Tick Tock, Tick Tock, Tick Tock…

May 31, 2009

(this is part five)

How many hours has it been?
Seven?
Six or seven.
I can’t remember for sure.
I went to the movies with a friend,
Then went back to her house.
I just got home.
Checked my email first thing.
Still he says (or writes) nothing.
Maybe I was too vague, saying just,
“Where were you? Why weren’t you there?”
And ending it.
Or maybe he just
Doesn’t want to answer.
I guess I’ll just talk to him
Tomorrow.
But the time is ticking.
It’s running out the door.
If I could chase after it,
And gain ahead,
And be back to where
I was before the concert,
Before the phone call,
Before everything,
Maybe it would’ve worked out better.
If maybe I’d said,
“I can’t wait! Love you.”
Instead of,
“See you there. Bye.”
It could’ve happened differently,
That he did go, or something.
But that’s impossible to do,
Running back in time.
Last night is history now.
It’s never coming back.
Try as I might,
It will never be coming back.

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Wait, Wait, Wait…

May 31, 2009

This morning I woke up,
And I stayed, lying awake in bed,
Until 9:45, when the phone rang.
I jumped up, saying to myself,
Maybe it’s him! though I didn’t
Really believe it.
I walked downstairs.
Dad was on the phone with Grandma,
Talking about my concert
And how my sister was exhausted
From the prom.
I said good morning,
Then to my mom,
Then to my brother,
Then sat down at the computer.
Maybe I’ll try sending an email.
Maybe that’ll work
.
Well, I sent one.
And still no response.
It’s an hour later.

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Crying, Crying, Crying…

May 31, 2009

This is part three. Part one is “ring, ring, ring…”, part two is “searching, searching, searching…”, and this is part three, “crying, crying, crying…”

*remember these names got changed for privacy?

Eventually, we got home,
All the while I was making sure
My mom didn’t see my disappointment.
We pulled into the garage,
And I stood in front of the door,
Waiting for her to unlock it
So we could go inside.
I heard a voice coming from inside.
A voice?
Why do I hear a voice?
I can’t be so sure, now.
Well, my mom hears it, too,
And when she unlocks the door,
I turn off the alarm,
And walk over to the
Answering machine,
Where a voice is rambling something off.
It sounds sort of like Jay’s* mom.
I look at the number that’s
Appeared on the phone.
It’s his number, alright.
I wait for the voice to stop talking,
And replay the messages.
The first one is my grandpa,
Asking if Odie*, his dog,
Is doing alright, here
(we’re dog-sitting for him
while my grandma is at the
hospital).
The second message says,
“I’m sorry Jay couldn’t go to your concert tonight.
He was making a film with his brother.
When they decided it was time to stop
And finish what they were doing, tomorrow,
It was late, and he noticed he couldn’t go.
He really appreciated the invitation,
And I know he was excited to go.
He really wanted to go, but he couldn’t.
I hope you don’t forget him in the future.”
It makes it sound like I was the one that forgot!!!
And he doesn’t even have
The decency to be the one that actually
Does the apology call?!
What’s with that?!
I know for a fact he doesn’t even
Go to bed until 1 in the morning!
Well, maybe she meant not to leave him
Out
In the future.
I don’t know.
But I can’t believe he had the nerve
To have his mom do the call.
The first time he missed us meeting up
Somewhere,
He took a nap and woke up
Too late to go.
The second time,
He had to go somewhere
He didn’t know about,
Until it actually happened,
And he had to go there,
Instead of meeting up with me.
But this is the one that hurts the most.
I go up to my room and sit on my bed.
This hurts the most.
We’d been planning that he’d
Be at my concert,
For about a week.
He knew where it was,
When it was,
What it was,
Where in the choir I’d be,
And why I wanted him to go,
And then I’d called him
To make sure he’d be going,
He said he was going to go,
He said he hadn’t forgotten!
Had he really not forgotten?
Had he?
Well, I get there,
He’s not there,
I get home,
His mom is the one that calls,
Instead of him, himself,
And I go up to my room and
Sit down, moping.
Not just moping,
Cause here I find myself
With tears streaking down
My face.
Tears streaking down from
My eyes.
If he saw me now,
I wonder what he’d say.
I wonder.
I wonder.

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Searching, Searching, Searching…

May 31, 2009

(this is a continuation of my poem called “Ring, ring, ring…”, so if you didn’t read that one yet, read it first.

*names have been changed for privacy of the people

I know what to do.
Plan B, now.
I type in the O-so-familiar code
To reach Jan* on her phone.
First time she didn’t pick up.
I felt like I could pull my hair out.
I turned around, put the phone down,
And now my fingers rest upon the piano keys,
Gliding along,
Playing the saddest song
That I know.
“Years go by, and I’m here,
Still waiting,
Withering where some
Snowman wa–”
The phone rings. I turn around quickly.
Check the caller ID.
It’s Jan. Pick up the phone.
“Hello.”
“Hey, Jules,
You called?
Sorry, I was getting ready
For my baby-sitting job,
And I didn’t pick up.”
“It’s fine.
Just wanted to declare
Plan B.”
“Plan B on what?
Did the concert already happen
And I missed dragging him out
Of his house?”
“No. But he’s not picking up the phone.
He could just be sleeping or something,
Maybe even out of the house.”
“Don’t worry, Jules,
I know what to do.”
She decided she’d ask Clayton*
To call him.
Clayton was his best friend,
After all,
So, if he was home,
He’d pick up.

A moment later,
After I’ve put the phone down
After hanging up,
The phone rings again.
“Hey, Jan,” I say.
“Jules, he can’t call.
He’s, like, about to go to the beach,
Or something.
Sorry. We’ll use a different plan.
Maybe he’ll pick up if it’s me.”
“Why would he not pick it up
As me calling,
Though?”
“Maybe he’s embarrassed that he cant go.”
“Hmm–”
A beep makes its way into the phone line.
Beep, beep, beep.
“Hold on, Jan. There’s another phone
Call trying to come through.”
“Okay!”
she says as her normal
Cheery self.
I press the flash button,
Say, “Hello?”
“Hello, this is…”
They say their name,
and say, “Did someone just call from here?”
“Yeah, sorry, one sec, I’m on another call.
I’ll call again in like two minutes.”
“Okay.”
I press the flash button again.
“Jan?”
“Yeah?”
“That was his mom.”
“OMG! What did she say?!”
“She said her name and asked if someone just called.”
“Woah, omg call back, now!”
“Okay, yeah, I know.”
We said goodbye and hung up,
And I keyed in the numbers
That activate a phone call to his house.
His mom picks up again.
“Hello?”
“Hi, I’m back. This is Jules, can I talk
To Jay*?”
“Uh, sure.”
I hear foot steps and a creaky door open,
As I wait another minute,
Suspense edging in on me.
I finally hear his voice.
“Hello?”
“Hey.”
“Oh, hey Jules!”
I can hear the smile of excitement in his voice.
“Hey, I called to make sure
You didn’t forget about the concert,
You know, just
To remind you.”
“I didn’t forget.”
He sounded triumphant.
“Oh, good. Well, see you there!”
“Okay. Bye.”
“Bye.”
We hung up, just as
My mom burst in the door,
Saying, “Time for a quick dinner.
Get something in your belly
And get into concert attire
.”
“Okay, Mom,” I say, and put down the phone,
Then get up,
And run upstairs.

White button-down-shirt,
Black (really looks like navy, now)
Pleated skirt,
Black stockings,
Black ballet flat shoes,
Walking down the blue-carpeted
Staircase.
Quickly put some pasta
In the microwave
Then eat it.
Rush out the door.

After an hour of extra
Rehearsal before the
Real deal concert,
We are sitting down on the sidelines,
Waiting for it to begin.
The open the doors,
The house is open,
And it’s a full house.
I keep on trying to see if I can
Inconspicuously search the crowd
That I can only see three and a half rows of
For him.
Of course, there are columns
Every couple feet,
And then a bunch of really tall people
That just happen to be sitting near the front,
So I really can only see a few rows.
The Concert Choir gets up first.
The man talks and talks
And talks about what kind of stuff
Happened this year
With the choirs,
And finally says that it’s time to begin
The concert.
The Concert Choir
Starts singing some songs,
And I pat my hand on my leg
To the pulsing beat,
Pretending to play the
Simple ditties the piano has
At some points,
That I can figure out,
While listening,
With my right hand.

Finally, it’s our turn.
The Honor Choir,
That’s us,
Stands up.
The butterflies immediately surge
Into my stomach, and I feel
So nervous.
Will he be here?
He’s got to be here!
He said he didn’t forget…
I stepped up to the top riser,
All the way on the end
Of the soprano section.
The shorter kids are standing
In the third, second, and first rows,
Though there are some taller people mixed in
That I can see.
I look out at the crowd.
Do I see him?
Where is he?
Maybe I overlooked him,
In the sea of other people.
The conductor holds up her first piece.
I have no choice but to look and
Make sure I know what we’re singing,
Before we begin,
And then focus on her,
Throughout the song.
During pauses when the piano plays
A solo part,
I look quickly out at the crowd.
I see my mom and my dad and my brother.
My sister has prom night going on.
But where is Jay?
Is he even here?
Well, he has to be.
He told me he would be here.

Time passes by.
Each song whizzes by.
I show my emotion in my face,
As I sing each song with the choir.
I sing loud enough when I have to,
And soft enough when I have to,
And look out at the crowd in-
between every song, just to
See if maybe I didn’t
Really know the
Truth that he
Maybe
Isn’t
Really
Here tonight.

After the concert,
We all rush out and eat cupcakes
And brownies and cookies,
And I try to see every person that walks out,
Just in case one of them really is him.
None of them are.
They’re all other people,
None of which are him.
None of them are him.

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Chapter Thirty-Nine: Missing (The Flames-They Dance-AKF P3-Myth)

May 30, 2009

sorry this is so short, ya’ll!

“He’s dead, isn’t he?” I said softly, my heart pounding harder in my chest. If only he hadn’t had to save me, he would still be okay right now.

Shastara put two of his fingers on Wes’s neck. Surprise and happiness crossed his face as he exclaimed, “No! He’s alive, Aaleyah!”

Relief flooded my heart. I had not been the death of Wes after all.

Suddenly I remembered something as Shastara started to pick Wes up. “Where’s Adan?” I said, looking around frantically. I realized now that I had not seen him come and stand near us. In fact, the last time I had seen him was when he had rushed off to join the fighting…

Adan was nowhere to be seen.

~

My voice was hoarse from calling Adan’s name.

He was gone.

Japheth had searched around our little camp for hours. He hadn’t gone too far, because Shastara was needed by Wes and it would be safer to have another man along with him. But we had all searched for Adan, and our efforts had proved futile.

I sat in my tent now, staring at little Janai who looked so much like his father. I sobbed softly, rocking back and forth. What if a messenger had gotten Adan? What if he had been killed and the body taken somewhere? What if…what if…what if…

“Aaleyah?”

I jumped at the sound of someone saying my name, and I turned around quickly, my heart beating faster at the thought that it was Adan…

But it was not Adan. Instead it was Shastara, and he stood there with a sad, pale face. “Japheth just got back, Aaleyah,” he said quietly, looking at Janai.

“And?” I said, searching his face for any sign of hope…any sign that things were going to be alright after all.

“He found…” Shastara began. He stopped, as if he didn’t want to go on.

“What did he find?” I demanded, standing up and going over to Shastara.

“He found…nothing.” The last word was so quiet it was a whisper.

I nearly fainted. I had thought he was going to say that Japheth found Adan’s…remains, and the relief that he had found nothing (though this was still terrible) was so great it overwhelmed me.

“What…what are we going to do?” I said forlornly. I started to cry softly.

Shastara took me into his arms in a brotherly embrace. “We’ll think of something, Aaleyah,” he said.

I sobbed into his shirt, not sure that we would.

Where-oh, where-was Adan?

~

A man, dirty and bloody, awoke to find himself in a room with walls of stone.

A dungeon cell.

How had he gotten here?

Had he always been here?

For that matter, what was his name? Where had he been born? Did he have a family back home-wherever home was-a wife…children? Did he have parents that loved him and were even now worried about him?

Who was this enchantress that kept taking hold of his thoughts with her long, curly red hair,sparkling, green eyes, and angelic features? Had she cast some sort of spell over him?

Suddenly it all came rushing back to him so fast and abruptly it was as if he had been punched in the face. It took his breath away(though he was already having trouble breathing because of the pain in his ribs, neck, and arm).

My name-Adan El’Hara. I do have a wife…and a son…Aaleyah-Janai…Aaleyah! Where is she? What happened? How did I get here? Are Aaleyah and Janai alright?

His thoughts were cut off as the dirty door to the cell opened up. A tall man, pale with pulled back black hair-and from what Adan could tell in the light that now spilled in from the torches outside his cell, his lips were almost…purple-he looked dead-, walked in. His flowing black robes swirled around him as if alive, and the fear he cast over Adan’s heart nearly choked it.

“The one she loves-how quaint,” the man said sarcastically. His voice was the most terrible thing Adan had ever heard-cold, evil, and emotionless. Chilling.

Yet, it was not entirely emotionless. In fact, the one emotion in it was hate. It was a pure, deep hate, and when the man spoke the hairs on the back of Adan’s neck stood on end.

The man had so much…hatred about him-in his face, his voice…he even seemed to cast a sort of hating, black aura. He seemed to suck the very life of everything around him, just as Adan felt like his own life was being sucked away now in his presence. Who on earth was this man?!

Then it hit him.

This was the Dark One.

This was the one Aaleyah and her sister had gone up against…and lived.

Was that actually possible? This man seemed larger than life, and all-powerful! Adan felt like he was drowning in his own hopelessness. They could never hope to defeat this man! Kiria was powerless against him!

“Do you feel that?” the Dark One said in his menacing voice. He came over to Adan, squatting by him and pulled his head up by his hair. “It’s called fear. It’s black, cold fingers are wrapping around your heart, about to squeeze…but soon that will the least of your problems. You, my boy, are going to make a lovely bait.”

Adan swallowed against his fear, wishing he could push it down-make it disappear.

“I might be a bit…nicer…if you cooperate. So let’s try and get along, shall we? Because you really don’t want to get on my bad side. I wouldn’t advise it,” the Dark One breathed in Adan’s face. Then he let Adan’s head drop as he turned to the guards standing at the door. “Bring him,” he said.

He turned back to Adan…and grinned.

~

Aaleyah cradled Janai in her arms as she sat by the fire, warming herself…though the chill of fear and worry for Adan would never leave her heart until she found him.

“Something is wrong…I can feel it,” she said in an emotionless voice. She stared at the flames, and their shadows leaped and danced on her face.

