketball shorts. His golden hair caught the light in that godly way that lets you know he’s right up there with Zeus when you’re talking popularity. His muscles were smooth and if I didn’t live with Zeus my entire life, I would have been amazed muscles could get that big. But it was no longer all that impressive to me, until I looked down at my own stick-like arms. I was pathetic in comparison. I was pathetic without comparison! And the black ink on my fingers and palms, the black t-shirt and basketball shorts I wore for gym class purposes, and the somehow white hair on this teenager’s head, tips still black from the last time I tried dying it, just made me look even more pathetic. I had the appearance of an emo little boy. I wasn’t all that little, but in comparison to the men I lived with, I was nothing. Even Poseidon was cooler than me. Poseidon was on the swim team, and had some friends there. He even sometimes got women. Artemis called them nymphs, for she believed they were only on the swim team for the “sexy men” like Poseidon (I cannot bear to call my own brother sexy). She also had a theory that the girls only felt bad for him, for having a brother like me, and for being the out-shined younger brother of Zeus. So, in other words, I was nothing, when you looked at the people around me.

The man of hot muscles and popularity threw me the basketball. I did not catch it. It slipped between my hands and bounced away from me. I went to go get it, as two other boys came in, panting from the effort of running a mile. Who knew there was anyone almost as fast as Apollo?

“Hey, guys, want to play a quick game with me and Hades while we wait for the others to get back?” Apollo asked them with friendliness in his voice.

The boys looked me over skeptically, then agreed to play. Apollo would be on my team. The others would be their own.

Knowing nothing about the game of basketball, I was sure to lose us the match. My teammate scored all the baskets and never threw me the ball. I didn’t mind, of course, but it was mildly embarrassing. All these people I’d never known were now getting the first impression that I was a wimp and a loser, as they filed back into the gym one to three at a time.

Then the door to the gym opened and I saw that familiar light brown hair pass through the doorway, followed by the rest of her elegant body. She glanced my way, and I was trapped looking at her. She kept walking, though, to the gym teacher’s office. Persephone shifted her backpack to the table outside and opened up the outermost pocket, took out an envelope, re-zipped it, and went inside. I continued to watch the door. Apollo wasn’t about to pass me the ball, anyway…

But finally, without me even realizing it, the orange ball was rocketed towards me and I had only a second to react before it made contact with my chest and knocked me to the ground. I had only the time to say, “Wha–?”

All the boys trying out for basketball laughed. I could not understand why. Sure, I had fallen on the ground, but was there actually something to laugh at?

“Dude, are you okay?” one questioned me through a fit of laughter as I shakily tried to stand up.

I wanted to answer yes, but I didn’t speak. Apollo was laughing harder than the rest of them.

“I called heads up to you, Hades! What was that? You should join the comedy club,” he told me between chuckles of his dying fun. I was glaring in his direction. Comedy? Me? No. But that wasn’t what made me mad. I knew nothing about the rules of basketball, but it would certainly make sense to make sure that a person is making eye contact with you when you pass them the ball.

Deciding it was no use to attempt to send darkness across the court to him, I looked away, towards the coach’s office, to make sure Persephone hadn’t seen that. But she was watching from the doorway, and at just that moment the teacher appeared behind her. She turned to tell him what had happened, and the coach made his way over to us.

“What in blazes just happened, boys?” he fired at us all.

“Nothing, Coach, Hades just took a fall. It was nothing,” said one of the boys Apollo had asked to play with us.

Something about the coach’s expression made me believe that he knew it wasn’t true. Something hidden in his athletic clothing, behind where the whistle fell on his front, had a hunch that I didn’t just fall for no reason. A coach is supposed to install discipline in the boys and girls who make up his teams. But this teacher only taught me that, similarly to how I’ve had to learn this the hard way every year, nobody cares unless your head cracks open and your liver explodes on the pavement. ”Well, be more careful. We can’t afford injuries in the real games,” was his only response.

And with that, the gym teacher, complete with stupid mustache and disgustingly amazing fitness in his old age, headed off to his office.

“Jeez, Hades, you almost got us in trouble,” Apollo said to me, slapping me on the back. I looked up at his blizzard blue eyes, and I burned with hatred.

“You shouldn’t have passed to me if I wasn’t paying attention,” I tried to tell him, but he only might have heard me, as he turned to his buddies and said:

“What’s he even doing here, out in the sunlit areas of the school? Bohemians don’t play sports.” Mockery.

“I’m not artistic, and I told you I’m here because I missed class.”

Nobody heard me. I retreated to the bleachers, until try-outs were finished and we were all allowed to go into the locker room and change back into day clothes.

My locker opened smoothly on the sixth try, at which point most of the basketball boys were close to/fully naked and/or talking about how many girls they banged last night at the party to which I, fortunately, was never invited. In my efforts to keep the amount of male bodies I saw to a minimum, I tried to have myself facing a corner and keeping my eyes on the ground. When I was just poking my head through the hole at the top of my shirt, a big, strong hand came down on my shoulder.

“Hades!”

“Apollo.”

“Look, man, I wanted to talk about me passing you the ball earlier,” he attempted to start off coolly. I knew there was more to the story.

I turned to face him. “You mean, you want to talk about how you threw a ball at me in such a way that I would fall and get hurt.”

He didn’t seem to have actually listened to what I said, as he followed through with, “Yeah. Right. So. I’m sorry about that, man. You see, sometimes I get negligent of other people’s abilities, and my competitiveness kicks in.”

“I don’t really know where you’re going with this.”

After a few tries at hinting towards the direction he wanted the conversation to go, he just made a “whatever” face and moved on. “You saw that girl walk into the gym?”

Something set fire inside my chest, for just a fraction of a second. “Persephone, yeah.”

Apollo’s next words came out in a fluent, quick sentence that summed up the entire afternoon: “Yeah, keep your hands off her.”

“Excuse me?” Playing stupid can go either of two ways: The persecutor will drop the subject, or the persecutor will trudge onward.

“She’s just not into guys like you. It would end much better if you would just let her go on her way.”

“I don’t understand what you’re saying.”

“She could do much better.” Apollo’s eyes blazed with possessiveness as he closed in on me and added, “Like me.”

It was only then that I realized how the locker room was mostly empty, and in a minute or two we would be the only ones left.

He went on: “I just think that you should be going for someone more in your league. Maybe Artemis, or Hestia, would be good for you. I just don’t want to see you get your heart broken. You know, a man looking out for a man.”

I didn’t say anything back to him. In a hypothetical situation, I suppose I could settle for Artemis, but she was too tom boyish for me. I wanted something more feminine. But to stoop so low as Hestia would just be pathetic. And who was Apollo to tell me who I could and couldn’t like?

“You still don’t get what I’m saying?” I decided to play it smart and shake my head. He sighed, frustrated with me. How could he possibly be more blunt? “Persephone is into men who can protect her, men who can bring her places, someone a little taller, with a little more muscle– well, a lot more muscle — on his arms, a man who can prove himself in the world. You just aren’t any of those things. You gonna just have to… you know… beat it, never look at her again, and stay away at all costs.” His last words came at the same extreme speed as the summary sentence.

“That’s a blow to my self esteem,” I muttered.

“I wouldn’t lie to you.”

And with that, Apollo clapped me one more time on the shoulder, and left the locker room, calling back at me, “Just think about what I said, all right, Hades?”

Oh, yeah, I’d think about what he said. I’d think about it every night before I fell asleep, for the rest of forever, if I couldn’t help myself to do otherwise.

And this is why I believed my hopes to have been dropped, right where I had stood, in that locker room, and swept away by the janitor later in the evening. I was a useless, wimpy boy, who wasn’t good at sports, wasn’t good at art, wasn’t good at music, wasn’t good at video games, wasn’t good at girls. What was I ever going to do with myself?

Categories: Fantasy Fiction, Romance.

Fantasy no-name

April 7, 2011

I finally decided to try to write a fantasy/allegory… so, here it is :) .

(anyone have any suggestions for the title?)

Chapter One

            Tiny white crystals gracefully floated down, gently landing on her long, dark brunette hair. Closing her eyes, she could feel crisp flakes dancing on her long lashes, some kissing her cheek. She felt a strong, cool whisper brush her curls past her face, sending shivers down her spine. Even in the serenity of the moment, she had an eerie feeling about her- the trees shook, as if mocking her uncertainty.

            She pulled her knees in closer to her chest, hoping this feeble attempt to loosen Jack Frost’s hold would allow a few moments more to herself. Looking around, she could see only a world of white surrounding her. While the tiny bits of snow looked so harmless falling from the sky, they quickly united with each other to engulf everything in sight. While their beauty was undeniable, the fact was overshadowed by the reality and deception she knew to be hiding behind their harmless appearances.

            Looking up towards the heavens she could see the sun was almost reaching the end of its course for the day. She wished she could sit here in this spot awhile longer, but she knew she must get back to the gates before sundark. In all reality, it was against the law to be out here at all; but she went against a lot of what their law said, because it just didn’t make sense to her. Technically, it wasn’t even her law to obey anyway- it was her parent’s. They’re the ones who accepted the so-called “gift”, and had their names written in the “book”. And while she didn’t blame her parents for what they did, she wasn’t about to make the same choices without first exploring all the options. She wasn’t ready to give up her freedom simply to gain a few benefits; benefits she wasn’t even sure existed.

            Looking up again, she knew she had better get going… while she held no doubt that she’d have just enough time to make it back before dark, she didn’t want to take any unnecessary chances. After standing up, and shaking out her skirts, she began her walk back home. Though she had stayed out late before, she had never once stayed out this late, and the way the dark trees swayed made her nervous. Hearing an own hoot, as if in a warning, she began to pick up her pace. Though she knew that there would still be a few moments more of sunlight, walking through the trees dimmed what light was left and made it very difficult to see.

            She heard a twig snap behind her, and her heart began pounding. Looking behind her, she thought she saw a figure duck behind a bush. With panic quickly overtaking her, she began to run. Faster and faster she began running down the crooked path back to her home. The path seemed windier and bumpier than usual, though that could’ve just been the darkness and fright she felt distorting her judgments- unless her previous judgments were distorted to begin with. She looked behind her again, but was surprisingly relieved to find nothing there. She slowed to a stop, and paused for a moment to listen for footsteps… nothing. She heaved a sigh and continued, walking cautiously the rest of the way to the gates. Though she felt safer, she by no means felt completely safe in itself.

            Once out of the forest, she felt a bit more confident. It was no longer dark, though the sunset in the East held little promise of light, as it was slowly sinking into the horizon. Its white rays were sending a pink glow over the land in an attempt to let their glory be known for a few moments longer; soon they would have no chance to shine their radiance until the next day.

            The peace she received from watching the sunset had quelled the anxiousness she was feeling only moments before. Although she kept walking, her eyes were fixed on the amazing sight before her. She walked a few more steps, but suddenly tripped on a rock she hadn’t seen in her path. That stone wasn’t there before, or, at least she hadn’t remembered it being there before. She sat there for a moment, confused, as a sense of urgency beginning to sweep over her. The sun had just completely gone down, and she was left there, in the dark. She had to get back to the gate. She scrambled back up, shook off her skirts, and continued once again walking as quickly as she could without falling on another almost imperceptible obstacle.

She kept walking, and soon was able to see the gate. No longer fearful of any hindrances, she broke into a run as relief and excitement filled her. But, about a Ques from the gate, she stopped in her tracks as she thought she heard something… a voice, saying, “Come. Come unto me…” She looked around, fearful that someone had caught her on this side of the gate; but seeing no one, she quietly entered, closing the heavy iron behind her, with an indescribable heaviness pressing on her heart.

***

“Did you really do it, Enna? Were you really in the White Forest after sundark?” Eager eyes were glowing at her with a hint of disbelief.

“Of course I did. Why would anyone lie about such a thing?” Enna replied with satisfaction.

“Why would anyone be ignorant enough to attempt such a thing?” Samia added under her breath, barely audible. Enna sent her a glare across the room.

“Well, I think that’s a very brave thing to do, Enna.” Jeremy was entranced with the thought of breaking not only the law, but breaking it after dark. Everyone had ventured out to the White Forest  at one time or another, some farther in than others, but not many people  had gone in after dark, and had come back to tell about it. Jeremy, like Enna, was always pining for adventure, while Samia was the most… cautious of the group. She had never ventured farther than a Ques into the White Forest, and even when she did, she went right to the Tri- and told him about it. No one it their right mind would do that! Whenever Enna went into the White Forest, she always did her best to be sure that no one knew… well, no one except for Jeremy and Samia. But to tell anyone- especially the Tri- that was just asking for trouble!

“You really shouldn’t be out there at all… especially at night you know, Enna.” Samia said in an almost reprimanding tone. Just because Samia was seventeen, two years older than either she or Jeremy, she thought she knew everything. Or, maybe it was her “gift” rather than age that was causing her to assume authority.

“Mia, may I remind you that Enna and I are not the only ones who go to the White Forest.”

Samia looked as if she’d just gotten hit in the face. She looked down, then replied in a hoarse whisper, “And I’m sorry I have, but that still doesn’t make it right.”

Jeremy ignored the statement, and went on, “Were you scared?”

Samia hesitated. “Yes… at one point, but you haven’t heard the worst part yet.”

“Really?! What’s that?”

Enna cast Samia a sideways glace. Maybe she shouldn’t have said anything…

“Well…?” Jeremy could never be left out in any of the excitement.

“I…I think I saw a Sholka.” Jeremy gasped, and the cup that Samia had been holding fell to the floor, shattering to pieces. Silence.

“Are… are you sure?” Samia asked cautiously, head spinning. She wasn’t really sure she wanted to hear the answer.

“Well, it certainly wasn’t one of us, and I don’t know who else would’ve been out there that time of night.” No one said anything, so Enna went on, “But, it’s fine, really. I’m still here; I made it back just fine…” She was not only saying this for Samia and Jeremy, but also for her own sake.

Samia turned and began walking toward the door. Enna grabbed her hand. “Wait, Mia, where are you going?” Her heart began pounding; surely she wouldn’t go tell someone. Samia was her best friend; she would never turn her back on her, would she? Sure their relationship had been a bit… stressed since Samia had chosen to get the “gift” a few years ago, but they were still friends nonetheless.

While breaking free of Enna’s grasp Mia replied, “I need to take a walk to the Trante.”

Enna gasped. Not only was Mia going to tell someone, but she was going to the Tri! “No, please, Mia, you’re not going to tell are you?”

Samia looked back, and hesitated before answering, “No, I’m not going to tell… that’s something you’re going to have to do on your own.”

And with that, she was gone.

***

Enna walked along the bank of the river that ran through the southern part of Plinndyfta, their town. She had planned to go back to the White Forest, but something led her here instead. She picked up a rock, and threw it as hard as she could into the river, hoping that some of her anger may go with the rock, sinking into the depths of the cool blue water, never to be seen again. But who was she angry at? Was it really only anger she was feeling?

Enna left the riverbank and walked to a tree. She began climbing it, its limbs seeming not as far from the ground as they had seemed when she was younger. This was the place she and Mia used to come to often. Those times had been ones that she’d never forget; some of the best days of her life had been spent here with Samia. But, alas, those days were gone…

Just as she finished climbing the tree, she saw someone also walking along the bank of the river. She looked to see who he was, but she didn’t recognize this person… if that’s what he was. He seemed to have all the human qualities, but there was something different about him. She sat in the tree, quiet, immoveable, hardly breathing.

“Come. Come to me…” She heard the strange voice again. Enna looked around, but saw no one other than the stranger. Surely he didn’t say that! But, who then? She felt goosebumps rise on her cool skin; but she knew those goosebumps had nothing to do with the temperature.

She continued watching him, perplexed by his appearance. What did she find so strange about him? The answer was simple: nothing, but everything, at the same time. Suddenly he began walking toward her. He gave no indication that he knew she was there, yet he seemed to be seeking her out specifically. She began to get nervous, and wondered what she should do.

 “Jennifer.” Enna jumped. No one had ever used her given name. She didn’t even think many people knew it- let alone a stranger! “Jennifer, come down. Walk with me.” He was looking right at her. His majestic voice was soft and calm, yet he spoke in such a commanding tone, she didn’t dare disobey.

Enna scrambled down from the tree limb, and walked to the stranger, less than a Ques away. “How… how do you know me?” She asked somewhat sheepishly.

“I don’t just know who you are, Jennifer, I know everything about you.” She looked up, startled. He went on, as a flicker of sadness crossed his face. “But you do not know me.”

She stared at him, completely perplexed. “H- how? Who are you?” She felt oddly uncomfortable as if he could see right through her eyes into her heart. She felt he could somehow see all her secrets she went to such pains to hide. Who was this person? How could he know her, but she not know him?

“Peace, my child.” He said, as if he knew just how she was feeling; as if saying those three words could somehow help calm her anxiousness. But, the funny thing is- it did.  As he said that, she saw brilliant, shining sandals appear on his feet. But as quickly as she saw them, they disappeared again.

“Why did you come here, my child? Is it hurt that I see in your eyes?”

How could she tell him, when she didn’t even know him? Yet, he knew her. Could she trust him? For an inexplicable reason she yearned to tell him everything: her secrets, her desires, her fears, and frustrations… but how could she? Where was she to begin?

She opened her mouth, but no words came. She was humbled in his presence. Who was he? She shook her head and a tear trickled down her cheek. He lifted her head so that she would be looking right at him. “Who do you think that I am?” He asked.

“I… I don’t know.” Was her meek reply. What else was she to say?

“I am.” She looked at him, puzzled. He went on, “One day you will realize who I am. Your eyes will be opened, and you will wander no more.” But she was confused… how could that be possible? She saw at that moment, however, a string, belt, appear that was unlike any she had seen before. But again, just as quickly as it appeared, it was gone.

            “Jennifer, the war is raging. Be on your guard.”

            “What war? Plinndyfta has had nothing but peace for years!” She shook her head… he must be a stranger indeed- from a faraway land.

            “Looks are deceptive… be on your guard.” Was his soft reply.

            She nodded, not sure of what else she should say. He continued to hold her gaze for a few moments more, and then he walked away. Bewildered, Enna just stood there, staring. A few minutes passed before she was able to convince her feet to carry her home.

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Rune: the novel, Chapter Ten

March 2, 2011

Long grass whispered around our legs. It was nearly dawn, and a pale glow was beginning to creep over the horizon. We had been walking near Intisa’s wall for several hours. Wheatweeve had decided that it would be best if we stayed close to the colony, where Nightmares ventured less frequently. We had enough food to last us for up to two months, once again thanks to my amazing sister.

The minutes dragged on. I thought about my mother, and if she was awake yet. In her stupor, would she still notice that both her son and her daughter were gone?

 Taren and Casey stuck close together, but Taren would not return the arm Casey put around her shoulder. When I saw Casey’s arm slung around her shoulder, I could hardly contain my rage. I cursed several of the foulest words that have ever darkened the face of this planet (and, for that matter, probably any other as well) and resumed pacing.

At five o’clock, the morning went from infuriating to terrifying. Taren had extricated herself from Casey’s nefarious clutches when we heard it. Whoosh! At first we thought it was the wind. Then we realized that there was no breeze. What then, was making that noise?

Whoooosh! The sound was louder now, closer. The noise was beginning to frighten me now. I looked at the hills, and my fear turned to terror. Nightmares were swarming over the hills once again. The black smoke tore through the grass at breakneck speed. They were just as horrible as when they had fed on Douglas.

The others stood, paralyzed with fear. No help, I thought, angrily. It was up to me.

“Everyone, follow me!” I screamed at my companions. The nightmares were hurtling towards us. A few more seconds, and we would be fed on. “RUN!!!” I enforced, beginning to dash towards the gates myself. Taren, Wheatweeve, and Casey all raced after me, dropping their swords in order to lighten their load. I did the same, tossing my weapon aside and diving under the arch in front of the gate. No sooner had my companions joined me than the nightmares arrived. For one horrifying moment, I thought my plan had failed. But then the nightmares hit Mage’s protection that was in front of Intisa’s wall, and disintegrated.

We lay before the gate, panting. Taren lay slumped on the ground, and, for a split second, I thought she had been fed on. But then I saw her chest heaving, and I breathed a sigh of relief. Casey and Wheatweeve lay in similar condition. I was no better, lying on my stomach, my feet uncomfortably wedged into the gate.

“Oi, outcasts!”

It was the guard captain standing behind the gate. He looked much braver now that there were metal bars and a thick wall in between us.

“If I see you four within fourty miles of here again, I’ll get the guards to chuck you to the nightmares!”

So, exhuasted, and still panting, we picked up our swords and set out to the west.

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Rune, the novel: Chapter Nine

February 24, 2011

The morning came all too quickly. After my speech, Leader had decided that it would be better if I was locked up for the rest of the day. I had been moved to Casey’s cell, and Casey, to my annoyance, had been moved in with Taren.

Throughout my last night in Intisa, I lay awake. The day’s events played themselves over in my head. I had undermined Leader’s athority, I had seen myself on a wanted poster, and I had spoken to the entire colony. Whoa. So much had happened in that day, it was a shock when I realized that I was about to be exiled.

The guards woke Taren, Casey, and I at three o’clock in the morning. We were greeted by”Rise and shine convicts!” before being dragged from our cells. I was shackled in between Taren and Casey, and I was glad to see that the two weren’t exchanging lovey dovey looks anymore. Being dragged out of a prison cell at three in the morning can work wonders. My spirits were relatively high until we reached the gate, which brought me back to our dire situation.

The guards unshackled us, but kept their swords pointed towards us. I found this fairly ridiculous.  They were five heavily armed, hugely muscular men, worrying that they would be overpowered by three pre-teens of average strength with no weapons. I allowed myself an inward chuckle.

A sixth guard began to open the gate. I thought about the certain death that was past that gate. I thought about the family I would be leaving behind.

“WAIT!!!” screamed a voice from behind us.

I spun around. Wheatweeve was standing there, holding a wicked looking set of four swords and looking like she was ready to kill somebody.

“THAT’S MY BROTHER YOU’RE SENDING TO DEATH!” Wheatweeve roared, so loudly that the guards flinched. “SO UNLESS YOU ALL WANT TO LOSE YOUR HEADS, YOU’RE GONNA LET ME GO WITH HIM!”

The guards nodded vigorously, mumbling, “Of course ma’am” and “No problem”. Wheatweeve came to stand beside me.

“Why do you want to come with us?” I whispered. “And where did you get those swords?”

“As for your first question,” Wheatweeve responded, “I can’t just let my dumb younger brother go out to be killed by himself. As for your second, I stole these swords from the armory. Smashed the window to get in.” At this point, my annoying, mean, obnoxious, amazing older sister grinned. I couldn’t help but smiling too. It had taken me getting exiled, but Wheatweeve and I were finally getting along.

“Does Mom know where you are?” I asked.

The grin faded from my sister’s face. “No. She’s in some kind of shock. Been that way since she saw you in the prison. I sent her over to see Mage. Speaking of whom,” Wheatweeve pulled an amulet from a rucksack slung over her shoulder, “he told me to give you this. Said it will help.”

Reluctantly, I took the gift. I still blamed Mage above all others for Whetstone’s death, but I needed all the help I could get. I clipped the amulet around my neck. The stone on it was sapphire ringed with gold. The metal felt warm against my chest.

“Cool,” I said to Wheatweeve, “Thanks.”

“Okay you…you rats,” the guard captain said shakily, “You get out of the colony.”  He saw the looks on our faces and our raised swords. “Please?” he added hopefully.

We would have resisted, but just then, more guards arrived, and we had no choice but to exit our home. The gate clanged shut behind us, sealing our foursome from our home.

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Rune :Part Two: Chapter Eight

January 25, 2011

The crowd stared at me, dumbfounded. A prisoner?!? Speak against Leader?!? It was unheard of.

A guard unchained me and shoved me to the podium. Leader glared at me and stepped back. I gulped. What was I going to say? What was I thinking? My brains found no words, but evidently my mouth did.

“When I was nine,” I began, my voice rang out,  incredibly loud, “My brother was killed by nightmares. Mage gave him a sword that could supposedly kill nightmares.” I saw Mage in the back of the crowd. His bald head gleamed in the morning sunlight. From within the wrinkles that comprised his  face shone his misty green eyes. Somehow, those blind eyes seemed to watch me more intently than all of the functioning ones that also gazed at me.

“The sword didn’t work,” I pressed on, “Whetstone was fed on by the nightmares. After that, the tribunal stopped trying to defeat the nightmares. But, I continued! I, a nine year old boy, continued trying to defeat the nightmares!”

Leader looked like he was ready to bite my head off. He probably would have too, but that would have looked bad in front of a crowd.

“‘Why?’, you might ask. Why did you keep trying, when the attempt to kill the nightmares killed your brother?”  The crowd was hanging on my every word now. “IT IS BECUASE MY BROTHER DIED THAT I CONTINUE TO FIGHT!” I was yelling now, and no one would have dared stop me, “AND IT IS BECAUSE DOUGLAS’S FATHER DIED THAT HE FOUGHT TOO! WE ARE CHILDREN, YET WE ARE THE ONLY ONES TRYING TO FIGHT AGAINST THE CREATURES THAT THREATEN OUR EXISTENCE! AND, EVEN IF YOU DO EXILE ME, I INTEND TO KEEP FIGHTING! I WILL FIGHT UNTIL VICTORY IS OURS, OR UNTIL I DROP DEAD!!!”

The crowd went berserk. They screamed and clapped, they hooted and hollered, they did everything they could to show their appreciation for me. Leader whispered an order to a guard, who began dragging me away from the podium. But, I had one more thing to say.

“YOU MAY TAKE WHAT IS MINE, LEADER! BUT, I WILL NEVER LET THE NIGHTMARES TAKE WHAT IS INTISA’S!”