Japheth, Shastara, and Wes (who was finally doing well enough to sit up a bit and eat something) were also sitting around the fire, and they all turned their attention to her.

“The Dark One…I think…I think he has Adan. I don’t know how, but I can just sense it,” Aaleyah said, lifting her gaze to their faces.

Japheth’s face became paler than Aaleyah had ever seen it.

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Love? by Poeticlli Disturbed

May 30, 2009

I am angry 

I am hurt

I feel as though

my heart’s been shred

to nonexistence

around-around

this carasol goes

unrelenting-

never ending

this sick cycle 

which is my life

has made it so-

that i’m irrevocably uinfit

to ever love again

 

 

okay sooo.. this is weird.. i know

 

but i had my drawing pad out.. and was just i dunno… drawing… and then i though about my picture and started writing about it. and this fit my picture. I would put it (my picture) on here if i could… but our scanner’s down…. lol

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Ring, Ring, Ring…

May 30, 2009

Excitement.
Overwhelming excitement
Is empowering my soul.
But, O, how I hope for the best.
O, how I wish he will not forget.
I’ll call and make sure
Just for the assurance
That he won’t miss this.
“I wouldn’t miss it for the world,” people say.
He never said that,
So how will I know if he forgets?
I’ll call and make sure.
Ring, ring, ring, ring, ring
“Hello, you’ve reached our
voice-mail. Please leave a
Message
After the to–”
I hung up.
Answering machines bug me.
He never gets the message
After I’ve left one,
Anyway.
Maybe I’ll call again in a half hour.

A half hour passes by.
I think I’ll call him now
Just to be sure he won’t forget.
Ring, ring, ring…
I hate the sound, so repetitive–
“Sorry, but this phone number
is invalid.
Please try again.”
Thank you, automated phone voice.
I appreciate you telling me I’m wrong.
I must’ve typed in the wrong number.
Push each button,
Carefully this time!
Ring, ring, ring, ring, ring, ring, ring, ring…
No answer.

Pick up the phone for crying out loud!
I just want to make sure
You’ll be going tonight!
Ring, ring, ring, Pick up the phone, please!
Ring, ring, ring, Come on, come on!
Ring, ring, ring, Pick it up!! I don’t care how,
Just pick up the phone!
Ring, ring, ring–
“Hello, you’ve reached our voice-mail–”

Forget it.
If he’s not there tonight,
I won’t have to blame myself
For not reminding him.
Instead, he’ll have himself to blame
For me being so mad,
So please, please, please remember.
I’ll be waiting on the phone for you to pick up.
I’ll be hoping on my last wish, that–
The phone’s ringing!
Mom picks it up before I get to it.
It’s not him.
I shouldn’t have thought it would be.
Oh well.
I hope to God he doesn’t forget.
I hope so much he doesn’t forget.
I hope by my last wish that he doesn’t forget.
I hope he doesn’t forget.

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Chapter Thirty-Eight: A Night of Terror (The Flames-They Dance-AKF P3-Myth)

May 30, 2009

author’s note: this chap needs a lot of work-just giving you a heads up and telling you i know it so you don’t have to sit there for hours correcting every…single…sentence…but i had to post this fast, so i have no time to edit! sorry! enjoy! :D

“Make a sound and I’ll slit your throat. Then I’ll move on to those men by the fire, and then, assuming my guess is right, your little lady friend in the tent,” I heard a voice say.

It was in the middle of the night, and we were still journeying home. Adan had been on watch, and I had woken up not too long ago, unable to sleep because of a feeling that something bad was about to happen…and it appeared I had been right.

As quietly as I could, I crawled on my hands and knees to the tent opening (Janai and I were sleeping in the only tent there was) and looked out. A man was holding a knife to Adan’s throat-Adan must have been very tired for someone to actually be able to sneak up on him.

Where was Adan’s sword?! Why didn’t he run the man through?

Then I saw it laying in the grass out of Adan’s reach. The man must have grabbed it and thrown it after putting a knife to Adan’s throat.

My heart pounded in my chest. I had to do something!

I looked back at Janai. He was wrapped up in a blanket, and he was sleeping peacefully. I hoped with all my heart that he wouldn’t wake up and start crying.

I cautiously came out of the tent. Adan’s captor had his back to me, and so he didn’t see me (neither did Adan) coming out. I crept closer to him.

I let the heat surrounding me press on me…and then I formed a fire orb in each hand.

“Let. Him. Go,” I said, emphasizing each word. Thankfully I managed to keep my voice strong, but inside I was really panicking for Adan. If that man put so much as a scratch on him…

Still keeping his knife at Adan’s throat, the man spun around. When Adan saw me, relief and concern flooded his face at the same time. When I saw blood on Adan’s neck from where the knife had bit his skin, my hands all but curled into fists.

When the man saw me, his mouth dropped open. “W-witch!” he shouted, starting to loosen his grip on Adan in his great shock.

Then suddenly Adan’s face became completely concerned. “Look out!” he shouted.

Whiiiiiiiiiiz…went an arrow as it zoomed toward me. I leaped forward one step, and it barely missed me.

That quickly, in all the confusion, I felt something sharp at my own neck. “Hello, my sweet,” a voice breathed in my ear. The breath was hot, and its owner smelled horribly. “Strange that we would meet again, isn’t it? Remember me?”

No! It can’t be! my mind screamed.

The man that held me…was Abbas Haddad.

~

Adan struggled to get away from his captor once Abbas grabbed Aaleyah. A few times he nearly wriggled out of his captor’s arms, but his movements weren’t strong or his thoughts concentrated-he was too worried for Aaleyah to think straight.

The man punched him in the ribs, cracking a few of them. Adan doubled over, gasping. He had to get to Aaleyah!

“Stop that!” his captor hissed, jabbing the knife point at him. Adan could feel it cut deep into his arm.

Aaleyah’s face was pale with fear, but she seemed to be saying something with her eyes. Wait.

Adan fell still, trusting her. She must have a plan…and if it didn’t work, then he would get over to her if it got him killed.

“I never thought I would see you again, you rotting piece of filth,” Aaleyah said, her voice strangely strong.

“Ha-I hold your life in my hands and yet you are the one giving insults,” Abbas said, chuckling. He pressed the knife against Aaleyah’s neck-hard. Adan could see it start bleeding, and he saw the look of great pain that passed over Aaleyah’s face. He struggled once more to get to her, but it just earned him another punch in the ribs. “Did that remind you who’s got the upper hand right now?”

Aaleyah looked Adan right in the eye. She mimed jabbing your elbow back hard into someone’s gut-she wanted him to do that once she carried out her part of the plan. Get ready, she mouthed to him.

“Hey-what’s going on-”Abbas started to say. But he never got to finish, because Aaleyah looked at his left hand, which held the dagger, and suddenly the handle glowed orange. Abbas screamed in pain and dropped the knife, and at the same time Aaleyah and Adan elbowed their captors right in the gut.

Adan spun away and took up his sword. He went back to face his gasping ex-captor, and he held it at the man’s throat. Aaleyah had done the same, only she was aiming fire orbs at Abbas.

“The tables have turned, scum bag,” Adan called out to him.

~

I couldn’t help the triumphant smile that came to my face at Adan’s words. “Yes, they have,” I said, stepping closer to Abbas. The heat of my orbs was beginning to make him sweat.

“Pl-please,” he stammered. “Spare me!”

“You mean just like your friend tried to ‘spare’ me all those years ago by sticking a knife in my back, and the time before that when you left me for dead in the forest? Is that what you meant?!” I was shouting now, and Abbas trembled with fear.

Shastara and Japheth had only woken up long after the fight had begun-they had been very exhausted, and therefore able to sleep through a lot. They both held a sword in their hands now.

“I-I-” Abbas stuttered. “Show mercy! Please!”

“Mercy-ha,” I scoffed. “You don’t know the first thing about mercy, you worthless maggot.”

“I b-beg you!” Abbas pleaded.

Suddenly, out of the corner of my eye, I noticed someone standing next to Shastara-someone other than Japheth.

It was Wes!

How had he gotten here? He must have tracked us, and only just now stumbled upon us. Oh, well, at least our numbers were great now-

Then I remembered how mad I was at Wes for what he had done. He had had no right, at all, to try to kiss me. I wasn’t sure I would ever forgive him, and if I did, it would only be after he had redeemed himself on a very high level. Winning back my respect would not be easy.

Focus! my mind shouted at me. I was so caught up in my thoughts that Abbas could have grabbed me by now if not for my fire, or at least thrown a dagger at my chest.

Suddenly I heard Janai start crying. My heart missed a beat-what if Abbas had more men hidden in the trees?

“Ah…so there’s a babe in the tent,” Abbas said, grinning. His confidence was back. “Yours, I presume? What a lovely thing for us to take from you!” He waved one of his hands in the air as a signal, and I heard someone sudddenly crash through the bushses and underbrush.

“No!” I screamed.

Shastara, Japheth, and Wes all raced forward at once to stop the man heading for the tent. Get him get him get him get him! I screamed in my mind.

I could hear metal clash against metal-they were fighting now.

Suddenly other men poured out of the trees. Everything had just gone horribly wrong.

I looked at Adan, begging him with my eyes to tell me what to do.

He and Japheth had tied up Adan’s captor before, so he wasn’t a problem…but now Adan had to go join the fighting. He looked at me, telling me with his eyes that he loved me.

He didn’t think he was going to make it.

I looked at our attackers and imagined tiny flames on their chests. I could hear screams of pain as my fire worked, but even though they had an easy chance to beat the flames out, I couldn’t do anything else. My mind was too focused on Abbas, and keeping an orb in each hand, aimed at him.

It helped, because Adan and the others were able to kill a good number of Abbas’s men in the confusion. One, however, managed to slip past the fighting and run toward the tent.

“DIE!” I heard Abbas scream. I had looked away too long, and he had picked up a dagger. He threw it through the air at me…and that quickly I had burned him. He screamed loud and long as he died…and then he was just a pile of ash.

I stared at what had once been him, and then I turned and raced toward the tent. No one-no one-would harm Janai!

I conjured up more orbs in my hands, hurling them at each attacker that got in my way. Only a few more steps and that man would be at the tent!

I forced my weary legs to go faster…I had to go faster! I had to stop him!

Somehow I managed to outrun him, and I stood in front of the tent, panting as I aimed my orbs at him. “Take one more step and you’ll be ash like him,” I said, nodding in the direction of Abbas’s remains.

Suddenly I heard a battle cry. A man was leaping through the air at me, sword extended…I wasn’t going to make it…

And then someone jumped in front of me. Thinking it was Adan, I nearly stopped breathing…but it was someone else.

The end of a sword was sticking out Wes’s back.

“NO!” I screamed. No matter what he had done, I would not let him die for me.

Wes groaned as his attacker cruelly and roughly yanked his sword out of his body, and I saw red before my eyes. Kill kill kill kill…I thought over and over.

I quickly and easily killed the two attackers nearest us, and then I screamed for Shastara to come help me.

Our attackers had mostly been conquered, and Adan, Japheth, and Shastara rushed toward me now. I was kneeling on the ground, Wes’s head in my lap.

“Shastara, quickly!” I cried, tears streaming down my face. How had this happened? It couldn’t be real!

“I-I’m sorry…” Wes gasped through his pain. “I shouldn’t have…done what I did to you…before…forgive me…”

“I forgive you, but you aren’t dying! Stay with me!” I cried, taking his hand.

Shastara ran as fast as he could, and, kneeling next to Wes, he put his hand on his chest. Shastara’s hand began to glow green, as did Wes’s chest.

The wound seemed to close up, but Wes didn’t seem to get any better. “Thank…you…I don’t deserve you…as a friend…” he gasped.

His eyes closed.

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A Rather Bothersome Bother

May 28, 2009

Mosquito, mosquito
You sit there watching me,
Mosquito, Mosquito,
You’re waiting hungrily.

You won’t fly away
No matter what I do
Your staring creeps me out
Completely through and through.

So please, mosquito, leave me alone
Please just go away
Don’t just sit there, waiting to bite me
You’re simply not making my day.

(or)

Mosquito, mosquito
You sit there watching me,
Mosquito, Mosquito,
You’re waiting hungrily.

You don’t fly away
You just sit on my window sill
You won’t leave me be
You’re waiting for ‘the kill’.

So please, mosquito, leave me alone
Please just go away
Don’t just sit there, waiting to bite me
You’re simply not making my day.

which version do ya’ll like better? lol this was fun to write. it was because there was this mosquito on one of the walls in our house and it was just like sitting there right NEXT to me-EW-and i just like thought of this :D (i know some of ya’ll have seen this already, coz i sent it some of ya by email…but i just decided to stick it on WE :D )

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Chapter Thirty-Seven: Troubling Thoughts (The Flames-They Dance-AKF P3-Myth)

May 28, 2009

Waiting…waiting…waiting…Aaleyah…Aaleyah…

My eyes flew open, and I shrieked when I saw someone standing over me, reaching down as if to touch me on the shoulder…maybe it was a messenger, trying to take me somewhere again!

I could hear Janai crying, and I reached behind me to see if Adan was next to me…but he wasn’t! What if the messenger or some assasin sent for me had decided to go after him first?!

I rolled out of bed, dodging my assailant. I raced over to Janai’s cradle and then whirled around, my back  to it, orbs in my hand. “Stay awa-” I started to say as the tall, dark figure approached me.

“What are you doing?!” Adan exclaimed, leaping back as I nearly burned him with my fire.

I closed my hands (they had been open before, and the orbs hovering over them) and my fire disappeared. I swayed, dizzy and exhausted from using my powers(and just limp with relief). Adan caught me just in time.

He held me in his arms for a moment. “Aaleyah, what’s going on? I was just waking you up because Janai’s hungry!” he said. Janai was screaming now, and I was amazed that the others hadn’t woken up.

“Dream…it was just…a dream,”I said, clinging to him and panting. “I thought you were one of those ‘messengers’. I’m sorry, my love. I couldn’t see your face.”

“Well, I almost lost my face-you nearly melted it!” he said, laughing to try and ease the tension and remaining fear in the air.

“I’m sorry,” I said softly, chuckling as well. Really, the thought of nearly burning Adan made me feel sick. “I really am sorry.” I clung tighter to him.

“Hey, love,” he said, swaying me gently in his arms and stroking my hair. “You didn’t burn me. I’m fine. It’s all over now.” He kissed my head.

When I had finally calmed down enough to have my wits about me once more, I fed a screaming-at-the-top-of-his-lungs Janai, who immediately fell asleep after he was done…a fact I was glad of. I was simply too exhausted and still in a state of shock (my heart hadn’t quite resumed its normal beating) to stay up with him any longer. Adan laid him back in his cradle, and then came back to the bed, where I soon after fell asleep nestled in his arms, not sure if I’d ever felt safer…and at the same time, never felt more vulnerable.