Then, the guard chained me to Taren, and we were ushered back to the dungeon, amidst the cheers of the crowd.

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Rune, the novel: Chapter Seven

January 14, 2011

The next day was the day before Taren and I would be exiled, and it held a surprise for us. The guard came into our cell block. “You two,” he said to us, “And you, next door.  Leader wants you three to come out to the square. He said that he wants you to see something that will be ‘good for you’.

We were ushered out of our cells and out of the cell block. The person next door turned out to be a curly haired boy. I assumed that he was probably the boy who had gone over the wall with Taren. He had very tan skin, a prominent chin, black hair that fell in thick curls, and electric blue eyes. Numerous cuts adorned his arms. Apparently, he hadn’t gone over the wall and come back unscathed.

By observing their behaviour, I discovered that there was probably a little more between this boy and Taren than just being friends. They looked into eachothers’ eyes often, then smiling, half laughing, and looking in the other direction. These little glances were making me inexplicably irritated. It was like I wasn’t there, being shoved roughly alongside Taren.

To my relief, we soon reached the square. Leader was standing on a podium near the fountain, his grey hair shining in the early light. Taren saw something and gasped, squeezing my arm, hard. “What?” I inquired, though I wasn’t exactly frustrated about that squeeze.

“That,” she replied, pointing. On a signpost near the fountain, there were two posters. One had Taren and the curly haired moron’s- I mean boy’s- faces on them. Under each face was a name.

Taren Willow                    and                      Casey Johnson

To Be Exiled For Wall Jumping and Third Degree Murder

On another signpost was a poster with my face on it.

Silas Harrif 

To Be Exiled For Wall Jumping, Treason, And Third Degree Murder

I’ll bet they just tacked on treason to make me look worse!” I whispered furiously. 

The guard said, “SHUT IT, CONVICT!” very loudly, and shoved Taren, Jerk-face- I mean- Casey, and I up on the podium behind Leader. Another guard shackled us together insuring that, as he put it, “THERE WON’T BE NO FUNNY BUSINESS!”

I ’started to notice’ that the guards seemed to like to shout. I was about to say something witty like, ‘My, aren’t you polite!’ but Leader began to speak to the crowd.

“People!” he said in a loud, resounding voice, “We are gathered here today, not only to speak about the loss of my nephew, Douglas, but also to speak about a issue which has been creeping into Intisa like a plague of locusts. I’M TALKING ABOUT WALL JUMPING!”

 At this, the entire crowd gasped. Taren and Casey scooted a little bit closer together.

“If there’s anybody here, people,  ANYBODY HERE WHO WANTS TO TALK OUT AGAINST ME, I WILL HERE THEM. BUT FIRST, I CHALLENGE THEM THIS! I CHALLENGE THEM TO ASK THEMSELVES, WHY? WHY DO I SPEAK OUT WHEN THESE CRIMINALS BEHIND ME,” he gestured to us, “COULD BE TARGETING YOUR CHILD NEXT! YOUR CHILD COULD BE THE NEXT ONE TAKEN OVER THE WALL TO BE FED ON BY THE NIGHTMARES! So,” he said, calming down, “If there’s anybody here who wants to speak against me, do so now.”

No one spoke. Taren and Casey were holding onto eachother, terrified of Leader. The crowd was deathly still.

“I will.” I said as loudly as I could, “I will speak against you.”

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Rune, the novel: chapter six(hey peeps. sorry to keep you hanging. i’ve been pretty busy lately.)

January 13, 2011

I lay in my cell, staring up at the ceiling. Taren was now in court, being tried for similar reasons to me. She and a boy had gone across the wall with her older sister. Her sister never came back.

In the hours when I lay there, alone, I thought about my mother. I thought about how I hadn’t called her that for years. I thought about Wheatweeve, and how I had been so short with her. True, she was obnoxious, but still. I was so deep in my musings, I jumped nearly five feet when Taren returned. To her credit, she was very quiet. Then again, that was probably because she had just been told that she had been exiled.

“Didn’t mean to shock you,” she said halfheartedly.

“Bad news as well?” I asked her.

“What do you think?”

The sarcasm made me chuckle, although there was nothing amusing about the situation. I probably needed something to laugh about, after all that had happend in the last 24 hours. Evidently, so did Taren, because she began to giggle as well. Soon, we were laughing up a storm. We would have kept howling with laughter, but a guard came in and told us to “quit acting mad!”

“And you,” growled the guard, pointing at me, ” You’ve got a visitor!”

I nodded, glumly. I knew who it would be. I just didn’t want to have to face her.

Taren was hancuffed and escorted out of one door. My mother slouched in through another. She was much paler than when I had seen her a day ago. There were dark circles around here eyes, which were bloodshot from crying. Her hair, which was usually a sleek, pure black, was now tarnished with bits of dirt and grime. My mother took one look at me, and burst into tears.

“Mom-” I began, not knowing what to say.  She looked at me, and uttered one word. “Son.”  Then, she fainted. She didn’t look like she could have taken much more. A guard dragged her out leaving me alone, stricken.

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Rune: the novel, chapter five

December 15, 2010

“You there!”

The guard’s voice jolts me from my muesings. For the past hour, I had been sitting on the wall, drinking in the horrible truth. Douglas was dead. He had gone down fighting, yes, but still, dead. My resolve to kill nightmares had become more prominent than ever. These beasts had taken my father, my brother, and now my best friend. But, all of these thoughts vanished when I saw the guard. The truth was devilishly simple. It was against the laws of  Intisa to go past the wall after dark. I was an outlaw.

And then, another painful fact hit me like a boulder from a rockslide. Douglas’s uncle was on the tribunal. And his nephew had been fed on because of me.

Terrified, I tried to run. My legs were windmills, spinning full throttle. But, I wasn’t fast enough. One of the guards threw a stun charm at me. Curse Mage,I thought as electricity crackled up my spine, He killed my brother with by giving him that dud of a sword. Now his damn invention has gotten me arrested.

~*~

I woke up in a dank, cold room. The smell of mildew crept into my lungs, making me gag. My body ached all over. I tried to swear under my breath, but no words came out. Of course. Mage’s charm had side effects. With a stupendous effort, I lifted my head off the itchy pillow it lay on, I wanted confirmation that I was where I thought I was.

 Grey walls loomed all around me, and steel bars surrounded me. I can’t believe it. I’m in one of the high security vaults.

Someone else was in the cell. A girl, sitting on a cot, gazing at me intently. She had brown hair and brown eyes, and she was wearing a tattered looking grey dress. Her ears were slightly pointed, and her skin was a lightish tan. But, what really intrigued me about this girl was her expression. She was smiling. It was unbelievable! This girl was in a prison cell, for god’s sake! Why was she smiling?

Not that I was complaining about that smile, for it was the most beautiful I had ever seen, and it was directed at me.

 ”Hi.”

Hi?!? I was talking to the most beautiful girl in the world, and all I could say was ‘hi’?

Fortunately, she didn’t seem to care.

“Hi,” she responded. “I don’t get much company down here. Especially famous company.”

“Famous?” I asked.

“Oh, I forgot. You’ve been out for the past ten hours. Your the talk of the entire colony! You went across the wall with-”

Yeah,” I said, “With Douglas.”

There was silence for a moment. At last, the girl spoke again.

“Sorry.” She sounded like she meant it. “Sore subject. By the way, I’m Taren. Taren Willow.”

I would have kept talking to Taren Willow, but at that moment, a guard walked in.

“Alright, pretty boy,” he said, “It’s time to drag your butt to the tribunal.”

~*~

 I was shoved roughly into a chair. Famous? More like infamous.

Douglas’s uncle glowered down at me. Beside him sat two other people: a muscular black man, and a pencil thin old woman.

“This trial is now in sesion,” boomed Douglas’s uncle, Leader, “Silas Harrif, twelve years old, as of today?”

“Yes,” I responded.

“You are accused of wall-jumping and third degree murder. How plead you?”

I thought about my answer. I could say no and be discovered as a liar, or I could say yes and face the consequences. Pfft! So much for choices.

“Guilty.”

The crowd, who I hadn’t noticed before, gasped. I looked at them. My mother and sister were in the front row. Mother’s eyes were red from crying. Wheatweave was trying to hold back tears.

“Silence!” shouted the black man. “The tribunal must now decide on the punishment of said induvidual!”

The crowd went silent as the tribunal whispered. At last, Leader spoke.

“All in favor of public service say ‘I”.”

“I!” said the black man.

“All in favor of exile, coming into effect in three days, say “I’!”

“I!” Leader and the old woman chorused.

I hung my head. Exile is the same thing as execution. No one survives past the wall for long. Not with the nightmares out there.

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Pomegranate– chapter 1

December 4, 2010

Okay, so, I thought it would be really fun if I could depict all the Greek gods and stuff as high schoolers, and put all the myths into just drama-filled stories (mostly because I’m pretty much inspirationless at the moment and I NEED something to WRITE!!!). So… I just want to see what you all think of my first attempt at one of the stories. Y’see, I’ve been drawing pictures of some of the gods and goddesses and thinking of cute little quirks they could have, and I eventually want to make this into a comic, because I think it would be better if it were a comic, rather than a story, but anyway… I’m starting off with the story of Persephone and Hades (By the way, I realized that there is a user on here named Hades. It is a mere coincidence that I want to post a story about Hades on here, where there is somebody called Hades. Also, I seem to have noticed a trend recently where people have these really creepy, dark names… Skullduggery… Hades… Flame… How much happened during the time that I was gone???)! I decided to do this because it seemed like a really cute story, if portrayed correctly… so, here we go!

PERSEPHONE AND HADES (not the WE user) :P

I was sitting at a lunch table with my brother Poseidon, Hermes, and Artemis, eating a peanut butter and jelly sandwich when I saw her. She was pretty, all right. She was really pretty. Her hair was light brown and fell halfway down her back, and down her forehead, too, almost touching her eyes, which were a deep shade of green. She was sitting at the same table as Demeter, my brother Zeus’s ex-girlfriend, with whom I just never got along well. She was into sunshine and daisies, and I was into fire and books about zombies. She hung out with the Honor Role girls who wore dresses and heels and were perfect, and I hung out with the outcasts, the formerly popular, the stoners (though I never did drugs or alcohol, myself), and the depressed poets. There weren’t a lot of us, so all those adjectives overlapped one another on the different students in our group. Demeter and I were pretty different, and I had no idea what Zeus ever saw in her. But, hey, she wasn’t my girlfriend, so I didn’t need to like her.

Now, if this beautiful girl was sitting with Demeter, what made her stand out to me? What made her any different? What made her any good? Was it the way that she clumsily tripped over the handle of her bag when trying to get up, that I thought cute? Was it the way she only had three fingernails painted (they were green, for the record, and it was her middle, ring, and pinkie fingers) on each hand, that made her stick out as an individual? All I know is that we locked eyes for a moment, and the whole world stopped. My heart skipped a beat, my hand slipped on my carton of milk, and I spilled all over the table.

I broke away my gaze from her when I heard, “Hades!” explode from Poseidon’s mouth. I stood up immediately and looked around desperately for napkins.

“Napkins are over by the food, H,” Artemis told me sourly, while trying to get her English homework to safety and her backpack out from under the waterfall of milk running off the edge of the table.

“Right,” I said, and silently searched my brain to remember which direction to go for the food and napkins. Man, the cafeteria was huge, to compensate for the giant student population at Olympus High. It was my first year there, and it had only been a week, so I was still getting acquainted with my surroundings.

Then I realized that, in order to get to the food, I would have to walk past the table with Demeter and the pretty girl.

“What’s with you, H? Get going. This milk isn’t going to dry up itself!” Artemis prodded me in the side.

I internally shook myself into awareness. “Don’t cry over it; I’m going.”

So, I made my way, squeezing between chairs and tables and dodging the occasional piece of garbage on the ground, over to the food area. Along the way, I made sure to take a detour, so I’d be as far away from Demeter’s table as possible. I was already embarrassed enough. I didn’t want any more eye contact with anybody, especially that girl. Unfortunately, avoiding her table involved walking by Zeus’ and Dionysus’ and the rest of their crew’s table. I avoided looking at them as well, and, luckily, they didn’t notice me. But I could feel the eyes of my friends on me, probably wondering why I was taking such a long route.

By the time I’d gotten back with an enormous stack of napkins and an extremely embarrassed face, most of the milk had fallen off the table and onto the ground, and had almost soaked my backpack. Artemis had moved it to where hers was, though, so it was okay. Poseidon was eying me suspiciously, though.

“Why’d you slip up there, H? I’ve never seen you drop a drink before,” he questioned me.

“I wasn’t paying attention.” It wasn’t really a lie; I just didn’t tell him the reason why.

Nobody interrogated me any further, as we cleaned up the mess and threw out all the saturated napkins. We continued lunch almost as if nothing had happened.

“So, who’s that girl sitting at Demeter’s table?” I asked during a break in conversation.

“The one in the pink flower dress?” Poseidon asked. We knew every other girl there. They had all dated our brother.