~

At last, after a week, our little company knew that we could stay with the Tuckinses no longer. We had to get back and organize the army…which would be made much easier as our old friend Zane and his army would be fighting with us.

The Dark One still had time to get together a large army of his own. We had received word that he had already started one, and we needed to stop the flow of soldiers he was getting before his army grew even bigger than the enormous one we now had. He was getting weak, but not so weak that he could not still somehow defeat us. I had finally communicated all of this to Aaliyah, and said that we would be coming back soon, and that I had not been able to communicate before because of my terrible condition-I had simply been too weak.

Zynnia tearfully hugged me and Janai good-bye, saying that we must come and stay with them again some time. Emerald was also sad to see us go; she’d never seen a ‘real, live baby’ before. I also gave the invitation that when this was all over, the Tuckinses must come visit us. They promised they would, and we promised likewise about coming back to their home.

“You take care of them now,” Zynnia said in a motherly way (in truth she and Fagen weren’t that much older than Adan and I), coming up to Adan. She stood at least two heads shorter, and she had to tilt her head back to look into his face.

Adan grinned. “You don’t have to tell me twice,” he said, slipping his arm around my shoulders.

“Thank you again for all that you’ve done,” Japheth said. We all echoed our thanks as well, and Zynnia and Fagen shrugged it off, saying there really wasn’t any need for thanks.

Then, with Janai in a sling that held him in front of me and tied in the back (over my back), Adan helped me get on a horse (the same horse that I had taken after killing my captors). Then he, Shastara, and Japheth all mounted, and after a final farewell to the Tuckinses, we were on our way.

~

In just about a month’s time it would be autumn. I could already feel the change in the air; it was getting chilly. I shivered as the wind blew and pulled my cloak tighter around me and Janai.

The woods were strangely eerie. As the wind blew through the tree tops, it seemed to wail mournfully. Another reason we wanted to get home quickly.

Thankfully, Janai was soothed by just being close to me, and amazingly he slept for most of the first day of our journey. I would wake him up so I could feed him, and then he would be asleep again. I was very thankful for this; a screaming baby would not be an easy thing to hear or bear while on a journey.

When Adan, Shastara and Japheth had been on their way to get me before, they had been held up by various things-the typical bandits of the forest, those strange, new creatures that resembled wolves yet were much, much worse (just a few months ago the forest had become infested with them), and also simply a too-strong flow of people traveling the forest road. They had tried to avoid the road, but the steady stream of people had even spilled off the road. Where was everyone going, she wondered?

Then again, most people could probably sense the impending doom and therefore wanted to get as far away from Kiria as possible. The particular stream of people (that Adan and the others had encountered) had come from a certain large city that was just at the edge of the forest, and also very close to Dedran. It only made sense that they would empty it…but I still almost couldn’t believe that the people there would get so scared that their governor would order the city emptied. Of course, ‘desperate times called for desperate measures’.

Where would they go, though? If the Dark One was allowed to, he would take over Kiria and then continue with the countries beyond. I knew he wanted to someday rule the whole world…and if he had to do it ‘slow and steady-like’ then he would.

“What’s got that frown on your face?” Adan said, riding closer to me and my horse.

“Just thinking of everything that is happening…and what will happen if we fail,” I said quietly. I looked at him. “Adan, we can’t fail. We just can’t. If we do, then all is lost. There will be no point to living any more…everything will just…fall apart and become abandoned. It will be like a ghost world.”

“We won’t fail,” Adan said, reaching one his hands out to squeeze one of mine. “You won’t fail. You and your sister will be victorious-you’ll conquer the Dark One, and free our land from his iron fist.”

“You have so much faith in me, yet I have none in myself,” I said sadly, looking away from him.

“Then I’ll just have to have enough for the both of us,” he said, squeezing my hand tighter. I looked back at him, and I nearly cried when I saw the love he had for me in his eyes. He was too good-I didn’t deserve him…and yet, he was mine.

And so, I was going to hold tightly to him…and lean on him when I couldn’t stand on my own. In fact, he was the one that enabled me to ever stand on my own-the one that kept me going.

I squeezed his hand back, and wondered what on earth I would do without him…

I never wanted to find out.

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Chapter Thirty-Six: A Small Bundle of Joy (The Flames-They Dance-AKF P3-Myth)

May 25, 2009

author’s note: i love this chapter! *tears up* and no, i’m not praising myself. i’m just so happy for aaleyah and adan…they’re writing this, you know. not me.  ;D and fyi, this is 1,682 words. not that long, i know. :)

Aaliyah opened her eyes and looked around…but there was no one in the room.

She must have been dreaming, because she had heard a terrible, chilling voice say, I’m waiting for you… Then the word ‘waiting’ had echoed in her head…waiting…waiting…waiting… It had been such an awful dream!

She looked down at Ilana, who was sleeping in her cradle. Mara was just in the other room, on guard sitting in front of the door in case anything or anyone should try to come in.

Suddenly, unbidden, the image of Shastara’s face crossed Aaliyah’s mind. She missed him so much, and she ached for his arms to be around her.

Was Aaleyah alright? Had she diedfrom her wounds? If not, then how was she doing? She hadn’t communicated with Aaliyah in close to three weeks.

Just how weak was the Dark One? What if he was stronger than they thought, and when they went to defeat him…it was the other way around and he defeated them? What if this whole ‘growing weaker’ thing was just a clever ruse-a trap set for all of them? How could they be sure?

The truth was, they couldn’t. They would just have to take the chance. Kiria had received enough damage because of people that had sat around and done absolutely nothing.

But she was still worried, and she didn’t sleep for the rest of the night.

~

Ralaas Alair-the Dark One-cursed his weakness.

He hadn’t even been able to get the stupid girl all the way to Dedran. He was growing weaker and weaker every day.

Everyone knew it, and he could hear it in the thoughts of his servants. The other day he had killed ten of them for thinking ‘He’s becoming a weakling’ or the like when they had come into his presence. All it took was one (well, two now-he was getting weaker) blink, and their hearts would stop beating.

He had to find some way to get more strength, or the Twins would easily defeat him. It would be so easy they would be able to do it in their sleep.

He couldn’t believe it. For once in his life, he was vulnerable. He was in danger.

Was it really possible? Could it really be that he, the most powerful sorcerer alive, could be in danger of dying?

It is true-you know it, he thought.

Something had to be done…but what?

~

My baby was due in just a little over a week.

A week.

I almost couldn’t believe it! After all these months of waiting, I had mere days left until I met my little one! It was such an exciting thought, and it seemed to actually help me feel better to be so optimistic. I needed a little joy in my life right now.

Now, though, we were debating whether to just stay at Zynnia’s or try to get home before the baby came. I wasn’t comfortable with traveling-especially when I knew there was the slightest chance that the baby could come early or that we would be held up during our journey- and Zynnia knew it, but we had also almost been here for a month. She and her family needed a break.

Thankfully, I was almost completely healed now, so that wouldn’t be much of a problem. My shoulder was finally shoulder-size again, and it didn’t hurt nearly as much to use my left arm, and my burns were all but gone.

Right now Adan and I were both sitting in a chair side by side on Zynnia’s porch(Zynnia had said that ‘the patient needed some fresh air’), and I was relishing the cool breeze that was washing over us.

“So, what do you think we should do, Adan?” I asked.

“I think, since Zynnia and her husband have both said they don’t mind if we stay, that we should. Giving birth while we’re traveling home would be no picnic,” Adan said, taking my hand and stroking it.

“I just feel terrible about it though,” I said, stroking his hand with my thumb. “I feel like we’re…robbing them. They have themselves to feed, and now they have four extra people-and I’m not even eating for just myself!”

“I know, love. I felt the same way, which is why I originally told Zynnia we might just try and go home. But she was adamant. They really don’t mind having us, and I don’t really think that it would be good for you to be riding a horse for days after you’ve just had a baby. You’re going to be exhausted, but we won’t be able to stop for long periods of time because we have to get back. I think the best thing for us right now is to just stay here,” Adan said, turning his head and looking at me.

He was right. “Very well,” I said. “I suppose we shall just stay, then.”

No sooner had I said that than we heard Zynnia exclaim behind us, “Good! I’m so glad you are staying.” She came to stand in front of us. “We love the company, not to mention that it would be highly foolish to try and travel home when you could have your baby at any time.”

I smiled. “Well, we thank you very much for being so hospitable,” I said, thinking again of how much Zynnia reminded me of Mara. What Zynnia had just said made me remember the time I had told Mara I was probably going to leave her, Japheth’s, and Adan’s home, and she convinced me to stay.

“Oh, it’s our pleasure,” Zynnia said, smiling brightly and squeezing my other hand (the one Adan was not holding). “Now you two just keep relaxing out here while I go prepare supper.”

“She’s so kind,” I said once she had left. “She reminds me of your mother.”

“I know-she does,” Adan said. A strange look came over his face as he stared at me. “I’m so sorry, love.”

Concern rose in my heart. “What are you talking about?”

“I’m just sorry that you’d had to have such a hard life,” Adan said, his face masked with sorrow. “Nearly half of your life has been filled with terrible things. The way you’ve kept going through all these hard times amazes me.”

“But it hasn’t all been bad,” I said, squeezing his hand. “The best part of my life has been knowing you.”

I leaned over and kissed him.

~

It turned out we didn’t have to wait long for the baby to come, because it came that very night-nearly a week early.

Zynnia talked me through it, turning into the midwife (she had been the midwife for many babies) while Adan stayed for support(I begged him to stay with me), and after an extremely long and tiring labor, our long-anticipated little one entered the world.

Adan was kneeling on the floor next to the end of the bed that my head was at, and he stroked my head now. “You did a good job, Aaleyah,” he said softly.

I just managed a weak smile, and then expectantly turned my gaze to Zynnia, who was now cleaning the baby off a bit and wrapping it in a blanket.

“Meet your son,” she said, beaming as she placed him, still crying, in my arms. At the word ‘son’, Adan’s face lit up with pure joy. Our suspiscions had been right. “What’ll you call him?”

“Janai Corin El’Hara,” I said, speaking the name I and Adan had decided on together. Janai had been my father’s name, and I had asked Adan if, supposing we had a son, could we name him that. Adan had gladly agreed, knowing how much I had loved my father. It was a way to keep his memory alive.

Adan gently touched one of his son’s tiny hands. “He’s so little,” he said.

“I know,” I said, my heart overwhelming with love for the small ‘bundle’ I now held in my arms. “He’s so beautiful…”

His hair was dark brown, like his father’s, but it was also curly, like mine. He had my green eyes, but other than that, he very much resembled Adan. I didn’t think she had ever seen a more wonderful baby in all my life.

Adan sat on the edge of the bed, his arm around me as I was now sitting up. I leaned against him, unable to take my eyes off of Janai.

“Aye, he is,” Adan said. We didn’t even notice that Zynnia had ducked out of the room to give us a few moments alone until she came back in.

“I hate to take him away from you, but I need to clean him off,” she said, smiling kindly.

I reluctantly let her take him from my arms, and, after kissing me, Adan followed her to go watch as she cleaned our son off. Once she was finished, and he was all dried off, Adan held Janai for the first time. He practically glowed as he cradled him in his arms and stared down at him.

“He’s so tiny…I’m afraid he’ll break in my arms!” Adan said, looking at me. He was so happy he reminded me of a child who had just been given the most wonderful present in the world.

I chuckled. “He’s not made of glass, Adan,” I said. Adan came and sat next to me again, and we stared at Janai together. “But can you belive it? He’s ours-he’s really ours!” I smiled up at Adan.

He grinned back at me. “I can’t believe it,” he said. “I love you, Aaleyah El’Hara.” He leaned down and kissed me on thel ips.

I kissed him back. “I love you too,” I said when we had drawn apart. I rested my head on his shoulder and stared down at our little one again.

Janai Corin El’Hara. It was like music to my ears.

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Chapter Thirty-Five: Once and For All (The Flames-They Dance-AKF P3-Myth)

May 24, 2009

Adan sat on a chair next to Aaleyah’s bed and watched her as she slept. When he had first seen her lying there, he had nearly stopped breathing…thinking she was dead.

Japheth, Shastara, Zynnia, and her husband, Fagen, all sat at their table talking.”You’re welcome to stay as long as you please,” Zynnia said, “because she won’t be able to be moved for quite awhile.”

Adan didn’t doubt that, even though Shastara had done his best healing the wounds she had. She was still so weak and in pain.

“Thank you,” Japheth said. “But I doubt we’ll all fit here, and besides, you’ve your own family to feed.”

“Oh, it’s no trouble at all, as long as you don’t mind sleeping on hay in our little barn,” Zynnia said.”My Fagen just went hunting, and we’ve plenty of food.” Her husband nodded in agreement.

“Our thanks again,” Japheth said. “I believe we’ll take you up on that, at least until Aaleyah is well enough to travel.”

“Aye,” Zynnia and Fagen answered.

Just then Aaleyah moaned softly in her sleep. Adan stroked her face with his hand, and with his other took one of her hands, and she quieted down. He wanted to cradle her in his arms, but he knew that would probably be quite uncomfortable for her, so he had to settle for sitting next to her and holding her hand.

Please be alright, he thought.

~

‘Quite awhile’ turned out to be close to a month. Aaleyah contracted another fever, and this was one was worse than the one before. She would shake with chills, or push blankets away when she felt so hot.

Adan held her in his arms now whenever he could. She had asked him to, and he couldn’t bear to just sit there and watch her suffering. He would talk soothingly to her or even sometimes sing softly when she couldn’t sleep or couldn’t stop being so restless.

When she was awake enough and her pain was less, she and Adan would discuss potential names for the baby depending on if it was a boy or a girl. They finally found one they both liked, and the reality of the little person who would be coming into the world soon hit Adan more.

Zynnia, Fagen, and their daughter, Em(the whole Tuckins family), were all so kind and generous. Zynnia and Fagen were in their early thirties, so only about ten or so years older than he and Aaleyah, and their daughter Em was eight. They had extended their home, and also fed Adan, Japheth, Shastara, and Aaleyah. That was like adding four extra children to their family…and these ‘children’ were really adults (and therefore ate more). They all tried to abstain, however, from using up too much of the Tuckinses’ resources.

Adan hoped that there would be a way someday that they could repay them.

~

I awoke to find myself sitting on a bed. Adan was sitting next to me, and his arms were around me.

I was so hot…and then, suddenly, I felt a wonderful wave of coolness wash over me.

I had almost forgotten that Adan had the ability of ice. He hardly ever used it…

“Is that better, love?” he asked, feeling me move around a bit more.

“Yes,” I said. “I was so hot.”

“I know-your skin was so hot I could feel the heat just holding my hand a few inches above it,” Adan said. “How are you feeling now?”

“Like I never want to sleep again,” I said, lifting my head up from where it had been resting on Adan’s shoulder and rotating it to stretch it. “How long have I been sleeping?”

“Well, this sleep you just had was unbroken; you didn’t wake up at all…so…maybe a night and a day?” he replied.

That long?” I said, incredulous.

“Yes, but you needed it,” Adan replied.

“Thank you for sitting with me,” I said. Adan put his hand under my chin and lifted my head up so that he could kiss me. I kissed him back, forgetting all my pain.

When we finally drew apart, he said, “Sitting’s nothing. I would do an endless handstand for you.” He grinned, and I chuckled.

Once again, however, black fear gripped my heart. How was I going to defeat the Dark One if I was lying here, hardly able to get up and walk? Aaliyah was strong enough to fight him, I knew that…but what if something went wrong? All would be lost because I was such a weakling.

You have to stay strong for Kiria, I thought to myself. You can’t give up yet. Stop thinking only of yourself-instead, think of all the people the Dark One has hurt and will continue to hurt. Put them before yourself.

~

Aaleyah? Aaliyah thought in her mind.

Aaliyah? came the instant reply.

You’re there! Aaliyah thought joyfully. How are you doing? Adan and the others should have reached you by now…

They have. In fact, Adan is sitting with me right now. I’m sore and I’ve have a terrible fever, but I think it’s breaking, Aaleyah replied.

Oh, good, Aaliyah thought back. I’m glad you’re not alone any more.

Well, I wasn’t alone before-a woman and her daughter found me, and they brought me to their home. The woman, Zynnia, her husband, and her daughter have been very geneous, Aaleyah thought.

So, Aaliyah thought, changing the subject. It seemed strange that they were having such a casual discussion in the midst of all this turmoil. She didn’t mind it, but there were other pressing issues to discuss. What’s the plan?

I think maybe you should come out here, Aaleyah replied. Tell all the men in the town to come-make sure the word gets spread to the army. We should all gather out here and then go straight into Dedran.

And the Dark One probably thinks we’re still getting our forces together…in fact, he doesn’t even know you are free. He expected to see you right about now…why don’t we give him a little surprise? Aaliyah thought. A small smile broke out on her face.

Right, Aaleyah agreed. And our numbers are already maybe double the amount of men he has left. Yes, he is still very powerful…but he’s weakening. I can feel it. We can do this, Aaliyah!

We can, and we will! Aaliyah thought back, her hope and bravery renewing themselves.

I’m afraid I must go now, sister, Aaleyah thought. We can finish making the final plans tonight. I’m sorry-I’m just too tired now.  I need to rest. I can’t keep my eyes open even if I try.

You should rest, Aaliyah thought. I’ll see you soon.

Aye, Aaleyah thought. I love you, Aaliyah. Be safe.

I love you too, Aaliyah replied. And you.

Good bye, Aaleyah thought.

~

“How much longer ’til your wee one comes?” Zynnia asked me. I had been deep in thought, and I was pulled from my thoughts now.

“Oh, about a month,” I said, shifting on the bed to ease my ribs a bit. Of all the pain I had undergone, the pain in my broken ribs had by far been the worst.

“I suspected as much,” Zynnia said. She seemed to just know these things.

“Do you think it will be big, or is this a normal size for a baby?” I asked, not really knowing what to expect.

“I’d say you were about a normal size. Not too big, and not too small. With my Em, I was bigger than you are now…so I’d say your baby will be just right,” Zynnia said, smiling.”What do you think it will be?”

“I have a strong feeling it’s a boy, though I’m not sure why. Adan has always wanted a boy, and I wouldn’t mind one myself,” I said, smiling as well. “Whenever we talk about it we just say it’s a boy. I guess we’ll have to see.” I chuckled.

Suddenly, all the blood drained from my face. I was paralyzed with fear, and my voice seemed to disappear.

“What is it?” I heard Zynnia say. Her voice seemed to come from far away…

Wordlessly I stared past her. A black figure, emanating such a cold feeling I was surprised Zynnia didn’t notice it, was floating just a few feet behind her. The spot where the first ‘messenger’ had touched me burned with a vengeance.

I’m waiting for you…a deep, chilling voice said. It came from the figure, but I knew whose voice it really was.

Zynnia looked concerned now, and her lips were moving as if she was talking to me…but I could hear nothing but the voice.

Waiting…waiting…waiting…the voice echoed. The black figure smiled the most horrific smile I had ever seen (beside the Dark One’s of course)…and then it disappeared.

The sounds of my surroundings slowly came back to my ears. I blinked and suddenly I saw everything around me again, whereas before I had only seemed to see that black thing…

My chest burning, I swayed and fell…barely grabbing onto the back of a chair just in time before I hit the ground. I heard people shouting-though once again it seemed to come from far away-and then I felt two strong arms come around my waist and help me back to the bed.

My ears were ringing, but slowly my hearing came back. “What’s that mark on her chest?” I heard Zynnia exclaim. “It’s so…red!”

I blinked a few times, my mind foggy. I looked around and realized I was now lying on the bed. Adan was sitting on the edge of it, staring down at me. I was so afraid I wanted to just curl up into a ball and hide.

Waiting…waiting…waiting…

The voice resonated through my memory, sending chills up and down my spine. I was trembling with fear now, and it only got worse. I couldn’t stay still.

I felt Adan then lay down next to me and pull me into his arms. I put my head back against his chest and held onto his arms as if he could save me from my black pit of despair.

“Ssh,” he said softly. “It’s alright now.” He stroked my hair gently.

I slowly calmed down, though inwardly I was still very much shaken.

“What happened, love?” Adan asked. Zynnia, her husband, Shastara, and Japheth were all standing by the bed and looking down at me.

“I saw one of those…things again,” I said, my voice quivering. “I-it said ‘I’m waiting for you’.” I covered my face with my hands and shuddered.

“You also have a red spot on your chest, just below your neck,” Adan said, looking at it. It still burned quite fiercely.

“That’s where the first one touched me,” I said, rubbing it and hoping that the burning and stinging would go away soon.

“Oh, love,” Adan said, drawing me closer to himself as if he could protect from…well, everything.

But the truth was, no one could save me now.

We needed to settle this, Aaliyah, I, and the Dark One.

We needed to end it once and for all.

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Mrs. Lonely Sings Her Sad Song Again

May 23, 2009

i am reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeally getting lonely.

do you know that no one has gotten on here BUT ME for the past two-three days?!??!?!?! jules has an excuse, but the rest of you…better come up with somethin’ good, ya’ll.

okay.

breathe.

you’re not alone.

WE is not a ghost town.

it’s just veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeery lonely.

and boo hoo i have not seen a soul on this site for like for-forever! *SOBS*

:)

yes, yes, i know ya’ll are busy…i’m just joking with ya…

but, would you mind coming back? like this year?

:D :D

ha ha this is really my way of saying I MISS ALL OF YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! COME BAAAAAAAAAAACK!!!!!

over and out,
Myth

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Chapter Thirty-Four: An Inquisitive New Friend (The Flames-They Dance-AKF P3-Myth)

May 20, 2009

It was late the next morning by the time they found me. The sun was shining brightly, and the forest at least had some sound in it now. I had just woken up, shocked that I had actually slept through the night and survived.

Still, I awoke to feel someone touching my face. My eyes flew open, and I half-expected to see Adan kneeling by me. But, alas, it was not Adan. In fact, it was a little girl.

“You’re waked up,” she said, withdrawing her hand from my face. “Mama, she’s waked up!”

A woman scurried over to us, her arms loaded with herbs and bandages. “Move over, Emerald,” she said with a Dedranian accent. I must be close to Dedran-wonderful. “Let me take a look at her.”

As she looked me over, tending to each of my wounds as she went, she tsked at me. “Child, you’ve got more wounds on you than any human being should have in a life time,” she said, her voice full of worry. “Emmy, you are going to have to stay with her while I go get the horse, cart, and your papa.” Emmy, the little girl, nodded solemnly, obviously taking her job very seriously, and the woman hurried off.

Emerald turned back to me. “You’re pr-pr-perty,” she stuttered, unsure of how to sound the word. She fingered my hair. She couldn’t be much older than seven or eight, but she was quite tall. “How’d you get here?”

I tried to talk, but it came out as a croak. Even though Emerald’s mother had given me a drink, my throat was still so dry…

“Oh-sorry,” Emerald said. “I sorta forgots you couldn’t do much talkin’. I’ll just be quiet now. Mama’ll be back soon.”

Even though her mother had bandaged my wounds, my pain began to grow to such an intensity that I had to hold back tears from it. I knew if I opened my mouth to try to talk again I would start sobbing (with pain and despair) so I just clamped it shut and forced myself not to cry. Not in front of this little girl.

I started to slip into semi-consciousness. I could see Emerald’s mouth moving, but I couldn’t hear anything coming from it. My limbs started to go blessedly numb…I was so, so tired…

~

When I awoke, I was lying in a bed in a small cabin. My pain came back abruptly, hitting me like a dagger through my heart. It took my breath away.

“I need you to drink this right now,” I heard someone say. It was Emmy’s mother, and she held a cup to my lips now. “Drink it all up-it’ll help the pain.” I gulped it down, choking on it as I did so. I was so very thirsty…

I was hot and cold at the same time. I was sweaty and yet chills went up and down my spine. I was wide awake yet not awake. I felt like I was flying and had limbs of lead at the same time.

Was I dying?

~

Over the next five days, I was in and out of consciousness. Every time I was unconscious was a sweet blessing-consciousness only brought me great pain. Sometimes it was so bad I would lying there thrashing or screaming, and I had a high fever.

It was only on the sixth day I had been there that my fever went down enough for me to actually try sitting up and being calm. Em’s mother, Zynnia, forced me to drink so much of her special infection-fighting, pain-killing herb drink that I felt like I would burst…but at least it worked.

The fever, when it had been worst (it had been raging…I didn’t think I had ever had such a high fever in my whole life), had weakened my body greatly. Now I could hardly lift up my head on my own. I felt like an infant myself.

Infant…my baby…

Panic suddenly filled me as I tried desperately to remember if my baby had kicked over the last few days. What if my fever or some time when I had fallen had killed it, or what if it was even now dying? I clutched at my stomach, wishing with all my heart my baby would kick. Please, little one…show me you’re alive, I thought, tears coming to my eyes.

Kick…kick…

I felt two little feet kick inside of me. My heart sang with joy. My baby was still alive!!!

You are alive! I thought, tears streaming down my face now. I can’t wait to meet you.

Zynnia came in just then. “Are you crying from your pain? If so, you’ll have to drink more of that herb-” she began.

“No-I’m crying because my baby is…a-a-alive!” I cried. Just saying that sentence made me feel exhausted.

“I’m so glad!” Zynnia said, patting my hand. “But calm down; you’ll make yourself feel sick.”

Crying did end up making me feel sick, but I was so happy my baby was alive. If it had died I would have died. So much had gone wrong already-I didn’t need the death of my baby on top of it all.

~

Later that day, as Zynnia, her husband Fagen, and Emerald all sat down to have their little family time (where one of them would start a story, and the others would add things as they went-a story by all three of them), I was awakened (I had been drowsing) by a knock on the door.

“I’ll see who it is,” Fagen said. “Act casual-it could people after her.” He jerked his finger in my direction.

My heart started to beat faster, and I knew that there could be a great danger on the other side of the door. Even in my groggy state I knew all of this, and I was completely terrified. What if the Dark One had sent more men after me?!

Fagen peeked out the window before opening the door. He had his sword strapped to him, and he rested his hand on the hilt. “How can I be of help to you, sirs?” he said politely, though we could all hear the caution and worry in his voice.

“We’re looking for a young woman, sir. She’s tall and has long, red hair. She’s also with child, and she is injured,” I heard a man’s voice say. It sounded familiar. “She would have passed through this area-have you seen her?”

“May I inquire first as to why you’re looking for her?” Fagen said.

“She’s my wife,” I heard another voice say. Its owner was also a man, but they sounded much younger than the first speaker. “Please-we’ve been traveling for nearly a week. We were held up many times along the way. She is in a bad condition-bad enough that she could die. We have to find her.”

“What’s her name?” Fagen said. I knew his plan. If these men knew my name, then they must be safe. I had told him and Zynnia that my husband would come looking for me-that I had been kidnapped.

“Aaleyah El’Hara,” said the younger man’s voice again.

My heart missed a beat. The people I had just heard speaking were Japheth and Adan!

“Alright-you can come in,” Fagen said. “But if you’ve lied to me and try anything, I won’t be merciful.” He stepped aside. Adan was the first one in, probably suspecting that I was there. When he saw me, he paled.

“Aaleyah,” he said softly, rushing over to me. He knelt on the floor beside the bed.

I was too weak to cry, so I just managed the smallest of smiles.

Japheth and Shastara both joined Adan at my bedside. “We found her lying out in the woods,” Zynnia said. “If we hadn’t gotten to her when we did I suspect she would have died that night.”

Adan’s eyes filled with tears as he stroked my bruised, scratched face. “Oh, love,” he murmured. He was struggling not to start crying hard; I could tell by the way he would blink more than necessary and clench his jaw.

“Adan,” I rasped. He leaned down to gently kiss me.

He rested his hand on my stomach, and just then the little one in me kicked again. I smiled, and so did he. “Did you feel that, Aaleyah?” he said quietly, yet excitedly. “Our boy’s alive, and he wants to come out.” He grinned at me.

I weakly lifted my hand up to touch his face. I love you, I mouthed…then I drifted off to sleep.

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I Shall Be Gone :(

May 20, 2009

I shall be gone
For till the Sunday comes
I go four days
And when that is done
I shall return
From my long journey
I will come back
But, mind you, in no hurry
But, dear, I do promise
I will come back
Unless I do die
But you would not like that
So out of trouble I shall stay
Till sunny Sunday comes
Because I promise I will, dear
Even though I will be gone.

Hearts!
Jules

___________

I’m gonna be gone for tomorrow till Sunday in DISNEY WORLD!!!!! I’m going with my choir, and we’re gonna have a ROCKIN’ time! Kbye!~

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Where did everybody gooooooooooooooooooooooo?????

May 20, 2009

Helloooooooooooo out there…

Anybody home?

I’m not really scared

But I am quite alone.

LOL that was random. where are ya’ll? hello? anybody out there? :D

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Chapter Thirty-Three: Disturbing Dreams (The Flames-They Dance-AKF P3-Myth)

May 20, 2009

author’s note: hey, ya’ll! this chapter will probably have quite a few things that need editing…at least a few. i did it on microsoft word and then copied n’ pasted onto here, and then had to do all this stupid junk to get the paragraphs to be the right space apart and whatever. very annoying stuff. didn’t really feel like doing too much editing after.  oh, well :) just warning ya, though!