I confirmed.

“That’s Persephone. She’s new, immediately abducted by Hera and the gang.” Hera was Zeus’ current girlfriend, the one he’d had for the longest, even though he’d cheated on her several times. Somehow, she still loved him. “You know, she’s in your grade. She lives near Athens Pizza.”

“Why do you know where she lives?” Artemis inquired.

“Hera was telling Zeus about her when I saw them walk into the house last night. I didn’t hear much past that, ’cause they were making their way up to his room. I’m no stalker, and I know my place in this school. I wouldn’t mix groups.”

“Fair enough.”

So, here’s what I knew about her: Her name was Persephone, she was beautiful, and she was friends with a bunch of people pretty much the opposite of me. What was I trying to do?

+   +   +

Poseidon and Zeus always took the bus home, but I usually had things to do after school, like extra help with the math teacher, or just doing homework in the library. You know, it was just to be out of the house for longer. I was always about decent at math, but sometimes there was just a concept around which I couldn’t wrap my mind, no matter how hard I tried during class. Mr. Makshee is never awake for the morning classes, thus he never can teach well in the morning, so, when we have math in the beginning of the day, that’s when I know it’s an extra help day. That day was a media center day, though.

For some odd reason, when I entered through the big wooden doors, there were very few people in the media center. Usually, it was populated by at least fifty kids, plus the kids coming from detentions, who would later appear. I took a vacant table near the mythology section and slung my backpack onto the ground, sat in a chair, unzipped the largest compartment and took out my bio binder. I flipped open to the homework and took a pencil from my pocket. It was getting blunt– really blunt. It was almost time to sharpen it again. After digging around for a minute or so in my backpack for the sharpener, I started to turn the pencil around and around, watching shavings accumulate in the clear green plastic compartment. Assuming I was done, I pulled it out.

The tip had broken off in the sharpener. This happened every so often. I rolled my eyes, moving the pencil back in the general direction of the hole in the top…

Only to stab myself when I locked eyes with Persephone again. Oh, come on! I thought.

This just could not continue to happen.

+   +   +

“Hey, Cerena, Berry, Russel,” I said, tossing each little fluffy black dog a treat as they greeted me at the front hallway when I arrived at home.

“What about me?” Poseidon called from the kitchen.

“Hey, Poser.”

“Funny.” He was being sarcastic.

“Is Hades home?” I heard Zeus saying, his footsteps echoing off the kitchen floor. He’d just walked through the archway.

“Yeah,” I answered.

I rounded the corner into the kitchen to see Poseidon, sitting with his feet on the table, reading the science section of the newspaper, and Zeus opening the cabinet, pulling out a bowl.

“So,” Zeus started, “Hera tells me you had a horrific accident today at lunch.”

“A-ha-ha, not as funny as you wish it were,” I told him.

“However, it was just as horrific as she said it was,” Poseidon mumbled, “It was quite weird, though. What made you do that, H?”

“I lost my grip,” I avoided telling him the full truth.

“Well, obviously,” the two of them said simultaneously.

I struggled in vain for just a little while longer, trying other barely-related reasons, until I had to say, “I locked eyes with a cute girl.”

My brothers made noises of approval, then stopped abruptly when Zeus asked, “Who?”

“I don’t know,” I lied. This would only have been the truth if I had kept myself from asking her name.

“Yeah, you do,” Poseidon contradicted me. Unfortunately, it runs in the family to be a good lie detector.

“Well, I don’t know her. I know who she is. She’s new, I think.”

They were silent, so I turned around to face them after a few seconds, only to realize that they were staring at me, expecting a name. I sighed, defeated.

“Her name is Persephone,” I let out.

“Persephone!” Zeus erupted into laughter: mockery. I knew this would happen. “Excuse me,” he said after calming himself slightly, “I think I misheard you. You can’t have meant to say Persephone’s name. Perhaps you meant Hestia, or someone.” Everyone in the school knew that Hestia was the least interesting girl around, from here to Mars. All she did all day was bake. And, while baking is cool, she just didn’t care about anything else, kept to herself, and nobody invited her anywhere, nobody talked about her.

“I do not mean Hestia.”

“So you seriously had context when you asked about her at lunch?” Poseidon asked me, smirking.

“Sure. Whatever. Fine.”

“That’s the stupidest thing I’ve ever heard. You don’t want to get to know Persephone.”

“Why shouldn’t I?”

“She’s popular. You’re not. She likes flowers. You like punk rock. She wears dresses. You wear a spiky collar. You’re as different as Heaven and Hell. Respectively.” I guess I did give off the look of the lord of Hell… on bad days. “But most of all, she’s Demeter’s underling.”

“Underling?” I’d never heard the term before.

“You know: a new kid she’s decided to take under her wing. Whatever the case, you need to forget about her. She’s no good for you, especially if she’s Demeter’s. Demeter’s a drama queen, and, if she keeps Persephone, then she’ll be a clone– a copy –of her. She’s going to be a second Demeter.”

Zeus looked bitter, as if contemplating whether or not to stand up for his ex. I sat down at the table and started tracing circles with my right-hand fore-finger, Poseidon looked back to the newspaper, and Zeus continued to the refrigerator, took out some salsa. The conversation was tensely deteriorating.

As the eldest opened a bag of chips, he stopped, as though still pensive about what Poseidon had said regarding Demeter. He clearly still thought she was beautiful– likable, even.

“She’s not that bad.”

Poseidon looked up over the newspaper, and I stopped tracing circles on the table. “Huh? Who?”

“Demeter. She’s not horrible.”

“I didn’t say she’s horrible. I said she’s not someone Poseidon wants to get to know.”

“I don’t want to get to know her,” I said.

“I know. I said that. And also you don’t want to get mixed up with Persephone.”

I didn’t argue. This would probably pass.

“And anyway, what are you doing defending her?” Poseidon egged him on. This was a game he played often. It was fun to watch Zeus struggle to figure out which girl he loved the most. Well, it was that way for Poseidon. I did not enjoy this game. “You guys aren’t dating anymore. Won’t Hera get mad about this? Tsk, tsk, no bed for you tonight.”

“It’s not like you have someone to brag about, Poseidon!” Zeus broke. “I get all the girls that you don’t. Isn’t that hilarious? Hilarious.” This happened a lot. “So suck it.

With that, Zeus left the room with his chips and salsa, and I resumed my circles, and Poseidon resumed reading. At this point, as these conversations had happened like this for at least two years, there was no discussion afterwards, no “you shouldn’t do that because he really doesn’t like it,” no real regrets on his side, or mine, really.

“So… this Persephone girl. Don’t chase after her. Put as much distance between you two as possible. If you don’t make an ocean between you two, then I’ll do it myself. And I don’t mean an Indian Ocean; I mean a Pacific Ocean. I don’t want this to get ugly,” Poseidon warned me.

I didn’t answer. He took that as a yes. I really just didn’t want to agree to it.

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Rune: the novel, Chapter Four

October 30, 2010

 At last, it was 11:50. I was relieved, because all night I had been thinking about Wheetweeve’s words. Mother needed a son. Instead, she got a fanatic. Over and over these words played themselves in my mind.

I crept out of the house, shutting the door as quietly as I could. I sprinted along the cobbled path that led to the statue of Leonard Bernstein. All of the lights were out in the houses. Good, I thought, no distractions. Then, distractions came flooding into my mind like a tidal wave.

I began to think about Mother, and how I hadn’t called her that in almost three years. I thought of Wheatweeve, and how I hadn’t talked to her unless I had to ever! And then, I thought about someone I hadn’t thought about since I was nine. I thought about myself. I watched myself sit in the wheat field on the day my brother was fedon. I saw Whetstone show me the Dreamblade, then walk through the gate. I viewed the Nightmares swarming around him. I watched as his sword did no good. I saw my nine-year-old self scream as Whetstone was cloaked in darkness. I remembered howling like a wounded animal as my brother’s body fell to the ground, soul gone.

I arrived ten minutes late. Douglas was pacing around, looking anxious. When he saw me, he ran to my side and whispered, “Where were you?!? You’re ten minutes late!”

“Sorry, I responded, Got held up. Listen, do you think this is a good idea? I mean, we could be fed on!”

“It’s a great idea! C’mon, let’s do it!”

We clambered up the guards’ ladders. Douglas carried the rucksack. I carried the rope. Slowly, we climbed nearer and nearer to the top. All the while, the two sides of my brain were locked in a battle of wits. Don’t go, said the reasonable side, One of you is going to be fed on!

Go ahead! said the other side, This is what you’ve been waiting for! A chance to stick it to the Nightmares!

What about Douglas?said my conscience, Do you want him to get fed on?!?

He’ll be fine, crooned my ego, He wants to go, remember!

By the time Douglas and I reached the top of the wall, my ego had won the brain battle. I was convinced that the plan would see us through. However, all went wrong within seconds.

I tied one end of the rope to a battlement on the wall, throwing the other into the darkness on the other side. “I’ll go first,” I said confidently. Douglas nodded. Carefully, I swung myself onto the rope. I swung side to side, but the strands of fiber held firm, keeping me from falling and injuring myself. Sighing with relief, I began to shimmey down the rope.

In a matter of minutes, I reached the bottom. “IT’S OK!,” I shouted up to Douglas, “YOU CAN COME DOWN NOW!”

Douglas was about half way down the rope when his hands slipped. He flew away from the wall, and landed with a sickening THUD! in the wheat field. “DOUGLAS!” I screamed, and ran to find my fallen friend.

“I’m al-OUCH-right,” said Douglas, who, despite his words, did not sound in the least bit alright.I found my friend lying on one side in the wheat. His leg was twisted at such an odd angle, it had to be broken. “Oh man,” I said, noticing how crooked Douglas’s broken leg was, “Man, I’m so sorry.”

“No-OUCH-problem. Let’s just get out of-oh gods NO!” my friend screamed.

I looked. Gliding over the hills were nightmares in all of the hideous forms they could take. Skeletons danced, werewolves howled, but, most of all, there was just the dark mist that nightmares became when they wished to move fast. The moment when I would face the nightmares had arrived and I was totally unprepared.

I tried to drag Douglas at first. But, he was too heavy. He outweighed me by several pounds. I tried toget him to stand. He managed to raise himself a couple of inches off the ground before falling back down.

I tried to think of a solution. Nothing came to mind. Then, Douglas said something that would haunt me for the rest of my life. “Go,” he said, “If you try to save me, we’ll both be fed on.”

“No way. No way I’m leaving you to die,” I said.

“There’s no other way,” my good, faithful, and only friend Douglas said.

Then, he used his last bit of strength to turn and face the wave of nightmares. “BRING IT!!!” were the last words I heard Douglas say before I was forced to turn and climb up the rope. By the time I reached the top of the wall, and turned to see what had become of Douglas, it was too late. The nightmares had enveloped him.

I didn’t cry. I couldn’t cry. I was beyond grief. I had no more friends. I was useless. And, worst of all, Wheatweeve had been right. I wasn’t a good son. I wasn’t even a good friend. I was just a revenge obsessed fanatic. And now, I didn’t even have douglas to confide in. I just sat on that wall, dreading the dawn.

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Rune: the novel, Chapter Three

October 28, 2010

Night, we had decided, was the perfect time to carry out our plan. The guards would have gone home, leaving the protective enchantments to sheild Intisa from the Nightmares. The enchantments kept the Nightmares out, but they didn’t keep people in. Douglas and I would meet at the statue of Leonard Bernson, Intisa’s first mayor at midnight, then climb up the ladders onto the wall. We would use rope to help us climb back down into the wheat field. I knew that today was my turn to to go to Market to get eggs, and I began to form a plan.

After my encounter with Douglas that morning, I returned home. I was very polite to Wheatweeve, and even called Silk ‘Mother’.

“What has gotten into you young man?” she asked, “Are you up to something?”

“No Mother,” I responded.

Silk went back to the kitchen, eyes brimming with tears. “Mother,” she whispered to herself,”My boy’s finally calling me Mother.” I glared at her when she turned her back. You killed Whetstone, I thought, You all killed Whetstone.

Wheatweeve was annoyed. “But,” she complained, “You’re supposed to be brooding and rude! Now you’re….Nice! Where’s the fun in THAT?!?”

I just smiled politly at her.

A couple of minutes later, Silk asked me to run to Market and get some eggs. She gave me enough newly sewn garments to trade for something for myself. I thanked her and ran off to Market.

I bought the eggs, as promised. Then, I went over to Twinemaster. He was selling thread, fishing line, and most importantly, rope.

“I’ve got a nice, warm shirt and some wollen, your size, that I’m willing to trade for ten feet of rope,” I said.

Twinemaster raised his eyebrows. “Ten feet?” the burly man said, “That’s a lot of rope yer gettin’ there. What’re ya plannin’ on usin’ so much fer?”

“An experiment,” I said, ” Me and my friend are trying to measure the height of his house.”

“Fine then,” grunted Twinemaster, “Do whatcha want to do.”