“Please,” I gasped as the wagon stopped alongside me. “I…need…help…” I looked up to see who drove it.
It was a man, in his early thirties but still maybe close to ten or eleven years older than me. He had broad shoulders, and bulging muscles. He would have been handsome if not for the long, ugly scar that ran down diagonally, starting over his left eye and going down to his chin.

He wore a hat pulled low over his eyes, and when he caught a glimpse of me he pulled it up to study me better. I still sat on my horse, and his seat on the wagon was high enough that our faces were level. “Well aren’t you pretty,” he mused, lost in thought. He seemed to not notice the blood and pus oozing from my wounds, or the way I rasped when I breathed.

My heart missed a beat at his words. This man must be an enemy after all…or at least a disgusting man. My guard walls went up.

“Sir, I beg you,” I gasped, a wave of pain going through my body. “Please..help…me…” I knew I was going to pass out soon.

The man blinked and suddenly seemed to realize my condition. “O-of course,” he stammered, looking guilty for not helping me before.

He jumped down from his wagon and stood beside my horse, reaching his arms up. “Here-I’ll help you down,” he said.

Do I trust him? I thought to myself.

Then I realized I simply did not have a choice.

I reached down to him and took hold of his arms, letting him lift me down-no easy feat. I was much more heavy than usual-I knew with a rather sickening feeling that my baby was going to be big.

Grunting, he lifted me into the back of his wagon. He made me as comfortable as he could-I was sitting now- on some empty sacks, and then he tied my horse to the back of the wagon. Then he got back in his seat quickly and hit the horses with a small whip. “Ya!” he said. He knew that I was in a very bad condition, and that I was going to die soon if I didn’t get the right help. Maybe he was a ‘friend’ after all…

Suddenly, he turned around and looked back at me. An evil grin spread on his face, and his teeth suddenly grew into long, sharp fangs. His eyes turned bright red, and fur suddenly covered his skin.

He opened his mouth, leaning close to me, about to take a bite of my neck…I screamed…

~

I woke up and jerked my body so suddenly that I fell off of the horse. Once more, I managed to twist to my back so that I wouldn’t fall on my stomach and crush my baby.

The force of my fall brought tears to my eyes. I lay there, clutching the grass and sobbing my heart out, my sobs wracking my body.

Despair and fear filled with me. I was doomed to wander about looking for help…and die…

Aaliyah would continue to gather an army, and then she would fight the Dark One with them. There would be a chance that they would be victorious, but the Dark One would probably just kill her too, even though he was growing weak. He could kill all my loved ones…

No! Stop thinking like this! my mind screamed at me. But I couldn’t help it. All was lost…

Suddenly it was as if I was sitting in a room, on a hard, wooden chair. People came before me, begging me to hang on and keep fighting-Kiria needed me-they needed me.

Then Adan stepped forward, and I choked back a sob. “Love, you can’t give in,” he said softly. “I need you…we all need you. Keep fighting…don’t give in. Don’t. I’m not whole without my other half. If not for anyone else, do it for me-please?” He reached his arms out to me as if to welcome me into them, but no matter how hard I tried-and I was shaking my chair and trying with all my might-I could not get up. His face fell, and he walked away, his head hanging.

“No! Come back!” I cried. “Waaait…”

Then Aaliyah stepped forward. “I need you, Aaleyah. You’re my sister-my twin-one of my very best friends. We’ve stuck together through all these hard times-don’t give up on me now. Your fight is not over-your time to go has not come. Stay with us. Don’t give up,” she said. “Sisters forever.” She smiled sadly, and then she too walked away. My sobs came harder now.

Then my parents stepped forward. “We’re so proud of you,” my mother said.

“Don’t shame us now. You’re stronger than this,” my father said.

“We love you-be strong,” my mother said. Then they, too, smiled sadly before walking away.

“No! Come back! Don’t leave me alone!” I screamed, hysteric.

My eyes flew open. I wasn’t sure if I had had a dream or just imagined that, but whatever it was, it had been awful. My sobs continued to come until I felt like I had cried every tear in my body.

What was I going to do?

~
Adan saw his mother and father’s house and urged his horse on faster. He didn’t even bother to tie its reins to the porch railing; he just leaped down from it, and in a few long bounds, he was up the stairs, across the porch, and opening the door.

“Ma? Pa?” he shouted, stepping inside.

His mother and father looked up from their lunch, startled. “What’s wrong, son?” Japheth said, standing up and going over to his panting son.

“Aaleyah…she’s gone!” Adan cried.

“Son, calm down. What happened?” Japheth said, taking his son by the shoulders.

“The Dark One…he sent some thing-Saelis said it touched Aaleyah and then they both disappeared! What do we do? Where is she, Pa? What if the Dark One has her right now? I have to find her!” Adan ranted.

“Adan!” Japheth said, raising his voice above his son’s. “If you panic and act foolishly, you will be of no help to her at all!”

Suddenly Aaliyah and Shastara burst through the door, Ilana in Aaliyah’s arms. “Aaleyah-“ she began. Then she saw Adan and knew that he must have already found out. “We weren’t able to talk, but I could…hear…her thoughts. I could also sense her location with my mind’s eye. She’s hurt badly, and she’s near the very edge of this forest-at least fifty miles out.”

“Direction?” Adan said.

“Directly northeast,” Aaliyah said. Then Adan was rushing back out to his horse.

“Adan, wait!” Japheth called. But his son was already on his horse, riding away. Japheth grabbed three flasks of water, his sword, kissed his wife, and then went outside, Shastara in tow. They quickly got on horses and followed Adan.

~

I was hot and cold at the same time. Chills shook my body, and a great heat caused to feel like I would roast alive. My wounds burned, and my mouth was so dry. I was too weak to even crawl to the stream and get a drink.

A-Aaliyah? I thought, trying once more to communicate with my sister.

Aaleyah? Is that you? came the instant reply.

Yes, I thought. Aaliyah, I’m hurt so bad…I don’t know if I’ll even survive the night.

I thought it calmly, having accepted it. I couldn’t survive-I knew it.

You have to! Adan, Japheth, and Shastara are on the way. You have to hang on! Aaliyah thought.

I can’t, I thought. I’m too…too weak…I always was a weakling…

No you weren’t! Aaliyah thought passionately. You’ve never been a weakling! You’ve been more than the opposite!

Pain shook my body. N-not any more, I thought. I can’t hang on. Adan, Shastara, and Japheth won’t get here in time. I can’t hold on for that long. I just c-can’t.

But you have to! Your fight is not over-your time to go has not yet come, Aaliyah thought. My eyes flew open. Those had been the exact words she had said in my dream. Kiria needs you! You have to stay strong!

I’m useless now-broken and useless, I thought. I’m supposed to be strong and fight the Dark One-I’m never supposed to give up or give in…but I’m human. I can’t help but do that! I’m weak, and I’m ashamed of myself. Kiria deserves better-you all deserve better. I’m glad Mother and Father can’t see me now-they would be ashamed. I thought again of my dream and blinked back tears.

Suddenly a new voice-a dark and cold one that sent shivers down my spine-entered my mind. So you think you’ve escaped me now, it said. But guess what? You’re wrong.

Suddenly my ribs burned as if they were on fire, and I screamed. My scream was loud, and it filled the whole forest.

That’s just a reminder of the things I can do to you-or, to your baby, the Dark One thought.

I clutched at my stomach. No! I thought in terror.

You’d better come back to me, or I’ll kill it. Then I’ll move on to the rest of your loved ones, the Dark One thought. I could almost see him, a wicked smile on his face. Just remember that. Then his voice was gone, and I was left empty and shaken.

Aaleyah? Aaliyah thought frantically. Answer me!

The Dark One…he just threatened to kill my baby and then all of you if I didn’t go back to him, I thought, beginning to cry again.

Stay strong, was all Aaliyah thought. I’ll be here-don’t close our connection. Keep it open. Keep talking to me.

Aaliyah was the only thing that kept me alive that day. She kept me awake and talking, and eventually my strength somehow grew enough to let me crawl over to the stream and get a drink from it. I lay next to it then, my stomach full to bursting of water…and my eyes slowly closed…

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Chapter Thirty-Two: Take A Chance (The Flames-They Dance-AKF P3-Myth)

May 19, 2009

I awoke to find myself lying on the ground in a forest thick with trees. It was a different forest than the one Adan and I lived in, or at least close to the edge of it and therefore a part I had never been in before.

Panicked, I put my hand to my chest, expecting to feel a gaping wound. There was nothing there- the ‘dagger’ I had felt before must have just been a trick. The ‘messenger’ had probably just touched me and I had mistaken its finger for a dagger. Whatever it had done, when my skin had been touched I had been transported somewhere else.

There was an eerie silence so thick and heavy it seemed to press on me. There was not even so much as one bird calling to another or singing.

Then suddenly a thought came to me. The messenger sent by the Dark One had obviously been sent by the Dark One’s black magic…but why hadn’t I been transported directly to the Dark One?

Because he was getting weaker and weaker every day. He actually couldn’t transport me all the way to himself! Triumph dawned in my heart, and I smiled despite the pain in my shoulder.

Suddenly, crashing through the heavy silence, I heard people stepping on twigs and pushing their way through the underbrush. Someone was coming.

I tried to sit up and run, but my entire body felt paralyzed. I was sure that it was the effects of the ‘messenger’ and his icy touch, and so I just stopped trying to get up. I couldn’t move at all.

“You’d think that the ‘High and Mighty Lord of all Darkness’ would be able to at least transport her closer to Dedran!” I heard a man grumble under his breath. Straining my eyes-I was unable to even lift my head a little bit-I saw that there were ten men approaching me now. They were tall and had huge muscles, and there was something about them that suggested they were inhumanly strong and inhumanly agile…were they even human at all?

“Yeah,” one of his comrades agreed. “And then he sends us trekking out into some unknown, accursed woods to retrieve her. We wait on him hand and foot, and I’m getting sick of it.”

“Me too,” another of them said. They were standing around me now, looking down at me. “Is the sweet princess awake?” one mocked. “Does her royal highness need her pillows fluffed?”

I tried to speak, but found that my voice was not working either. I settled for a glare, which just set the men laughing.

“I think she’s upset with you, Tregan,” one of the men said tauntingly. “Maybe you should apologize.”

“You’re probably right,” he said, delivering an extremely hard kick to my ribs. Instantly my limbs started working again, and I curled into a ball, my arms around my stomach trying to protect the baby inside of me. Pain, sharp and swift as an arrow, went through my entire body, and I felt some of my ribs crack with the force of the man’s kick. “Well, I apologized.” The other men snickered.

“Now now, don’t damage the Dark One’s new toy,” one of the men in the back said, stepping forward. “Much as it’d be fun to break it, I fear we’d be broken worse for doing it if the Dark One found out.”

The others considered this, and I was only spat on and roughly dragged after that. “Please-let me walk!” I begged, sick with worry for my baby. The men dragged to my feet, and I was hauled through the trees to where some horses were waiting.

I worriedly noted that there were only ten horses. I was going to be made to walk…but I couldn’t make it. I was in so much pain, and my mind was so disoriented I couldn’t focus on anything.

Wait…Aaliyah! Communicate with her! I thought (and that was maybe the one clear thought in my mind at that time). Aaliyah? Answer me-please answer me! I called out in my mind. I suddenly realized how much I missed my sister, even though I had probably only been gone less than a day. I wished she was with me right now.

The men tied my wrists together and then tied the end of the rope to one of their saddles-I was indeed to be forced to walk behind them. My arms were thus pulled straight in front of me (pulled hard) and my shoulder screamed in protest.

For some reason, I started calculating in my mind how long I had been pregnant. It had been almost exactly seven months now, so in two more months my baby would be born…if I lived that long.

Aaliyah! Please, oh please answer! I cried out in my mind.

But I heard nothing in response. I reached out with my mind and felt an empty void. It wasn’t empty as if in death; it was just empty as if Aaliyah couldn’t hear me and therefore I couldn’t hear her or her thoughts. Tears filled my eyes, and despair filled my heart.

Are you really giving up that easily? my mind screamed at me. You are one of the Twins-you faced the Dark One and nearly killed him. You are stronger than this…you have to be stronger!

I weakly pointed my hands toward the men on the horses. I coaxed all the heat I felt to gather and form into fire. It wasn’t easy in my pained state, but I finally felt ready. “Burn,” I whispered, as if I could actually speak to my fire and command it.

Then, with one of the most powerful forces my fire had ever born, it slammed into the men(and the whiskey flasks they bore on their persons), and my world exploded with orange.

~

When I awoke for the second time that day, all I could feel was the throb-throb-throb of the pain in my body. It kept pace with my heart beat, as if my heart was in each of my wounds, beating there.

I cautiously tried to sit up. I looked around, dizzy. I had been thrown backwards by the explosion, and I had slammed into a tree, virtually knocking myself unconscious. Thankfully my ropes had disintegrated in the heat, and I could now move my arms freely. However, I lifted my right arm only -my left shoulder was never going to heal at this rate- and felt the back of my head with my hand. There was a large bump on it, and I winced upon touching it.

I nervously examined the rest of my body, hoping against hope that my skin hadn’t been completely devoured by the heat of the fire and the fire itself.

I put my hands on my stomach first, hoping with all my heart that my baby was alright. Kick…move…do something! I thought. I nearly whooped with joy when I felt a strong kick-my baby was alive! I looked at my left arm next and discovered a huge, oozing burn on my forearm. My right arm was alright, if not for the few scratches and bruises on it-but then, all of me was a bit scratched and bruised. My legs, however, each bore a few burns, ranging from ones so insignificant they would only blister and others that were so bad I knew I would experience a lot of pain walking.

I saved my face for last, reaching a shaking hand up to it. I expected to feel bumpy, scorched, hideous skin, and then my heart nearly missed a beat when I discovered my face was still perfectly smooth and untouched (if not a bit sore-my fire had been hotter than usual).

Thankfully, my feet also were untouched. At least I wouldn’t have to have pain in them as well as my legs.

One thought went through my mind over and over again-find a stream. Once I did I would need to completely submerge myself in it-except, of course, for my face-and let the cool water run over my burns and soothe their sting a bit.

I listened for the sound of running water…and nearly cried with relief when I heard some. Reaching my right arm up once again, I pulled myself up by hanging onto a tree for support.

When I turned around, I nearly threw up. There had been ten horses, and all but one lay dead on the ground, their carcasses mostly burned but unfortunately not completely-the sight was so disgusting I felt lightheaded. Blood oozed from them, and I could see into their bodies and see their bones and inner organs.