He handed me ten feet of sturdy looking rope. I thanked him, put it in my rucksack, and began walking towards home.

“Boys these days,” I heard Twinemaster grumble, “Doing experiments and suchn’t. In my day, we solved problems with our fists not with our blasted brains!”

~*~

I gave the eggs to Silk when I got home. When she asked what I had gotten for myself, I told her that I had bought a wooden sword. “He’s finally acting like a child,” Silk said as I walked up the stairs, “He’s finally having fun.”

An hour passed. I continued my goody-two shoes act, trying to please both Silk and Wheeteweeve. At one point, I almost gave myself away. I was packing my rucksack with the essentials Douglas and I would need for the night. As I was stuffing a long, sharp knife in, Wheetweeve opened my bedroom door.n I barely had time to shove the dagger in and close my rucksack.

“What is it?” I asked her.

Wheetweeve scowled. “You know exactly  what it is, Mr. ‘I’m-so-perfect’. I know you’re up to something! I will find out!”

“I’m not up to anything.”

“Really?!? Then, say that it wasn’t Mother’s falt that Whetstone died!”

I almost shouted then. I wanted to scream in her face, say “IT WAS HER FALT! IT WAS BOTH YOUR FALTS!” Instead I said, as calmly I could, “It wasn’t Mother’s falt that W-Whetstone died.”

My voice wavered a little bit when I said my brother’s name. But, Wheatweeve didn’t notice. “FINE,” she said, “Maybe you have gotten over his death. But, I still don’t forgive you for all these years you’ve been moping. Mother needed a son after Whetstone died. Instead, she got a FANATIC!”

Then, she stormed out of the room, leaving me shaken and, to my own surprise, weeping.

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Rune:the novel Chapter Two

October 28, 2010

“Hello Mr. Jordon! Stopping by for some light reading?” joked Librarian. This had been a running joke for ever since my brother was fed on. It had happened by accident. After I had seen Whetstone step towards the three nightmares, try to kill them, and fail, I went straight to the library, desperate for knowlage that would help me kill the nightmares. ‘In for some light reading?’ Librarian had asked.

“Yes, of course I am,” I replied.

I went to my usual corner of the library and began searching for books. All of the volumes I had already read were there, as well as a new title. It was a book called, Nightmares; Everything We Know, by Reedy Melspike. I gasped. An author without a true name! Why, this book must be from the East, from the city of Gadorous! Maybe they know things there that we don’t!

I left the library disappointed. More of the same. Nightmares can’t be killed. Don’t waste your life. I refused to believe it. There has to be a way to kill nightmares, I thoght, Has to be!

“SILAS! HEY!”

I turned to see my friend Douglas running towards me. He had black, bristly hair, was short and squat, and had arms that spun like a windmill when he ran. His dark skin seemed even darker today, for clouds swirled ominously in the sky.

“Hey…Silas,” my friend panted, “I…get…my true…name tomorrow. They hinted that…it might…be Harvester! All because my dad was a baker! It sucks!”

“Well,” I said, “the only way you’ll get a couragous true name is if you do something heroic.”

“Like what?”

“You know old Mrs. Jackson?” I asked.

“Yeah,” Douglas replied.

“Well, some idiots took her broach and threw it way out into the wheat field beyond the wall.”

“So you mean…” Douglas said, in awe.

“Yes. I mean we go past the boundaries to get it.”

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Rune:the novel: Part One: Chapter One

September 29, 2010

Chapter One

“Silas! Get up!” called my sister, Wheatweeve.

I didn’t respond. I had been awake for hours, though neither she nor mother knew it. I had been, as I had been for every day since Whetstone was fed on, researching the nightmares. I had borrowed several heavy volumes from Librarian. The one I was currently reading was called Shadowy Beasts and How to Slay Them. It was more of the same. The section an nightmares said:

Nightmares are the darkest of demons. They are unfixed manifestations, impossible to kill. Those who plan to slay them shouldn’t waste their lives. There is no chance of survival.

Nonsense, I thought, if Whetstone thought there was a way to kill them, there is a way to kill them.

“SILAS! GET UP!!!” screamed Wheatweeve.

“Allright! I’m coming!” I bellowed, equally as loud.

Twenty minutes passed, and I was still in my room. Reading. Trying to find a way to end the constant threat. To my world. To my family.

~*~

After another five minutes, and no more luck than the last two years, I came downstairs. A hot bowl of porridge sat steaming on the table. Another thing that seemed to be steaming in the kitchen was Wheatweeve. Sixteen and allready controling the family kitchen, she looked down at me, glowering.

“Well,” she said in her ‘I’m in charge and you are going to do what I say’ voice, “Why were you upstairs so long?”

“None of your business.”

“Now,” reprimanded Wheatweeve, “Is that anyway for someone who’s about to get their true name to act? For goodness sakes. Your twelfth birthday is in three days. Act like it!”

“Where’s Silk?” I asked.

“At the market. And why won’t you start calling her mother?”

“Because she was the one who agreed to let Whetstone go to Mage and get the sword,” I told her for the thousandth time.

Wheatweeve sighed and went to clean the dishes. I sat down at the breakfast table and at the porridge, Then, I left our house and set off for the library.

 

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Rune: the novel

September 29, 2010

Prologue

A whisper of wind, blowing through the wheat. A fence. A black cloud of nightmares. An ordinary day in the colony of Intisa.

I lay in the wheat field, gazing up at the endless grey of the sky. Something had to be done about these otherworldly beasts. Yet, nothing could be done. They were indistructible.

“Little brother,” said a voice behind me, and I sat up and looked around.

Whetstone was standing behind me, smiling his broad smile. He was six feet tall, with huge muscles and a kindly face. Someday I hoped to look like him. But for now, I was a gangly nine year old with stringy brown hair. But, it was the thing Whetstone was holding that shocked me. It was a blue, glowing sword.

“What’s that?” I asked.

“Why, this is a dreamblade Silas. It’s supposed to kill nightmares. Mage made it.”

“Wow! Have you tried it yet?” I exclaimed.

“That’s what I’m about to do. Wish me luck!” Whetstone responded.

“Good luck!”

That was the last time I ever saw my older brother alive.

 

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Chapter Three (To Break a Writer’s Rule)

September 8, 2010

Author’s note: For any of those who don’t know what this story is, just search:

Prologue (To Break a Writer’s Rule)

Chapter One (To Break a Writer’s Rule)

Chapter Two (To Break a Writer’s Rule)

This chapter needs some work (really, Myth, we couldn’t have figured that out on our own . . . :D ) but I hope y’all enjoy it! Ttfn, people! ~Myth

“Your name is Serenity Barton, no?” the more sinister of the two men asked.

“Yes,” I croaked. What was going on?!

“”I told you we had the right girl!” one of the men cried triumphantly. “But no, stupid Ren doesn’t know anything.”

“Kindly shut up, Ren. As you can see I’m interrogating our prisoner,” the first man said, barely keep a lid on his great annoyance. Had the situation not been so perilous I might have found their conversation humorous.

But all thoughts of humor quickly fled as the first man looked back at me. His gaze seemed to bore a hole through me.

“And in your world you write stories, no?” the man said, his voice low and cold once more.

“Yes,” I say again. WHAT ON EARTH IS HAPPENING?! I screamed inwardly.
His gaze turned completely and utterly contemptuous. “I’ve waited a long time to get my hands on you. Too long.”

I swallowed against the fear rising in my throat. “I . . . I don’t understand. Please, just l-let me go!”

The man smiled evilly. “Oh, no, I can’t be letting you go. You see, I need you for something.” He leaned even closer, breathing his disgustingly hot breath in my face.

I could feel a hysterical scream bubbling up inside me. This isn’t real, I thought over and over.

He drew back a little. “You, wench, are going to finish our story, or you are going to die.”

I gaped. This was so absurd. A character from one of my stories was actually threatening to kill me if I didn’t finish the story. “I . . . what?” I said, still too afraid and shocked to say much else.

“You are going to finish writing this story, and you are going to do it how I tell you to,” he said. “Because if you don’t you will regret it.”

Suddenly it dawned on me that I knew who this man was. He had a long, white scar over his eye . . . he was one of the main villains of my story. My story. A villain I had invented. I gaped again.

“How daft are you?” he shouted in my face when I didn’t reply. “Do you understand what I said or do you need some help from my dagger?” He pressed its tip to my throat and I was quickly pulled from my reverie.

My heart pounding in my chest, I said, “You’re going to kill me either way, so why should I?” I tried to sound brave but I failed quite terribly.

“Oh, no. The first one I’ll go for is the one dearest to your heart,” he said softly, smiling evilly once more.

Mama! I cried out in my mind. I suddenly forgot the blade at my throat, beginning to growl, “If you harm one hair on her head—”

“You’ll what? You’re helpless,” he said. His face portrayed the fact that he knew he had won, and that made me feel feel furious and sick.

“You’ve seen what we did to you, getting you in here, and you know that we can do something to your mother if we so wish it.” He said it like it was one of the most common things in the world. “So what will it be, wench? Can you really live with the knowledge that your mother died because you refused to do as I commanded?”

I was suddenly filled with a great, burning urge to kill him. The hate in my heart shocked me – I had never felt such hate before. I wanted to rip the dagger from his hands and stab it over and over into his body.

My contempt must have shown in my eyes because he laughed in my face. “Don’t like the thought of that, do you?” he taunted.

“If you touch her I will kill you,” I said, my voice low and cold now. “I will KILL YOU!

He grabbed me by the throat and squeezed. I began to cough and sputter, the room beginning to spin and tumble and shake and do every other thing it should not be doing. The edges of my vision turned black.

His face turned red with rage and he squeezed my throat until I had nearly lost consciousness. Then, suddenly, he let go. “Ren, summon the sorcerer.”
“B-but, Vannuur, he’s – ”

“NOW!” he roared. Ren hurried from the room as I coughed and gagged, sucking in all the air my throbbing lungs would allow.

Still full of rage, Vannuur slapped me across the face. “This will teach you,” he said. “This will teach you not to play games with me.”

Fear gripped my heart. He was going to do something to Mama, I just knew it.

“Please, no!” I tried to say, but all that came out was a weak croak.
I was ignored, and after what seemed an eternity (during which I had to fight hard to stay conscious) Ren returned, looking white-faced.

Suddenly something else occurred to me. Vannuur had said “sorcerer”.

Sorcerer.

The word pounded through my head over and over.  Details of the greatest villain in my story came flooding back to me. Fezra Whitemoan. Most powerful sorcerer the land had ever known. Couldn’t be stopped by any. Only one way to defeat him, a way I hadn’t yet written down because I hadn’t yet thought one up.

Ren was followed by a tall man in a dark, hooded cloak. His face was hidden in shadows, and the parts of his skin I could see were utterly white.
“You summoned me?” he said. His voice was soft and deep, and I suddenly started to shiver. His very presence made the room turn icy cold. Just like I described him, I thought in wonder.

“The girl here needs some . . . encouragement . . . to do something for me,” Vannuur said, trying to stay calm and coy though it was obvious he was petrified of Fezra.

Fezra turned his head toward me. I felt even colder.

He walked slowly toward me, never once turning his gaze away. Though I couldn’t see his eyes I could feel them. It was like he was looking inside me, and I shuddered again.

“Serenity Barton,” he said slowly in his soft, deep, void-of-emotion voice. “Watch and see what consequences those who do not obey receive.”
He made a large circular motion with his hand then in the air, and suddenly I could see an image of my mother. She was sitting at our kitchen table crying, no doubt because she was sure I was gone forever.

Fezra arched one finger . . . and suddenly Mama was writhing in her chair, her mouth open in an inaudible scream.

“STOP!” I shrieked. “I’ll do anything you ask!”

“Do you swear it?” Vannuur said, triumph in his voice as always.

“I swear it!” I cried. “Anything!”  Vannuur smiled, disgustingly satisfied. My mother stopped writhing to grip the table and pant, and the image of her began to fade. Tears coursed down my cheeks as I shook, grief and pain ripping at my insides like a living thing with claws.

“Very good,” he said, smiling once more. He turned to Fezra. “That will be all.”

Fezra inclined his head before walking slowly out of the room, his shoes not even making any noise as they hit the stone floor.

Tears still running down my cheeks I swore in my heart to do everything in my power to kill Vannuur and Fezra.

“Fenn, take her to her lovely ‘sleeping quarters’,” Vannuur said, smirking.

Fenn laughed before (none too gently) untying me from the chair and dragging me off.

We went down so many twisting corridors that I quickly stopped trying to figure out what direction we were going in, and then we were at the top of a long, dark staircase. A foul smell blew up the stairs, and my heart did a flip-flop as I noticed how very dark it looked at the bottom of them.

Even Fenn seemed nervous as he grabbed a torch and forced me to walk down the stairs, my head pounding so hard I was amazed I stayed upright. The smell got worse as we went, and the thick, unmoving air more suffocating. I felt like I couldn’t breathe.

We walked for awhile until we came to a huge stone door, in front of which stood two armed men.