One had escaped, however. It appeared his rider had been thrown off of him, and the horse had run to the side, escaping with a slight burn on his back. I knew I would need to catch him, calm him, and then ride him.

The men that had been the horses’ riders were much the same. Some lay half-burned-dead-on the ground, gushing blood, and others were just nowhere to be seen. The realization of what this meant hit me like a slap to the face-my fire had been so hot it had burned them to ash.

I painfully picked my way through the maze of human bodies and the remains of horses, begging myself to not vomit all over the ground. I was getting closer to the stream now…

At last I saw it. The horse stood by it, trembling with fear as it drank from it. I quickened my pace.

Reaching the edge of the bank, I stepped down into the icy water. It was so cold it took my breath away, but it was better than the awful biting and stinging of my burns.

It was shallow enough and the current weak enough that I wouldn’t be pulled downstream and or start sinking. I lowered myself so that I was floating on my back. The water felt wonderful to my wounds, and I wasn’t sure I would ever get out of it.

At last though, the water grew too cold for me. My limbs were so numb I could hardly feel them, so I decided to get up.

I quickly drank some water, only now realizing how very thirsty I was. I drank so much I felt like I would burst, and then I began the monotaneous task of catching the horse and then getting on him.

Surprisingly he came right to me when I called him. He seemed to want to be comforted, and I did just that. I put my arms around his neck, stroked his mane, and nickered soothingly. He eventually calmed down, and didn’t protest when I got up on him.

Thankfully most of the saddle was still there, and the stirrups as well. It hurt me horribly to climb up onto the horse, but somehow I managed to.

I sat on top of him, so dizzy, and then I leaned down, resting my head on his neck and mane. The reins were gone, so I entangled my fingers with his mane, hanging on. I kicked him gently in the sides, urging him forward. “That’s it-good boy,” I said softly. My eyelids felt so heavy…the world seemed to be spinning…

No! I couldn’t go to sleep. I had heard that people who hit their heads hard and then went to sleep sometimes never woke up. “Stay awake; stay awake,” I said to myself over and over. If that didn’t work I would have to pinch myself every now and then.

We followed the stream, and I wondered how long it would be until we found civilization. I needed help badly-my wounds could not go un-treated. I had ripped off the hem of my dress and used it as a bandage for the worst ones, but the others were completely uncovered.

Aaliyah? I thought, trying again to communicate with my sister. Please answer. I need…help…

I was getting more and more groggy, and I didn’t know what to do. I would fall asleep any second now.

Then suddenly, without warning, the horse strayed from the stream and found its way to a broad dirt road. A road meant people, and people meant help! I perked up at this thought.

It wasn’t long before I spotted someone up ahead on the road coming toward me. My heart sang with relief, and I kicked the horse’s sides gently again to make it go faster.

But what if they’re an enemy? I suddenly thought. What if the person riding toward me had heard tales of the two ‘witches’ with long, red hair and pale skin? What if they hated Aaliyah and I, and what if…what if…

I couldn’t live on ‘what if’s. Without help and proper attention for my wounds I would surely not survive the night.

I hoped the people would be kind…

But in the end, it all rested on one thing-taking a chance.

I was just going to have to do it.

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don’t know what to call this.. i’m in a wacky mood. this doesn’t even make sense.~alilybit

May 18, 2009

I really didn’t think

that we could get this far

but now that we’re here

it seems like we’ve got so much more to go

So much more road left to travel

so many more things left to say

so many things more to learn

So much left to do

I thought for sure

that this couldn’t last

it was too good, too perfect

How much longer will we be?

My heart is breaking

though were still together

Maybe I should just end it now

before we get too much more attached

too much more in love

Goodbye

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Goddess to the Nations-Book one-part one- chapter 6

May 18, 2009

okay… this chapter is totally not finished.. got lots to go.. BUT MY MUSE IS SILENTLY SCREAMING! I’ve had like 6 headaches in the past 5 days.. ugh.. and one migraine…. so PLEASE HELP ME! LOL

 

 

 

Andel’s Estate

 

 

“Leave me alone!” I shouted at Andel as I ran out of the courtyard-escaping to my bedroom.

 

“Why won’t you listen to me?!” He demanded angrily as he caught up with me and grabbed me, pinning me against the door going into the kitchen. “What have I done that you treat me this way? Is it about the kiss? I apologized, for the love of all that is holy!” I burst into tears,

 

“Please! J-just let me-me g-g-go!” I brokenly whispered, savagely through my torrent of tears. And then I kissed him. He released me, confused and I immediately ran for my bedroom.

 

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I touched my lips in shock… She kissed me! I thought gleefully. I was grinning like an absolute fool… absurdly happy with that one tiny little kiss. And then I ran after her.

 

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            “Zaunia,” A solemn voice came from the direction of my accidentally left open door. “Sweetheart- we need to talk about this… about us.” Andel.

 

 “Andel… I-I… I don’t know what to say.” I blushed right up to the roots of my hair. I looked down at my feet, ashamed.

 

“You don’t need to say anything-yet. Please let me explain,” he paused.

 

“I’m sorry!” I gushed, interrupting him. “I don’t know what came over me! I know you-Maria-together… I didn’t mean… come between you…” I tried to get the words out between my sudden hysterical crying. Andel, who had been previously leaning against my doorpost, came to me and enveloped me into a warm and solid hug.

 

“Darling, there’s nothing to be ashamed of. I like you, you like me. There’s nothing wrong with that.” He comforted me, awkwardly patting my back. “Now what’s this about Maria?” He asked when my tears had slowed to trickling. I pushed away from his embrace.

 

“This is wrong. You and me.” I pronounced it very clearly, pointing at each of us in turn, to make sure my point got across. “This-this love I feel for you, and whatever you might feel for me, is wrong. Maria loves you and you love her. There can never be anything between us! Never!” I whispered hopelessly. Andel burst out laughing… Oh great, now he’s going hysterical too!

 

“Zaunia, beautiful, of course I love Maria! She had guessed as much about what you were thinking… but I really couldn’t believe…too funny!” He laughed some more. But I wasn’t laughing, not at all. I wasn’t even smiling. There wasn’t one thing funny about this situation. In fact I was furious! How could he say he loved Maria- but say he liked me? He was a raving lunatic.

 

“I can’t believe your laughing! And how can you say you love Maria- and like me? You selfish beast!” I shouted angrily stomping rudely on his feet and punching him, right in the face. Running away, I shouted behind me, “I never want to see you again! Ever!” 

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Renewal?

May 18, 2009

My dad just got a renewal notice for WE… that means that he has to give the next yearly payment. IF we want WE to keep going. Here’s his question to all of us:

Do you want to keep WE?

*grins* I wonder what your answers will possibly be? My vote is: YES. Let’s keep it going!

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DWD: Chapter Nine

May 18, 2009

Chapter Nine

Dershire

AFTER THREE EVENTLESS DAYS on the same jaded gray road they left the hilly farmland and began to see signs of people. On the fourth morning they were on the outskirts of a town. There was a flour mill and a waterwheel and a shack coated in peeling green paint. Soon Alix could also see a smokehouse, a livestock pen, and a tannery that smelled like rotten meat, potent medicine, and rusty, wet metal.

By the afternoon they came to the town. There stood a sun bleached sign with faded red letters on a dirty white board that read: “This is Dershire, home of the best pigs in the West Hills.”

“Pigs?” Alix asked, smirking.

“Where do you think your father gets his fat pork?” Johann asked with a dry smile. “Come now, remember your place, you are a common girl with some education, your father was a jeweler in Amsly but you are now an orphan. Pigs are wealth, Violet Nomansson, and you have no pigs.”

“I know, I know.” Alix said, exasperated. He had told her all of this before. She was terrible at lying, but her memory was fine. But she supposed he was taking no chances with her atrocious acting. “Are we staying here long?”

“No, not very long,” he said. “But there is a place we must visit.”

Joringel knocked on the sign as they rode by. “Aren’t our horses going to be suspicious in this poor town?”

“They’ll be staying with a friend,” Johann assured him. They had barely ridden past the welcome sign when Johann turned to follow a smaller road, though still gray rock, to a ramshackle shop.

Its moldy walls had once been white, but now they exhibited a sloppy gray. The roof sagged and leaked, the windows slumped, and the gutter dripped, clogged with rotting leaves and mud. Vines grew on the bottom of the walls, their spidery heads had been crudely hacked off at an arm’s length from the ground.

The fence in front, however, shone brilliantly white in the rainwashed sunshine. An imposing black and white paper pegged to the fence read: GET OFF THE FENCE! WET PAINT! The irony of the fresh white fence against the wrecked building was comical.

The building bore a sign with its name, so faded and dirty and infested by nests and hives that it was barely readable: ELWORTH’S BOOTS.

“Boots?” Alix asked with a grin.

“Good boots,” Johann said, nodding at his own booted feet.

“I’m sure,” Joringel said, staring pointedly at the decrepit building.

“Impressions are deceiving,” Johann said as he dismounted. The other two followed. “Or at least easily misunderstood. This building reveals the man, not the boots.”

“I see,” Joringel said.

“He must be a very interesting man,” Alix observed.

“He is,” Johann said.

A man, presumably Mr. Elworth, suddenly burst from the sagging doors and raced towards them before stopping a full yard away. He wore a gray, ripped top hat, a black, bedraggled suit coat over a coarse, tea colored tunic, and brown, skin tight trousers with a rip in the knee.

“Good to see you, good to see you,” he repeated nervously, taking off his hat and dragging his fingers through his muddled hair. “I, ah, see you’re looking very well. Yes, indeed. Very good to see you.” He didn’t acknowledge the presence of Alix or Joringel, only looked at Johann with a drilling stare combining terror and shock that made the invisible hairs on Alix’s neck prickle.

“I was hoping you could keep these horses for me while I go to town,” Johann said, undisturbed. Alix was using every scrap of her ladylike training to keep her face decently between interested and ordinary. Joringel looked politely engaged, but there was a trace of surprised amusement around his mouth.

“Ah…” The man looked like he’d rather paint his fence again.

“Henry,” Johann said quietly.

“Of course!” The man said as he leaped up and took Jak’s reigns, then lunged and grabbed Sus’s and Gallant’s reins from Alix and Joringel’s hands without a word to them, and dragged the horses hastily behind the building. They walked away.

“I’m not sure what I think of your friend, Elder Johann,” Joringel said. “Will our horses be safe with him?”

“The horses will be quite safe,” Johann said. “It’s him I am concerned about.”

“He desperately needs a wife,” Alix said. “Doesn’t he scare away his customers?”

“Are you volunteering?” Joringel asked.

Alix choked. “Never!”

“Then why would another girl have him?” Johann asked with a dry smile. “Come, both of you, stop your abuse.”

They grinned.

Alix saw no people on the road although she felt the prickling sensation that unseen eyes scrutinized her. Twice she saw faces peering curiously from a window but both ducked behind their dirty curtains when she turned her head.

“This is a very strange town, Johann,” she said after they had been walking for a quarter hour. Her legs felt sore and cramped after three days and a morning of riding.

“It is,” Johann said. “Prepare yourself, for we are going to the strangest place in this strange town.”

“Why?” Alix asked, feeling a unsettling mixture of apprehension and curiosity.

“It is an experience that no one should miss,” Johann said with a chuckle. “And I need something from there.”

“Is it another store like our dear Mr. Elworth’s?” Joringel asked skeptically.

“It cannot be compared to any other place in the Empire or in other lands.”

“Why keep us in suspense?” Alix demanded. “Couldn’t you tell us what it is?”

“I cannot give details of this place,” Johann chuckled. “For it is different for each person. Violet, would I lead you into danger without warning you?”

“No,” Alix said glumly.

“Trust me. Even an Elder has no words for a place like this! It is called ‘The Shottery’. It has everything you could possibly need and everything you never would.”

“I see,” Alix said, but she didn’t.

“So it is a store,” Joringel said.

“Yes,” Johann said. “But not like Elworth’s Boots.”

Soon they were on a main street. Many rundown buildings leaned heavily each other in a row of messy shops. All of them were closed.

“How does a shop stay running if it is closed in the middle of the day?” Alix asked, wondering.

“They do not like visitors,” Johann said gravely.

“So I see,” Joringel said. “I agree with A…Violet. This is a very strange town.”

Alix expected the Shottery to be a colossal building, perhaps the only decently kept building in Dershire, sitting elegantly – or at least cleanly – on the edge of town. But after a moment Johann turned at one of the shops, different only in that it was not closed, and knocked on the door.

Alix blinked. “Is this the right location?” She looked up and saw the store’s sign: The Shottery.

“Expectations are dangerous things,” Johann chuckled.

“Did you knock?” Joringel asked, confused.

“I did,” Johann said. “One must always have proper respect for living things.”

“Living – ?” Alix began.

The door opened. Johann stepped in confidently and Alix followed.

Alix was in a fine room with a chestnut wood floor, a few neat shelves of small products, and clean walls. She walked over to the shelves, marveling at the little wonders there. A precious music box drew her interest. She turned its mechanics and it sang a tender lullaby that she felt as if she knew. It made her want to laugh and clap her hands like a toddler listening to her mother sing her to sleep.

It unnerved her and she turned to a black frame that held a painting of the ocean. The painting looked so authentic that she thought she felt the soft, salty breeze on her face and tasted the sandy, warm air in her mouth. Alix touched it, enchanted, and gasped as her finger slipped past the canvas and touched hot sand. She jerked back, shocked, and fell against something.

It was a sign, just a simple board nailed to a wood stick but with the startling words: Welcome to the Shottery, Lady Alixandría printed neatly on its face. Alix withdrew and stared, afraid. She reached forward and gingerly touched the words to see if the ink was still wet. It was perfectly dry. What was this place? She looked urgently for Johann but couldn’t see him or Joringel. Had they gone into different rooms? Where was she?

Alix looked at the sign again. It now read: Everything you could possibly need and everything you never would. She stared at it harder. Suddenly she realized that there was another sign beside it reading: Shoes >. Alix looked down at her trussed feet, deciding to brave the strangeness and follow the sign.

It pointed her down a hall clad in infatuating, though oddly matched, artwork. The left wall was decorated with three pictures in black frames – pictures she knew better than to touch. The first was of a fire swallowing a boiling bay depicted in such blazing heat that she flinched when she imagined reaching into the picture to feel the stinging air. The next was a vintage butchery lined with many sharp, though crude, knives. She could easily slice her finger off touching into that world. The last picture was of a desperate, howling pack of wolves. Their eyes were so mournful, so hungry, that she felt an overwhelming desire to give them food. But their teeth reminded her of their vicious nature and of the fact that she was their food. She quickly looked away.