“Vannuur says she’s to go in the dungeon overnight,” Fenn said. One of the men before us talked through the metal grate in the door.

“Open up; we’ve got a guest,” he said, grinning to his companion.

With what seemed quite an effort the door was pushed open from the other side.

I froze, petrified by fear. But for the light coming from a few torches, it was utterly pitch black in there.

Fenn started to walk forward, stopping and looking back when he realized I wasn’t moving.

“Let’s go,” he said, yanking my arm.

I dug in my heels and shook my head. “No,” I said. “Please. Just let me go.” I had no idea why I was asking him such a thing; I already knew I wouldn’t be let go. But for some reason I felt I had to ask it.

The men around me laughed and I burned with shame. “I said let’s go,” Fenn said, at last succeeding in dragging me forward.

As we went in and I found us at the top of another set of stone stairs, thick, choking fear seemed to squeeze my lungs. I couldn’t breathe. There wasn’t enough air. It was too dark.

I could hear the door grating shut behind us, and I knew that once it closed my freedom was gone.

I struggled, trying to yank my arm away from Fenn and run back—run out the doors before they closed completely—but he kept a tight hold on me. Stopping he struck me in the face, growling, “If you try anything like that again you’ll pay dearly for it.”

I let myself be dragged along then, squeezing my eyes shut and hoping with all of my heart that once I opened them I would find myself back home in my bed—I would find this had all been a dream.

I opened my eyes.

Great darkness still surrounded me, and there was still an iron grip on me. I was still being dragged forward to what I knew was going to be some terrible fate . . .

And there was nothing I could do to stop it.

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Cathedral by Skullduggery

September 7, 2010

Thousands of years passed, swirling around me like a mist. Yet I was nigh on oblivious to the passage of time. I was a dream creature, and I loved my new life. I made dreams, I entered dreams, and I battled nightmares. This was truly what I wanted most. I was living my dream. Literally. But, at times it was not fun, nor was it easy. Once, I had to battle a creature so powerful it could almost be called a god. This is the story.

I was drifting through the blue mist of subconscious thought that connects dreams, enjoying the ride. I loved the warm, tingling sensation that the thoughts gave my form. My purple, transparent arms were propping my head up. I was so content. I’m invincible, I thought, I cannot die. I am Rune.

Then, I noticed something odd. One of the dreamgates was not its usual blue, but red. I had to investigate. I passed through the shimmering light and into a dream.

As always, I returned to a human form in the dream. It comforts the dreamer. Makes me seem more relatable. I sent part of my consciousness to patrol the dreamweb. The rest remained in this dream, in the form of a warrior with a blue broadsword and a huge shield.

 I scanned my surroundings. I was in an ancient city, with crumbling buildings and a huge cathedral in the distance. The sky was bright blue, with a blazing sun in the sky. Something in my mind told me that I wouldn’t find anything in the city. I had to go to the cathedral.

As I walked through the seemingly deserted city, I sensed movement. Some creature darted between two buildings. It moved so fast, I didn’t get a chance to see what it was. All that I saw was that it was grey. A grey blur, nothing more. I moved into the deserted square where I had sensed the thing. I needed to know what it was.

Immediately, I was attacked. From all four sides came hideously deformed creatures. They might have been human once, but now they were just featureless, wrinkled, grey skin. No eyes, ears, nothing. They moved like the wind, hitting me so hard and so fast I barely had time to think. I knew I could no longer be this bulky warrior. I changed into a man with black sun glasses, a trench coat, and black hair. He had been in someone’s dream. In the dream, he moved so fast that you could barely see him. I became that man then. I became the one known as Neo.

Neo (or should I say I) flipped, kicked, and punched, keeping pace with the beasts. My arms hit their heads, going through them as if they weren’t there. No blood spilled, and they began to reform as soon as I had felled them. As I watched the creatures reform, I realized that these things were made of clay!

Clay! What hardens clay? Heat! I morphed again. I became a huge ball of flame. My heat hardened the ghastly creations at once. But, I didn’t have time to admire my handiwork. I changed form again. I became a runner, sprinting towards the cathedral. Something told me that the clock was ticking.

As soon as I reached the cathedral, I once again changed. I became Spider-Man and crawled up the wall of the cathedral. I noticed that there were no windows. Odd. Cathedrals almost always had windows in dreams. I shot a web to an inside wall and swung in. This was easy, because this character appeared in many dreams, especially those of young boys.

When I landed in the cathedral, I immediately noticed a problem. The dreamer was a magician. And, by the sound of the incantation, they were a necromancer. They were doing a dream summons, which meant that whatever they were calling on was extremely old, and extremely powerful.

I became a mouse and skittered up to the altar, where the magician stood. They were a woman, with black hair and black robes. Her eyes were closed, and she was saying, “Come Niktare, creature of the dark. Come to me, take the dreamweb. Nightmares to roam free again, one called Rune disposed of.”

I shuddered. This necromancer was summoning Niktare, the dark god from exile to destroy me and free the nightmares. I called on the rest of my consciousness that had been patrolling the dreamweb. I would need all of the strength I could get if I had to face Niktare. Morphing into the warrior I had been earlier, I spun around.

And was slammed into the far wall. I came up thinking fast… But not fast enough. A fist the size of one of the pews hit me. I flew back towards the wall, but this time I was ready. I kicked off the wall and rolled, morphing as I went. I was Neo, I was Spider-Man, I was a ninja, anything and everything I had ever been, desperate to confuse the dark god. The blows ceased. I got to my feet, once again as the warrior and got my first good look at Niktare.

He was 12 feet tall, in a humanoid form. His muscles were like boulders. His skin was black as midnight and he had two, glowing blue eyes. He wore a black cloak that covered most of his face.

So,” he said in a voice like a rockslide, “You are Rune. Pathetic. You won’t even be amusing to crush. Ah well. If I must kill you to rise again, I will. Goodbye little spirit.”

Then, he morphed. He looked like a nightmare. Cloaked with blue eyes. But, his aura glowed like black flame. He shot fire at me. I ducked. He sent bands of shadow towards me. I glowed. Niktare laughed. “Goodnight,” he said, and the dream went pitch black.

Niktare had killed the light. I couldn’t see a thing, then- WHAM! He hit me. I flew back through the wall, outside. I could tell I was not in the cathedral because of the air. It had changed. Quickly, I morphed into an angel. I held a golden sword that glowed.

Niktare came flying at me. He now looked like one of the clay creatures, only black. As he reached for me, I swung my sword. It sliced through him, splitting him in half. Niktare fell to the ground. The light returned. I thought I had won. I was wrong.

Niktare turned to smoke. He began to fly away. Why? He could beat me, surely. My answer came quickly. The dreamgate! Niktare was going to poison the dreamweb!

I was a rocket, speeding towards the smoke that had almost reached the dreamgate. Too slow. Niktare floated into the dreamweb. I had to follow.

In the dreamweb, chaos had already broke loose. Some of the blue mist of subconscious thought had caught flame. This would case the innocent dreamers to go mad. I flew towards the malevolent flames. That was where Niktare was. I was sure.

I reached the fire. Heat seared my essence. But, I didn’t care. All I cared about was finding Niktare. And, sure enough, a black garbed figure was floating amidst the flame. He was laughing, enjoying the madness that would come from this. ENJOYING IT! I couldn’t take it. Concentrating all of my hatred into one concentrated burst of magic, I slammed Niktare out of the dreamweb. His laughter changed to a scream as he plummeted into the unknown, dragging me along with him.

The End

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Abby’s Story That Has No Name – Chapter 10: More and More Trouble

August 28, 2010

Wow, I think this is one of my longest chapters! Correct me if I’m wrong. Hope its good, its also one of my favorites!

Mark arrived back from the crash site looking very forlorn. Grace quickly rushed up to him to find out what was wrong. When he told her, she also took on a long face.

“Kzereck will know nearly exactly where we are!” she began. “We’ll have to move, now. Maybe we can rescue Michal and Alexander while the soldiers are out looking for us.”

“I hate to say it, we are nowhere near ready, but I agree. We’ve got to leave as soon as possible. Luckily, it will take the man more than a day to reach the castle, so I think we can manage to rest tonight and set out in the morning.”

“I think that’s all we can do, we desperately need rest. We wouldn’t be of much help to the others if we can’t stay awake long enough to fight off one soldier. But we’ll need to dump some supplies; we can’t carry all of this to the castle and back on our own. We’ll retrieve it once we have Michal and Alexander safe with us.”

“That sounds like a good plan,” Mark agreed. “For now, we can use all the supplies that will go bad in a few days. It’ll be no use to save it.”

After they had hidden the rest of the food store, Michal cooked dinner, using the supplies Mark had suggested. Mark quickly tried to hide the traces and they slept concealed by the undergrowth – they could not risk being found when they were so close to rescuing their siblings. Perhaps only hours away.

* * *

When Michal finally came through the door into the main chamber, she saw not only Kzereck, but also another boy. At first she thought it was Mark, he was of the same age. She was just about to call out to him when she looked closer. She sighed with relief when she realized that it wasn’t her brother. But the relief was short-lived, as she recognized who the boy was. He was Kzereck’s son, Jeatoe. Every once in a while she and her family had seen him around the castle, but they had only been introduced, if one could call it that, once. Last year, he had come after Kzereck’s wife had died. Michal had not been supposed to know, but she had overheard some servants talking about it one night. Even though she didn’t know him, she had a strong feeling that he would be bad news. It seemed Kzereck had been in the middle of saying something, but she had come in while he was speaking. For the smallest moment, Kzereck seemed annoyed, but he quickly regained his composure and resumed looking like the evil villain that he was.

“Hello, we were just talking about you.” He grinned evilly.

“Really? Shouldn’t you be talking about my brother instead of me, since he is the one who escaped from you?” she smirked. Jeatoe couldn’t help but smile, but as his father turned towards him he suddenly found it easier.

“Hmm, charming,” said Kzereck, visibly annoyed “But by you, I meant your family, as in your brother. I was just about to put Jeatoe here in charge of locating him.”

For a moment, the two young people stood equally shocked. Then Michal slowly turned and stared at Jeatoe, eyes burning. She hadn’t thought he was half bad before, but now that he’d be hunting down her brother, she hated him. Finally, he too broke out of his shock and spoke.

“ . . . Are you sure, father?” he asked, confused.

“Of course.”

“But, I’ve never done anything like it before, . . . and this is a very important mission, . . . and –”

                “Of course, don’t be foolish. You must learn sometime, and everyone learns best under pressure.”

                Michal, of course, was thinking about how arrogant Kzereck was, that he would force someone who had never done anything vaguely military-related to catch a very important prisoner, one they could not afford to lose. Naturally, she said nothing about this.

                “Well, I feel like I’m intruding on a family conversation. If I can, I’ll just go back to my room now.”

                “Not so fast,” said Kzereck, “We haven’t accomplished what I called you down here for.”

                “Yes?” she groaned inwardly that she had to answer to this imbecile, but, once again, she kept her feelings to herself.

                “We’re going to have to find out where the prisoner went.” He began, more to his son than to her.

                “Yes, father?” replied Jeatoe, looking awfully confused for being the son of an evil general.

                “Interrogation.”

* * *

Grace ran through the forest, all the time a strange pulling sensation dragging at her back. She felt that if she did not run faster, she would be caught up in the sky. She tried to tell herself that it was just nerves, but she knew, deep down, that it was more than that. It was real, and it was coming for her.

                She tumbled into a cave, out of breath. Panting, she clambered to the cave wall, out of site of the entrance. Just as she did, she thought about going back to find Mark. She wasn’t sure what exactly she had been running from, but she had a feeling she should go back and try to find him. Soon, however, her choice was made for her, as the cave opening collapsed without warning or cause. She now had no choice but to go deeper into the cave.

                As she continued, she began to feel a soft, warm breeze coming from somewhere up ahead. She began to have hope, and started to run towards the breeze. Soon, she saw a light, not unlike daylight, radiating from up ahead. The breeze was evidentially coming from it. As she drew even closer, she could smell a wonderful smell, like a thousand beautiful plants all working together. She drew nearer and nearer, and then she heard a deep, but gentle voice.

* * *

Grace awoke with a start, and a splitting headache. She groaned, and rolled over. Her dream had been so real, but she didn’t want to think about it. She let out another groan and put her hand to her head. Mark must’ve noticed, because he rushed right over.

“Are you alright?” he asked, clearly concerned.

“Uh . . . I’m not sure,” she began. “I had a . . .” she broke off, unsure whether or not to tell him of her dream.

“You had a what?” he asked.

“I had . . . I mean, I have an awful headache.” she decided not to tell him.

“Are you alright?”

“Yeah, I’m fine, don’t worry about me. We need to get moving, though.” She began to stand up, but then her hand flew to her head, and she groaned again. As she collapsed, Mark caught her.

“I don’t think you’re as ‘fine’ as you say, Grace. I don’t think you’re fit to rescue Michal and Alexander.”

“I’ll manage,” she said, determined.

“Are you sure?” he asked suspiciously.