The right side wore a wide, hypnotic vision that covered the entire wall. It scared her, its yawing expanse could easily swallow her whole. What would happen if she crawled through the frame and into its bewildering, twisted world of abstract confusion? Alix stared, both revolted and drawn by the strange art, a wild collage of eyes and hands and legs and mouths and color. Then the terrifying thought struck her, were the people in the picture those who had done exactly that, crawled – or fallen – inside? She looked closer, but the contorted figures did not seem panicked or afraid. She looked away.

At the end of the hall was a room full of every exotic and ordinary shoe she had ever seen or imagined or ever would have imagined. There were too many choices to ever decide on even a single style. She stood there, wondering how she could ever possibly pick just one pair.

Shocked, Alix realized that the crowded room had clarified into a practical selection of stylish though sensible shoes. She bit her lip in surprise, paralyzed for a moment before she remembered her purpose and stepped forward to examine the shoes.

She felt nervous to touch anything, but she stroked a soft, thick soled moccasin despite herself. It felt like the sweetest velvet. She picked it up, it felt light in her hand. She took down its mate and tore off her party shoes.

Alix melted into the gentle shoes. They felt delicious, heavenly, incredible on her tired feet. They fit perfectly. She stepped toward a slim mirror, modeling them for herself.

Her curling black hair had been unbraided during their journey, it hung loosely to her hips. She dragged her fingers through it, unknotting the tangles. Her inquisitive black-brown eyes stared curiously back at her as she fingered the aggravating pimples that fringed the crown of her forehead. At least they were small. She rebraided her hair for practicality’s sake, even though she liked the feel of it cascading when she moved.

Alix rolled her eyes at her silliness as she posed for herself as vainly as her giddy maids. How glad she was to be free of them! It would be the worst sort of irony if she morphed into one of them as soon as she had escaped their clutches. Alix looked back at the new shoes.

She hated to take them off, but it felt like stealing to walk around the store in them, so she slipped them off and went barefoot, leaving her miserable shoes to be swallowed by the Shottery.

Alix peered back into the hall to reassure herself that it was still there. It wasn’t. It had been replaced by a hall of mirrors. Everything within the hall was made of mirrors: the floor, the walls, the ceiling. It looked like polished ice, seamless and everywhere. She stepped back, afraid that she’d crack the surface. She looked back at the room of shoes, and was shocked to discover that it had become a wall. Alix was no longer standing at a doorframe, she was standing with her back to a mirroring wall.

She crossed her arms tightly, wrapping her body to herself. The mirror beneath her did not crack, but she continued to step tentatively and hesitantly.

Then there was a girl standing behind the skin of the mirror in front of her. She was perfect, with a serene smile on her lips, wavy dark hair that tumbled to her ankles like a black waterfall, and molded with curves fitting every part of herself. Her face was shaped with pronounced cheekbones and a fine nose, pleasantly curved lips, and a mischievous smile that made Alix feel an irrefutable kinship with her. She was somehow fiercely familiar.

But it was her eyes that scared her. They were intensely dark, but they burned like fire. They upstaged her appearance with incandescent personality, playful but wise, laughing but listening. The mischief about her made Alix feel like she was a friend, but the loving wisdom filled her with a sudden thirst.

Then Alix noticed that she could not see her own reflection. Confused, she waved her hand. The girl waved back with a quizzical expression teasing her features. Alix looked quickly downwards, to see if the floor was reflecting her… and was shocked to see the girl looking questioningly back at her.

But the girl wasn’t her, she was sure of that, she had just looked at herself in the mirror and she had looked nothing like the fascinating girl before her. And yet, she seemed so familiar…so deeply, personally familiar…

Alix decided to ignore the mysterious reflection that was not hers before it drove her mad. She discarded it as best she could as just another bizarre complication of shopping at the Shottery. Now she understood why Johann could not give her details of this place, but he could have prepared me better than he did, she thought.

As Alix walked down the hall, catching alluring glimpses of the girl, she saw many rooms. The first room she saw was full of hats, ridiculous, practical, extravagant, and solemn, more than any one person could wear even if they changed hats every hour from the hour they were born. The second was stuffed with scarves. A villain could use them to gag, bind, and hobble every store owner in the Empire and still have enough left over for a glamorous wardrobe. The third was entirely stocked with stockings. She laughed at that, it was somehow hilarious to see so many splashy variations of socks.

The next rooms were like the first three, categorized by kind. They weren’t only clothing, some of them contained earrings or paper or ink or sand… she wasn’t sure what the point of the last room was. Another was filled with hundreds of clocks all working at the exact same rate and therefore uttering a horrendous tick! or tock! in unison each second. She was glad she was not in need of a clock, trying to search for one there would bring a headache, and she would have cringed every second for some time afterwards.

Although the kaleidoscope of the superfluous collections was entrancing, it was starting to make her tipsy. Alix shut her eyes, stroking her temples. When she opened them again, she found that the hall was no longer heading straight forward, but took a sharp corner to the left. She turned before she crashed into the reflection of the girl.

There were still mirrors, but the radiant girl had been replaced by a wounded child. She was small and skinny, and her eyes were big and tender and hurt. She had such a pathetic look to her that anyone else would want to cradle her in her arms and nurse her back to health. But in Alix, it made her heart throb and she only wanted to get away from her. She made her feel exposed and terrified. She headed quickly straight ahead.

Soon she stopped. There was a sign in front of her that read: sword >. Alix looked in the direction of the sign and saw what appeared to be an empty room. She stepped inside, bewildered. There, in the center of the room, was a single sword. It’s handle was ornate but practical, twisted in a single curl of hard metal. It’s blade was embossed with white gold veins with little white leaves. She stepped towards it with hushed breath, stroked its handle. It looked too good for her to touch, but she couldn’t help herself.

She took the handle and her reflexes spun it to life, sparring across the room against an invisible opponent. It was lighter than her practice blades had been, but heavy enough to be wielded with power. It felt natural in her hand, as if she had handled it since she had turned five and begun fencing lessons. She laughed, flying across the room in a skillful dance, enraptured. It was beautiful, she loved it. It had to be hers.

“I christen you…” Alix searched for a name. Great blades were traditionally named in the Illuminated Tongue and she felt as if anything less would be insulting to the gleaming weapon in her hand. But how was she to properly name a sword in a language she did not know? Irritated with herself, she looked around the room. There, she almost expected it for she was becoming familiar with the compliance of the Shottery, was a manuscript in the Illuminated Tongue. She searched the rough parchment for the perfect word, ridiculously expecting that the perfect word would seize her even though she could not know what it meant. It didn’t.

She read the silvery words aloud, painstakingly faltering through the pronunciations. If an elf heard me butchering his language I’d be buried within the hour, she thought dolefully. She finally chose elanume for the lackluster reason that it was the last word in the manuscript, sparing her from the decision. “I dub thee Elanume,” she said with theatric inflection, hoping desperately that her inferior pronunciation was at least marginally correct. Then she took the belt from the stand and strapped it to her side, sliding Elanume into the sheath and beaming childishly. She felt she could vanquish a thousand armies single-handedly and almost wished for the opportunity.

Confident of herself now, she strode back into the mirrored hall to face the wounded child, but the mirrors were gone. Instead there was a blank room with one red door and one white sign reading: exit >. Ecstatic to leave her dizzying surroundings, she followed the sign through the red door and into what looked like a shockingly commonplace general store.

There was a counter across the room and a few shelves lined with normal miscellaneous shop items: a few clocks, a scarf or two, several hats, a picture of a nice sunset that did not look particularly real, peppermint sticks, licorice, and other ordinary shop items in their ordinary quantity. It struck her in a strange way. Half of her wasn’t sure if she liked the dry normal better than the bewildering extraordinary after all. The other half was incredibly relieved and felt welcomed home.

The only traces of the bizarre experience was Elanume at her side and the moccasins in her hand. An ordinary mirror alerted her of her frazzled appearance. She looked stunned.

Joringel wandered in, looking speechless. She waved dazedly, feeling a sudden affinity with him. He was strapped to a sword she hadn’t seen on him before and was holding something small in his hand that she couldn’t see. He waved back just as dazed. They stared at each other for a minute while trying to think of what could possibly be said.

“That was… interesting,” Joringel said finally.

“Very,” Alix replied. She realized that her arms were still crossed tightly over her chest and that she was glaring suspiciously at her surroundings. She commanded her arms to hang back at her sides and tried to look less shocked out of her skin.

Johann walked in with a very satisfied look on his face but with nothing in his hands to show.

“Did you enjoy the Shottery?” Johann asked with amusement.

“I’m not sure enjoy is quite the word,” Alix said after a moment. “But it was a very enlightening experience.”

“I agree with Alixandría,” Joringel said. “It was…unexpected.”

“An unexpected place full of unexpected things,” Johann said, chuckling. “A place with everything you could possibly need and everything you never would.”

“You could have prepared us much more than you did,” Alix accused him.

Johann chuckled. “Could I? And deprive you from learning the greatest expectation lesson that exists?” Alix grinned.

“I think I could have lived with the deprivation,” Joringel said.

“Undoubtedly you could have,” Johann said. “But I could I live knowing I had deprived you? But we should go, it is already night.”

“Night?” Alix exclaimed.

“Time goes on fleet feet, especially when the mind is confused,” Johann said with a smile.

“How do we pay?” Joringel asked suddenly.

“I’ve already made the arrangements,” Johann said. “Come, we leave now, the door is over here.” They walked together to the door. Joringel opened it, holding it for Alix and Johann. Alix blinked as they walked outside into the brilliantly normal moonlight. She looked back, and there was the entrance to the Shottery, old, ramshackle, seemingly no different from the rest of the row of closed shops.

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Chapter Thirty-One: An Icy Messenger (The Flames-They Dance-AKF P3-Myth)

May 18, 2009

Word reached us later that week that our numbers-the army-had grown by at least five thousand men. My jaw dropped at the news, and hope filled me. We could overthrow the Dark One! While his numbers dwindled with every day, ours grew! We could do this!

Saelis, however, continued to be a great annoyance. She talked to Adan alone every chance she got, and I was beginning to loathe the very sight of her.

Today had been no different. While Saelis had not come with the others on the day…Wes had done what he had…she was now beginning to come every day or at least every other day. No sooner had Adan and I finished breakfast and he gone outside to chop wood than Saelis had come knocking on the door.

“I need to discuss war plans with Adan,” she said to me. Adan was outside, chopping wood, and he didn’t know she was here yet. Saelis went to the door and looked out. “Hmm. Where is he anyway?” she mused. Then she turned back to me. “This might all overwhelm or scare you-maybe you should go outside and weed your garden or something.” Once again she looked out the door.

I nearly snorted disdainfully. Scare me? Had Saelis ever faced the Dark One and tried to kill him, and then nearly died in the process herself? I didn’t think so.

“Or you could stop trying to steal my husband from me,” I said, glaring at her back.

She turned around, her face a perfect mask of innocence. “Me? Try to steal your husband? Never!” she said, smiling sweetly as if I was stupid. I, however, could hear the sarcasm in her voice.

“I wasn’t born yesterday, and furthermore, I’m a woman. I can tell when other women are interested in a man, especially if it’s my husband-so stay away from him,” I said in a low, cold voice.

“Tsk tsk,” she said, smiling teasingly again. “A mite touchy today, are we?”

Suddenly something strange happened. It was as if I felt a cold breath on my neck. I whirled around…but no one was there. I shivered.

“And they say you faced the Dark One. What, did you just see a ghost-in your imagination? Ha. I wouldn’t trust my life to you. You might get scared and run the other direction,” Saelis said, trying her best to get under my skin and succeeding.

I then felt a cold hand on my shoulder. Aaleyah…a voice breathed in my ear. It was, in fact, ghostly, and the breath I felt was as cold as the hand.

I jumped, shocked at the coldness of it. Saelis was still blabbing about something, but I couldn’t hear her any more.

What I saw standing in front of me was the most terrifying sight I had ever seen. A black…floating…thing hovered over the ground. Its even blacker eyes stared at me, unblinking. A terrible coldness emanated from it, causing my teeth to begin to chatter and goose bumps to rise on my arms.

Aaleyaaaah…it breathed again.

What are you?! I screamed in my mind. I quickly formed a huge, warm fire orb in each hand and aimed it at the thing.

A messenger…the being breathed. A messenger for hiiiiiiiiiiiiim

Chills went up and down my spine. I thought the Dark One was weakening, and yet this thing floated in front of my eyes!

Well you can tell him that he ought to be the one quaking with fear, I thought defiantly. Soon he will be overthrown.

Wroooooooong…the creature hissed. It was shaped almost like a person, and it had black eyes, a small nose, and a terrible mouth. I could see the tips of fangs on its bottom lip. You ought to be trembling with terrooooor…the Dark One is soon going to destrooooooooooy you…once and for aaaaaaall…he wants you to know he’s waaaaaaaaaaaiting eagerly to meeeeeet you… A snake-like, forked tongue flicked out of the creature’s mouth.

I stepped closer to it, holding the orbs out in front of me. I’m going to ‘destroooooooooy’ you, I said.

Ah ah ah, the creature hissed, waving a finger side to side at me as if I was a naughty child. Then it plunged an icy dagger into my chest, and the world around me disappeared.

~

Adan walked into the house carrying wood. He, of course, expected to find Aaleyah bustling about and not resting as she should…

But he didn’t see here at all.

Instead he found Saelis huddled in a corner, her eyes staring straight ahead and yet unseeing. She shook with fear.

He dropped the wood on the floor and knelt next to her. “Saelis?” he said. She didn’t seem to hear him, and he put his hand under her chin and turned her head toward him. “Where’s Aaleyah?” Fear started to squeeze his heart.

“She’s g-gone!” Saelis stammered in a hushed voice, reliving her terror. “That black thing touched her, and she d-disappeared!”

Adan’s heart came up to his throat. “What black thing?” he said, shaking Saelis slightly as she squeezed her eyes shut as if to purge the image of what she had seen from her mind. “Saelis-answer me!”

“A black thing…it hovered there-right over there,” Saelis said, lifting a shaking hand and pointing. “It was so cold…it talked in some other language, and Aaleyah seemed to talk back. Th-then it touched her…and they disappeared…”

Adan released Saelis, his heart pounding so hard in his ribs he was sure it would break out of them.

Aaleyah was gone.

~

Wes rode slowly, not really wanting to get where he was going. He knew death probably waited for him at the end of his journey.

He hadn’t meant to try to kiss Aaleyah. It had just…happened. Then he remembered the way Adan had looked at him, as if he wanted to spill every drop of Wes’s blood. Wes shivered at the thought…

But he had to go apologize. If Adan did kill him, all the better. He would deserve it for what he had done.

At last he saw the little house they lived in. He urged his horse into a trot, and when they reached the porch, he tied the reins to the railing.