“I said I’ll manage.” This time when she stood up, she held in the groan and tried her best to stand up normally, in a way that wouldn’t betray her pain. Mark wasn’t convinced.

“Fine, but sit down while I get some of those supplies for breakfast.”

“Honestly, Mark, I know you’re my older brother, but only by one year! You needn’t try so hard, I’m not helpless!”

“Nevertheless, sit down!”

“Yes, father! . . . Oh, don’t get that look on your face, Mark, I was just kidding. We both miss father, but we have to focus on our living siblings who need us.”

“I know, I know.” he sighed. Then, snapping back to reality, “Still, sit down!”

“All right, I get the picture.” she groaned once more as she sank down to the ground.

“Good.”

* * *

By the time they had finished eating, Grace felt better than ever.

“I swear, Mark, I feel fine now!”

“You couldn’t even walk an hour ago!” Mark argued.

“What will it take for me to prove to you that I’m fine?” asked Grace. She had already demonstrated that she could walk for ten minutes without passing out, lean over and pick something up, and even beat Mark in a running-race. Yet he still refused to believe her. “Fine.” she said. “I am going to do the last possible thing that I can think of to make you believe me, and if you still don’t believe me, your loss.” With that, she ran past him, turned, did a few cartwheels to the base of a tree, then quickly climbed to the top of it, a triumphant grin on her face. “Well?”

“Well what?”

“You know very well what!”

“Well, I suppose I believe you.” He gave a sly smile. She punched him. “Again, I thought Kzereck was the bad guy!” (Awww, sweet brother-sister moment!!! I don’t have an older brother. I should order one. Where do you get them, Babies R Us? Wait, older brother . . .  Hmm, Teens R Us? Hehehe, I crack myself up, if no one else. ;) ) She grinned. “Still,” he continued. “If you feel even slightly tired, we’ll stop.”

“Yes, fa –” she broke off. Ooops, why did I say that!

Reading her face, Mark quickly said, “It’s alright, Grace I don’t mind.”

“Are you really sure?” she asked. “I am sorry, I know it upsets you.”

“Yes, I’m really sure!” he promised. “Now we’d better get going.”

* * *

Grace ran through the forest ahead of Mark, clearly eager to prove to him that she really was as well as she claimed.

“Slow down!” he called out.

“What? The sick girl’s running too fast for you to catch?”

He grinned. “Fine, fine, I give in, you’re fine, I can see that now.” Although she did get on his nerves, he loved his sister.

She proceeded to taunt him by acting sickly. “Oh, my head, it hurts so badly!  I can barely run, but, oh look, I’m beating my brother!” she burst out laughing.

“Ok, I believe you. But, that’s enough teasing, don’t you think?”

“Oh, Mark, even you know I have so much more in me!” she joked.

Suddenly, her hand flew to her forehead, and she sank to the ground. Mark ran over and caught her. He noticed she had a strange look on her face, as if she were remembering something, something very distant, as if from a long time ago or a dream.

“Are you alright?” he asked, alarmed. When she only groaned in response, he added, “That settles it, there’s no way I’m letting you help rescue them.” she groaned again. “Grace?”

“Mark, I need to tell you something.”

“Yes, Grace?”

“Last night I had a dr – vision.” She corrected herself. Then she proceeded to tell him the details of her dream, from beginning to end.

“And that was it? You followed a tunnel to the back where you saw a beautiful garden? Maybe I’m missing something, but why is this so important that you absolutely have to tell me?” he asked.

“No, that’s not the terribly important part.” she explained. “As I was looking into the garden from the cave, I was just about to go into it, but then I heard a man’s voice from behind me.”

“What did he say?” Mark still wondered at the point of all this, but now he felt reassured that the story was actually getting somewhere.

“He said, ‘It is not your time yet, my daughter, but it soon will be.’”

“Why’d he call you his ‘daughter’? Was it Dad?”

“Yes, wait, no. Yes. I don’t know. Yes and No?”

“You seem like you’re asking the question now.”

“Maybe I am. He wasn’t dad, but I somehow knew he had a right to call me that.”

“Well, what do you think he meant?”

“Well . . . that’s not really what I need to tell you either.” she paused. “After that, he went on to say that he needed me to give you a message.”

“Are you sure you weren’t just imagining things because of your headache?”

“I’m sure, Mark! I didn’t even have the headache till after my dream! In fact, I think the dream somehow caused the headache, not the other way around as you believe.”

“All right, all right!” he could see that his sister was getting overworked and he didn’t think that was good for anyone who’d been unable to walk earlier that day. “What did he say?”

“He said to tell you his exact words.” she hesitated.

“Yes, well? What were they?” Mark was trying to be tolerant of his sister, but he was struggling.

“He said, ‘There are tough times ahead, and you must be strong and courageous in order to make it through them.’” Mark began to interrupt at this point, but Grace quickly shushed him and continued on. “‘You will succeed in rescuing your two siblings, and not only one single time. However, you will need them as much as they need you to survive. You must trust your family and your heart more than anything to save the nation from the Serenians who have held the people in fear and terror for so long. You will find several allies, many you may not trust at first, and from strange places. But they are all needed for you to accomplish the common goal of the people. It is for this reason that things have happened, and will happen, the way they have. But don’t worry, if you simply have faith in your allies and family, you will overcome. It is that you have come to this position for such a time as this. And you will succeed in finding the King also. – ’ ”

At this point Mark interrupted. “How does he expect me to do that? No one knows where the king is, for all we know the Serenians could have killed him a long time ago. I wouldn’t even know how or where to start!”

“I was just getting to that,” Grace said calmly and quietly. “ ‘You will find him only by believing and having faith – ’ ”

“That’s all good and well, Grace, but faith alone isn’t going to defeat an entire evil army.”

“He did say you had a lot to learn.” she managed a grin. “ ‘Although you may think this is the hardest part, it will be by far one of the easiest.’ ”

“How can that possibly be one of the easiest!”

“Mark,” she began.

“Ok, I suppose the others could just be the hardest in comparison, like if everything is hard beyond belief.”

“No, Mark,” Grace sighed. “When he said ‘easy,’ he meant ‘easy’!”

“Ok, well, maybe I believe you, but why did you choose to tell me now instead of this morning?”

“Because, right before I clasped my head again I saw the man, and he said something to me.”

“What did he say?”

“He said, ‘Make haste to do the job I have set out for you. Your time is drawing to a close.”

And then, they heard horses trampling through the undergrowth. But Mark reacted a split-second too late, for an arrow had already plunged into Grace’s stomach. (I surprised you, didn’t I? Bet you never saw that comin!)

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Abby’s Story That Has No Name – Chapter 9: A New Plan

August 18, 2010

Mark moved quietly through the forest, always looking down, following his sister’s footprints. It appeared that she had been running the whole time, he didn’t quite know how she had done it. As he progressed, the prints showed that she became slower and slower, till she was practically dragging her feet. He knew he’d catch up to her soon, or at least find the place where she had been resting. Finally, the prints turned away from the path and into the woods. Mark turned to follow them. But then the prints stopped. They just stopped. They didn’t intersect with any others. They simply stopped. Mark looked around. He looked behind the tree. He looked everywhere he could think of. He looked up. Mark was just starting to tell himself that she would have been too tired to climb and that even if she had tried to climb up she wouldn’t have made it past the thick branches when he heard a delighted “Mark!” from above him. Next thing he knew, Grace had dropped down from the tree and had wrapped him in a tight bear hug, leaving him nearly suffocated and a little bewildered.

“How’d you get away from that big jerk, Kzereck? I know he’s not that smart,  but – ” she joked.

“Long story, I’ll tell you but then you’ll have to tell me how you got away from that wagon wreck!”

“Deal!” she agreed. “Did Michal and Lex escape with you, where are they?”

“They didn’t come with me, but they helped me escape.” he told her. “But we’ll go and get them out soon, too.” he added hastily, when he saw the disappointment in her face.

“Alright, tell me all about it then!”

After they had exchanged stories, Grace was ecstatic.

“And how did you get up that tree, you must have been exhausted!” Mark asked.

“To be honest, I’m a little surprised myself! I didn’t think I’d ever be able to climb it when I first got there, and I was so grateful no one had followed me. But when I saw you, I though one of them had followed me! Somehow, after that I found I did have enough strength to make it up. Of course, once I knew it was you I came down right away. Oh! I wish I could have seen Kzereck’s face when he finds out you escaped! And just wait till he finds out I ran away too! Oh, I’d hate to be one of those guards!”

“Yeah, but it can’t be too easy for Michal and Lex, either. We’ll have to get them out.”

“I completely agree, but soon he’ll have it out for us, too. These woods will be crawling with Serenians!”

“Yes, we’ll have to hurry, but we need a new plan.”

“Well, then, what are we waiting for? Let’s get started!”

After many hours of planning, Mark proposed that he go back to the crash to look for food and supplies. When he got there, he looked quietly around to be sure he would not be seen, and then quickly explored the wreck. It appeared that all the men had survived; only they had fled back to the Dark Castle. Mark quickly found weapons for both of them, and food to last a few days. As he finished up, he looked around. With a sinking feeling, Mark realized that he had let his guard down far too much while rooting through the rubble. When he looked up and turned around, he saw a lone soldier, definitely from the Dark Castle. He’d soon tell Kzereck that he and Grace had found each other and of their location, and that would not be good. But, the man was too far away to shoot at successfully, and it would be even worse if Kzereck knew they were armed. When the man saw Mark staring at him, he ran, hopped onto his horse, and galloped away, back to the Dark Castle. Oh, great. Mark picked up the supplies and trudged back to tell Grace.

* * *

Michal was overjoyed when the guards had come back empty-handed, but she couldn’t quite say the same for Kzereck. When he had discovered that it was actually Mark who had evaded the soldiers, he immediately sent for Michal. She couldn’t help smiling to herself as she was led through the castle corridors.

* * *

Kzereck sulked in his chambers. He sat drowned in his own thoughts. Presently, he sent for one of his officers, Grunen.

“Yes, sir?”

“The children have escaped, and I need your help to catch them.” said Kzereck.

“My help, sir?”

“Yes,” he began. “I need a new plan to retrieve them, they must be prevented from finding each other. If they stumble upon each other, we’ll have trouble soon enough.”

“Yes, my lord,”

“While I am forming a plan, you and your men will be trusted with search parties. They must be fully ready by tomorrow.”

“Yes, sir. It will be done.”

“Good. And on your way out, tell the servants to send for my son and also the sister of the one who escaped.”

“Of course, sir,”

Kzereck’s son arrived shortly after. He was of the same age as Mark, which Kzereck thought would help in the plan all the more.

“You wished to see me, father?”

“Yes, Jeatoe. I have a job for you.”

“A job, father?” Jeatoe asked.

“Yes. You know the four children that I keep in here, correct?”

“I don’t know them, but I know of them, yes.”

“One of them has escaped, the eldest. Also, the second eldest is being taken to a higher security base. If the boy finds her, then he’ll try to break her out, which we cannot allow.”

“Yes, father?” Jeatoe gulped. He had no clue as to where this was going, but wherever it was going, he was sure he wouldn’t like it.

“I have decided to put you in charge of–”

Just then, the chamber doors flew open. Michal stood in the opening, escorted on either side by guards who towered at least head and shoulders above her.

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Voices by Skullduggery

August 17, 2010

Continued…

 I was falling, falling into the great unknown.

“Jonathan! Jonathan!”

The voices from my dream! It had been an omen!

The mist pulled me forward, but gently. I relaxed. It was going to be ok. I was away from the museum, away from the gargoyle. Where I was, I didn’t know, but I knew I was in no immediate danger.

“Jonathan! Jonathan!”

“What?” I replied.

“Jonathan! Jonathan!” the voices continued.

“WHAT!”

“Jonathan! Jonathan!”

“SHUT UP!” I screamed. Those voices were really getting on my nerves.

Pause. “Jonathan! Jonathan!”

I sighed. It was going to be a long ride.

Finally, after what seemed like ages, I saw a light. The flow of the fog continued to pull me towards it. I looked at the approaching brightness. I saw someone standing, waiting for me. An old woman with a plump, kindly face was staring at me.

“Jonathan! Jonathan!” immediately I realized it had been her voice calling my name.

“Yes!” I responded.

“You’re here! Excellent!” the woman said, and a moment later the mist receded and I was sent flying through a mirror exactly like the one at the museum. I landed with a thud! on my bottom and looked up at the old woman.

She was wearing a white gown that looked as if it was made form spider silk. Pearl slippers adorned her feet. Both clothing items looked a bit too small for her.

“Welcome,” the kind faced woman said, “to Mythomagica. My name is Helen Goldcrest. And I dare say you are Jonathan Stoutheart.”

“Uh… no. My last name is Grant. I’m Jonathan Grant,” I said.

“Ah, so your father had you believe.”

“My dad?” I was feeling really confused. My dad was a business man. What did this have to do with him?

“Your father, Michael Stoutheart, the lead mage of Mythomagica,” said  Helen Goldcrest.

This was really weird. According to Helen, my real dad was a wizard! A really good one too!

“Sadly,” Helen continued, “he liked to experiment with spell a lot. It was this that killed him two years ago.”

I was about to ask how I had gotten there when a horn sounded! Helen’s face went pale.

“Our guard gargoyles are signaling an attack! You stay here!”

And, without another word, Helen Goldcrest turned and ran through the wall! Up until then I hadn’t noticed that there were no doors in this cramped room that contained only the mirror I had come through.

Ten minutes passed, and no one came to check on me. Twenty. Thirty. After forty minutes I had had enough and I walked through the wall Helen had passed through. A strange sight awaited me.

I was in some sort of palace, that much was certain. This room looked like the front hall. Suddenly, a man who could only have been a guard came running towards me.

“Jonathan Stoutheart! It’s you! The rumors are true! We have need of a See-er on the battlefield. The Kryos are invading and may have put up illusions! We can’t tell if some of their weapons are real or not!”

“What are Kryos?” I asked.

“They are a breed of beasts like gargoyles, only with boiling, red eyes.” the guard explained.

“Oh. I’ve run into one of those before,” I said, “I’ll help, but I’m gonna need a sword. I dropped my last one back at the museum.”

“What museum?”

“Never mind.”

“I shall fetch your father’s blade sir,” the guard said, and ran off.

Fifteen minutes later, he was back with the sword. It had a light blue blade and a hilt wrapped in purple leather. The saber was about three feet long and it was beautiful. The guard handed it to me.

“Use it well sir,” he said.

“I will,” I said, then added “Let’s cut to the chase.”

The guard took me out a side door and into the battle. I saw hundreds of people dressed like my companion battling for their lives against even more Kryos. I noticed that the Kryos had only one catapult whereas the humans had many. Why on earth (or rather not on earth) had the guard needed to bring me out here when the human weapons were so superior?

“They have so many catapults, don’t they,” the guard said, and I realized what was going on.

“No, they don’t,” I said, “They only have one. The rest are an illusion.’

The guard’s face lit up. He ran back inside calling, “I’m off to tell the general!”

Suddenly, a Kryos landed right in front of me. It held a huge, red sword and its boiling, red eyes glared at me. I stared back at it calmly.

“You killed my mate,” it growled, “Die.”

 “Oh, that was your mate,” I joked, “Hey; can you answer something for me? I really can’t tell you guys apart. Was your mate a guy or a girl?”

The Kryos let out a bellow of rage and swung its sword. The swing missed and I stabbed my father’s sword into the monster’s gut. It exploded into rocks like its mate, and I continued to kill the beasts. After a couple of hours, the battle was over. We had won the day because I had discovered the illusion. I guess being a See-er wasn’t so bad after all.

I was just getting comfortable with this new way of life when, three days after the battle, the same guard rushed into my quarters.

“Sir!” he said, “The Kryos! We’ve just received intelligence that they got a hold of a mirror portal. They may be invading the other world as we speak!”

To be continued…

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Seer by Skullduggery

August 17, 2010

It was September 16 when I had the dream. I was falling through light mist, its cool fingers tickling my face. I saw figures in the mist, but they were indistinct. I heard their voices calling my name.

“Jonathan! Jonathan!”

I woke up in a cold sweat, sunshine filtering through my window. Looking back, I should have taken the dream as a warning.

That day was my third in sixth grade. We visited a museum I had never been to or heard of before. The guide met us outside the museum.

“Welcome,” she said in a cool, high voice, “to the Museum of Fantastical Artifacts. We collect magical objects from all over the world.”

“Say WHAT?” I exclaimed.

My class didn’t react to the woman’s words. In fact, they acted as though she had told them that this was the Museum of Snail Evolutionary History. The woman glared at me intensely. It seemed as though her eyes had turned to deep, red rubies. As a matter of fact, her eyes had turned red!

“Foolish mortal,” the guide’s voice had deepened into a growl, “You should not have come here. See-ers are not permitted.”

Then, she changed. I can’t explain how she changed, it was so grotesque, but suddenly a huge gargoyle with boiling red eyes stood were the guide once was.

“Whoa!” I screamed and ran into the museum.

I sprinted through aisles of objects, ranging from Greek helmets to blue yo-yos. A sound of heavy wings told me that the gargoyle was right behind.

My eyes scanned the room for a weapon. A sword would come in handy. I had taken a couple of fencing lessons. And then I saw one! Just a couple of feet away, lying on a pedestal. It was about three feet long, with inch long spikes on both sides. Putting on a burst of speed, I ran towards the saber. The gargoyle screeched as I grabbed the weapon by its hilt and spun around.

“Put that blade down boy, and I promise I’ll kill you quickly,” the monster growled.

“Oh, go join your join your pebble pals in a rockery,” I retorted.

The beast growled, deeply offended, and pounced. As it spread its wings, I swung my sword. The silver saber struck its target in the chest. The gargoyle screamed and exploded into a million pebbles.

But my troubles weren’t over. Some of the pebbles rained down on a glass case that housed a large, circular mirror. The case broke and a light mist poured from the looking glass. The fog snaked around me, and pulled me into the mirror. I was falling, falling into the great unknown.

To be continued…

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Chapter Two (To Break a Writer’s Rule)

August 14, 2010

Throwing the flower on the ground like it was a dead rat, I stumbled back a few steps. “Just pinch yourself and it will go away,” I said to myself, trying to calm down.

And then, squeezing my eyes shut, I pinched my arm.

Hard.

“Ouch!” I said, rubbing it and opening my eyes.

I was still on a dirt road staring at mountains.

“I fell asleep,” I said then. “I fell asleep reading that last story and I’m dreaming now. Th-this isn’t so bad. It could be a . . . rather . . . rather interesting dream.” I laughed nervously. “I’ll wake up soon. Mama will come home and I’ll hear her and wake up! Yes.”

But all along my heart knew this was no dream.

Not wanting to believe my heart’s whispering, I squeezed my eyes shut again and said loudly, “Wake up, Serenity Barton!”

I opened one eye cautiously . . .

And found the mountains still standing before me.

“Excuse me,” I suddenly heard.

Yelping in alarm I whirled around. A young man, probably about my age, sat on a horse.

“Wh-who are you?” I stammered, frightened. This was just lovely. I was stuck, somehow, in one of my stories (one of my particularly “dangerous” stories) with no protection.

“I might ask you the same,” he replied, appearing to be struggling not to laugh at me. “I’ve never seen you around these parts before. Ah, you do realize you’re standing in the middle of the road screaming and talking to yourself, don’t you? Oh, and you pinched your arm just now.”

I glared. “If you were in my situation you would do the same,” I spat.

He laughed. “And what situation are you in, exactly?”

Wanting to strangle him, I was about to say something angrily to him when it suddenly occurred to me that I might be talking to one of the characters I had specifically written about. I looked more closely at the young man.

He had shaggy blonde hair that looked surprisingly clean. His blue eyes twinkled merrily as he stared back at me, though at the same time they were kind and honest. I vaguely recognized him then as a secondary character I had mentioned very briefly at the beginning of my story.

Still, while being king and honest, his eyes were also mocking.

Mocking me.

“Is there something wrong with my face?” he said then. “You’re gaping.”

Blinking, I realized I had been staring at him. The realization of this made me flush red with embarrassment and I glared again. “Just go away!”

He laughed again. “So be it, my strange lady! I bid you good day!”

Rolling my eyes and turning away, I tried to ignore the sound of his continued laughter as he rode away.

What was I going to do? How had I gotten into this mess?!

The sun was suddenly hidden behind a curtain of clouds. Looking up I saw them, dark and ominous, threatening to let fall their tears of rain at any moment.

As if it would protect me if—no, when—it rained, I went and sat at the base of an old oak tree not too far from the road. Pulling my knees to my chest I rested my head on them, wondering if I’d ever find a way to get home.

The wind whistled, causing the leaves to show their white undersides. Yes, a storm was most definitely coming. I sighed, not relishing the thought of being stuck in a story and sopping wet.

I felt something wet hit my arm, and a few moments later something else. The rain became heavier and heavier with each minute that passed.

Suddenly I heard hoof beats. Unable to see very well through the rain, I wondered for a moment if it was that man I’d met before. But this time I saw three riders, and they were heading for the village just as the man before had been. He couldn’t be one of them; otherwise I’d have seen him riding back from the village.

I got hurriedly to my feet as I waited, praying the men hadn’t spotted me yet. I didn’t want to meet anyone else in this place.

Unfortunately for me, however, the men appeared to have spotted me. They rode closer, picking up their pace . . . and these men did not look kind in any way. Suddenly I regretted making that man leave so quickly earlier.

Each of the men now riding toward me was armed with weapons and they looked intent on one thing.

Catching me.

Notice I say catching, because by that point I had begun running.

Why I ran I can’t say exactly. I would have had a better chance of survival by climbing the tree I had been next to (a tree that not many people I knew of would be able to get up) and climbing to the very top, but something in me screamed to run . . . and I did.

I ran for everything I was worth. I had no idea where to go. I just ran.

And, being on horses, the men easily caught up.

One jumped off his horse and started chasing me on foot. I screamed and pushed myself even faster.

I didn’t get far, however, because he lunged and caught me around the ankles, sending me sprawling to the ground and knocking the breath out of me.

Gasping for air I tried to get away, but he only held onto me tighter.

“I’ve got her!” he said triumphantly to his companions.

“HELP!” I screamed, not that anyone was likely to hear me all the way out here.

“Shut up!” the man said, roughly tying my wrists together with a rope one of his companions had thrown to him.

I was crying now. “Please let me go!” I sobbed. I had never been so petrified in my life.

“I said shut up!” the man yelled, standing up and kicking me. I cried out and curled up into a ball, trying to shield myself from him.

“What’s in your head, Cephus?” one of the other men said, jumping down from his horse and shoving the man who’d tied me up away. “The girl’s no good to us dead! You know that!”

His anger slightly abated, Cephus pulled me roughly to my feet, keeping a firm grip on my arm once I was standing again.

“You like to write stories, don’t you, girl?” he said in a low, cold voice. His eyes were full of loathing.

“Wh-why do you—” I began to ask.

He cut me off. “Answer the question!”

“Y-yes,” I stammered. They’re about to kill me, I thought over and over. My side was throbbing where Cephus had kicked me. Then a plan was suddenly forming in my mind. “My parents will notice I’ve gone missing. I live in the village, and I was only coming out to pick berries. They’ll send out a search party and—” I rambled.

But I was cut off once again as Cephus back-handed me across the face. “Don’t waste your breath tellin’ lies!” he hissed. “We know you’re not from this world!”

“This is pointless. We’ve already wasted enough time,” the last of the three men said, abruptly putting a dark sack over my head, one that smelled of rotted fish.

“Someone help!” I screamed, hysterical once more. “Help me!”

Then a horrible pain was exploding in the back of my head, and I felt my legs give out beneath me . . . and I knew no more.

~

I woke up to a throbbing head, an aching side, and darkness.

I can’t see. They hit me on the back of the head and now I’m blind, I thought in panic.

Then I smelled rotted fish and realized the sack was still over my head.

I was filled with relief at realizing I wasn’t blind (in fact I could even see a little bit of light coming through a hole in the sack), but just as quickly my relief died. My movements sluggish, I discovered my wrists were still bound tightly. Reality hit me with a great club. I was being held captive by three men who clearly had horrible intentions, and I didn’t know how to get home even if I could escape.

Suddenly the sack was being yanked off my head. I hurriedly squeezed my eyes shut as light, seemingly more bright than the sun, flooded my vision. Now I had to be blind.

My body in too much pain, I found it hard to even hold my head up. I could hear someone talking, but their voice seemed to come from far away. Then someone was grabbing my hair, yanking my head back and pouring ice-cold water in my face.

Choking and sputtering as it filled my nostrils and mouth, I lurched upright, gagging and spitting it out. I found something else out—that I was tied to a chair.

And that, when one is tied to a chair, if you lurch forward the chair tends to tip.

To add to things, when it hits the floor hard so do you, and that doesn’t feel very pleasant when you’ve been kicked in the ribs and hit in the head.

Moaning, I opened one eye experimentally. The light didn’t seem so bright anymore, and I found that it was only a lantern being held by one of my captors. Still, my eyes hadn’t adjusted yet and the light quickly gave me a headache.

My chair was pulled up then and, none too gently, set on the floor. I was slapped in the face again, and I could finally make out the words of my captor. “She’s awake now, m’lord.”

I opened both eyes now, not caring if it made my head hurt. I had to find out where I was to see if I could escape . . .

But all plans of escape were quickly dashed. I appeared to be in a torturing room of some kind. Evil-looking sharp things of metal hung on the wall, and there was a table of stone in the middle of the room, with something that resembled leather straps on the top as if to hold someone down. I felt sick.

To make the situation just a little more “pleasant”, two men stood in front of the door, and two more stood beside me.

My heart began to pound so hard I wouldn’t have been surprised if they heard it.

I wasn’t going anywhere.

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