He took one more look at the forest around him, truly wondering if he was about to die. Then he faced the house, went up the porch steps and across the steps, and knocked on the door.

Adan was the one who opened it, and Wes was surprised when he didn’t slam it in his face. In fact, something seemed to be very wrong. Adan was as white as a sheet, and he seemed to be only barely holding himself together.

“S-see to her,” he stuttered, walking back into the house. Wes stepped inside and saw Saelis huddling in a corner, her face even whiter than Adan’s. She was muttering incoherently.

“Adan, what happened?” Wes said, going to Saelis and helping her get up and lean against him. “What’s wrong with Saelis?”

“Aaleyah’s gone. The Dark One used some messenger…some black magic…and when it left, it took her with it. Wes, what do I do?” Adan ranted, his eyes wild with worry.

“Take my horse-it’s tied to the porch railing. Go to your father,” Wes said, fear gripping his heart as well. “He’ll know what to do.”

“Right-my father,” Adan said. He raced out of the house, his sword strapped to his middle. He quickly untied Wes’s horse and then was riding off toward Mara and Japheth’s house.

Saelis clung to Wes like he was the life boat in a stormy sea. “Wes, it was so-so scary!” she stammered, her tears finally coming. “It w-was awful!”

“You’re going to be okay,” Wes said soothingly. “I have you, and we’re going to go to Mara and Japheth’s house. Come on.”

Once again, darkest fear claimed the day.

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Chapter Twelve: Moving in Slow Motion (The Journey With No End-Myth)

May 18, 2009

author’s note: sorry it has taken me SO long to publish more of this!!!!!!!!!!!!

“Alim, we’ll turn south here,” Shastan called to me over the fierce desert wind. With the wind came a forlorn howling or wailing sound-the way the desert had gotten its name. We had to squint so that the sand didn’t blow into our eyes.

” ‘Right!” I shouted back. I looked over at Sumehra; she didn’t look she could go much farther. I rode closer to her just in case she suddenly collapsed or something like that. I was worried about her.

“I’m fine-just a bit sore and tired,” she shouted over the wind, as if reading my thoughts. “And I’d love for this wind to stop.”

“I’d love the same,” I shouted. “Let me try. Wind, please stop!  You’re being rather annoying.”

The wind didn’t stop, of course, and my silly banter set Sumehra and me both laughing.

“Too bad it didn’t work!” she called over the wind.

“Aye-too bad!” I agreed.

Shastan abruptly stopped his camel and gave a shout of surprise. “What is it?” I called up to him. Then my breath was taken away as I saw the obstacle that now lay ahead of us.

Scorpos(readers-lame name, i know. i’m workin’ on it :) ).

The creatures were like huge scorpions, only much, much more agile and skillful in catching their prey. They had long, wicked looking stingers and huge,sharp claws (readers-i am really dumb…what are those claw things on crabs called? coz i really don’t think they’re called claws. if ya know, please comment and tell me! oh well LOL) that could cut a man in half…

And there were five of them surrounding us now. They had seemed to rise up from the sand. One was bad enough, but five?! We were dead meat.

No! Don’t think like that! You’ve survived for all these weeks in the desert, and you can survive through this, I told myself.

It didn’t help, but I pretended it did.

“What are we going to do, Shastan?” I shouted over the wind. The scorpos had surrounded us, and they were making their large circle smaller and smaller…soon they would close in completely on us and kill us.

Shastan didn’t answer me, but I didn’t notice as I heard Sumehra scream. One of the scorpos had gotten close enough to her that when he flicked his tail, which bore his stinger, it stung her across the back.

The scorpos had some sort of poison in their stingers. A little of it wasn’t deadly, but it would cause the sting marks they gave you to easily get infected-and to hurt much more than they would have without the help of the poison.

Sumehra swayed, her face a mask of pain.

“Stay on the camel, Sumehra!” I shouted. I was too far away from her now to reach out and hold her up. I had ridden away from her a bit before, and I didn’t want to do any sudden movements. “You have to! Hang on!”

She barely managed to, clinging to the horn of her saddle (readers-not like a horse saddle-just sayin’ even though i know you prob. all know that :D ). “Alim…I can’t…do this…for much longer…” she rasped. I knew she was about to black out.

I cautiously inched my camel over to hers, the scorpos closing in the whole time. “Shastan!” I hissed. “What do we do?!”

Shastan didn’t seem to hear me as he sat perfectly still in his saddle. His eyes were closed, as if in concentration, and when he opened them, he turned them toward the first scorpo. I knew he was about to kill it.

I finally reached Sumehra. I reached out my arm, grabbed onto her, and held her up. “Hang on just a little longer,” I said. She was pale, and her body shook with pain.

“I’ll try,” she rasped.

Meanwhile, a blue light suddenly started to glow in Shastan’s hands. Then, as if it was a bolt of lightning, the light lengthened and zapped one of the scorpos. My mouth dropped open in shock. Shastan was a true desert-man-he actually had real and strong magic!

The other scorpos screamed in rage and rushed toward us. Shastan leaped from his saddle, and, spinning around, somehow managed to hit each and every one of the remaining scorpos with his magic.

Only one rose to try to kill him, but Shastan took his sword from its sheathe and cut off its head. Black blood spilled onto the sand.

Shastan looked tired, and he was panting, but he was only concerned about Sumehra. “We got to clean her wound cleaned off. The poison in those stingers is bad,” he said, re-sheathing his sword.

“Aye,” I agreed. Just then Sumehra swayed hard and nearly fell from her camel. I caught her just in time and then decided she was going to have to ride with me. I helped her get onto my camel in front of me, cradling her in my arms, and then Shastan tied her camel’s lead to his.

A moan escaped Sumehra’s lips. “We need to hurry!” Shastan urged. There were some more rock caves up ahead, and we went toward them at full speed.

We stopped and I handed Sumehra down to Shastan, who quickly carried her into a rock cave. I jumped down from my camel and followed, hoping with all my heart that Sumehra was going to be okay. I also thought again of the slave traders that had had her, and how one day, when I was king, I would outlaw all slave trading that went on, and if it continued, heads would roll.

We quickly worked to clean off the nasty sting mark. Sumehra unfortunately did not pass out as we did so, which would have been better for her because she wouldn’t have to feel so much pain. But she stayed awake, and felt every second of it. I held her hand and she squeezed mine hard-I knew how much it must hurt.

When we were done and had given Sumehra a drink of water, she finally did fall asleep. “Will she be alright?” I said quietly to Shastan.

“I think so,” he said. “People only die from scorpo poison if a large amount of it is put in their bodies, and she only got one sting from a scorpo. She will be very sore and stiff, but she’ll be alright.”

“When I’m king, I will change the laws. I will say that slave trading is outlawed, and that any who continue it are to be killed,” I said passionately. “I hate the men that hurt Sumehra in the first place. They’re animals, and they deserve a horrible, painful death.”

Shastan smiled. “You will be a good king, my young friend-and I say you will because you are going to survive. We are going to get you through this desert and into -blank- (i forgot my own place’s name!! ARGH i’ll have to look it up in my other chaps :D ). You will be kept there until it is safe to return, and then we shall return with a large army and drive the -blanks- (forgot the bad country’s name too!!!!!!!!! *myth smacks her forehead*) from Saria! (at least i remembered Alim’s country’s name!!!!!!)” he said.

His words made me feel bold. We could do this.

We were going to do this.

My father would not reign over Saria forever. I would drive him and all other evil from the land of Saria, no matter what it took…

And it very well might take every breath I had in my body.

So be it.

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Chapter Thirty: Downward Spiral (The Flames-They Dance-AKF P3-Myth)

May 18, 2009

It had hardly been two weeks since the ‘creature’ incident, and already Adan was up and about, working harder than he should have been. In fact, he shouldn’t have been working at all, and I was getting sick of it. I couldn’t take it any more! No matter how sore my shoulder was, Adan was in far worse condition…and he was doing more things than me!

It was spring now, the last snow finally having melted. Adan, of course, was working too hard once again. He had been out in the barn for the whole morning, and when he walked into the house to get a drink, his face was pale. I knew he was in pain and he was going to try to hide it from me, but it wasn’t going to work.

“Adan El’Hara!” I said sternly as he came up behind me, about to quickly kiss me on the head before going back outside to work again.

He looked at me, shocked by the tone of my voice. I had even shocked myself…but I wasn’t backing down now.

“What did I-” he started to say.

“You are going to go and rest in that bed. Your wounds will never heal if you never rest!” I said, interrupting, exasperated. I shooed him toward our bedroom with my arm that wasn’t in a sling.

An amused smile played on his lips as I came over to lead him to our room when he didn’t move right away. He was taller than me, and when I looked up to rebuke him again, his eyes were laughing.

Annoyed, yet at the same time humored myself, I took him by the arm and started to pull him toward the bedroom. He let himself be led; otherwise I could have pulled on him all day with all my might and not gotten him to move an inch.

“Aaleyah,” Adan said finally, stopping me. He put his hands on my shoulders. “What’s all this about?”

“You know very well what ‘all this’ is about! You are goingto make yourself be in a much worse condition than you are already in if you don’t let yourself heal. Adan, please,” I said, my voice pinched with weariness. “At least rest for a little while.”

“Very well, but this doesn’t mean you don’t have to rest,” Adan said firmly. He wasn’t going down without a fight. “I’ve been trying for days to get you to just sit and be still, but you won’t. You’ve been just as stubborn as me.”

He did have a point, but then my condition wasn’t even nearly what his was! “Fine. I’ll rest-later,” I said resignedly. “But please-don’t make this harder than it already is.”

Adan bent down and kissed me then, of course wiping away all my irritation and the tension between us. I kissed him back, all but melting in his arms, leaning into him but careful not to lean too hard so that I didn’t hurt him.

When we at last drew apart, I dreamily said, “Why do you have to be so wonderful? You know just how to get yourself out of trouble.” I smiled wryly.

“Well, if you really want me to, I can act old, grumpy, and grim. Your choice, of course,” Adan said in mock-seriousness. I hit him playfully on the arm.

“And abusing the patient! Tsk tsk,” Adan said.

“The ‘patient’ is behaving more and more like a disobedient child,” I said, grinning back. Adan grinned back mischievously.

“Can the patient get one more kiss before he takes his nap?” Adan asked playfully.

“The nurse thinks she can arrange that,” I said, pulling him to him, putting my free arm around his neck, and kissing him before he could say anything else. I felt like I was flying…

When we at last drew apart again, Adan kissed me on the forehead. “Don’t overwork yourself, Nurse,” he said, grinning and winking. Then he grew more serious. “For real though, Aaleyah, please don’t. I don’t want you collapsing of exhaustion somewhere, only to be found by me hours later. Be careful.” He stroked my cheek with one of his fingers.

“Move along,” I said, laughing. Adan left then, after dragging a promise that I would be careful out of me, and I continued working on lunch.

I was singing a song softly to myself. It was one my mother had sung to Aaliyah and I when we were much younger, and now I couldn’t get it out of my head.

I didn’t notice someone creep up behind me until two, large hands went over my eyes. “Guess,” a male voice said.

Unable to help myself, I started laughing. I brought my free hand up and pulled the hands over my eyes away. “I thought I told you to rest-” I started to say. I had turned, smiling, and now I discovered someone other than Adan standing in front of me.

“Wes,” I said, nonchalantly clearing my throat and stepping away from him, uncomfortable by our close distance. “What are you doing here?”

“Checking on you,” Wes said, smiling. “We’re all taking turns checking on you-I, Garen, your sister, and your mother and father-in-law. Today happened to be my turn.”

“Well, we’re fine. I just have to force Adan to rest-he tries to do too much, and he exhausts himself. But other than that, everything is going well,” I said, beginning to feel more than slightly uncomfortable. Every time I was alone with Wes I ached for Adan to be standing next to me, or at least be in the same room.

“That’s good,” Wes said. I could tell he wasn’t really focusing on what I was saying; instead he was staring at my face.

I shifted from one foot to the other, extremely uncomfortable now. “Would you…like some lunch?” I managed to get out.

“No, thank you,” Wes said, unfortunately not breaking from his reverie. “Aaleyah, you’re so…beautiful. You’re like an angel,” he finally said boldly.

I wasn’t sure whether to say ‘Thank you’ or ‘Please don’t say things like that’, and Wes must have taken my staring at him, lost in thought and not really noticing where I was staring, and my inability to answer as me…wanting him back…because he obviously wanted me.  He was next to me in an instant, fingering my hair.

“Wes, please!” I said, backing away from him. I was suddenly back in the city with Wes, and he was about to kiss me. I blinked a few times to break up the image, but it wouldn’t go away. “Wes, I’m not yours to claim. Someone else already has claimed me, and I’ve given my heart to him. Please don’t…just don’t…” I couldn’t think of the right words to say.

He came next to me again, his hands on my shoulders. “How can I help it? You’ve bewitched me mind and heart,” he said softly, leaning down to kiss me.

“Wes, no!” I shouted, breaking free from his grasp and backing up across the room.

“It’s not my fault someone else put a ring on your finger before I got to you. Your husband was as good as dead, and I hardly notice him being alive now,” Wes said, advancing toward me again.

“I thought you were his friend! You lied to all of us!” I cried. I was up against a wall now, and Wes was still coming toward me. “Wes, don’t do this! Don’t destroy the small amount of respect I had gained back for you! Don’t destroy our friendship. Don’t do this.” Wes said nothing and kept coming toward me.

He reached me at last, grabbed me, and tried to kiss me. He was like a mad man-his actions didn’t even seem to be his own! Wake up, Adan! Hear me talking! Please! I thought. I cried out as he pressed his hand against my sore shoulder, though  my heart was what hurt more now. Wes was destroying everything.

“No!” I shouted again, wriggling out of his arms. I stepped away from the wall and turned to run back to our room, but Wes was too quick. He grabbed me again, and covered my mouth when I tried to scream.

“I’m just going to kiss you, not chop your head off!” Wes hissed. “Now be quiet.”

“No! Let me go!” I cried, my voice muffled behind his hand. I was sobbing now-why was Wes doing this???

Suddenly the realization of what he was doing hit him, and he let go of me, his face slowly filling with horror. “I-I’m sorry, Aaleyah! I didn’t mean to-” he began.

He never got far, because Adan was suddenly grabbing him by the front of the shirt and slamming him into the wall. “What. Do. You. Think. You’re. Doing,” he said, his voice and dangerous. “How dare you touch her!” His eyes were filled with rage, and I knew he was angry enough now to kill Wes with his bare hands.

I held onto the back of a chair, sobbing. I couldn’t help it-I was overwhelmed with sorrow, fear, and pain. I just wanted Adan to hold me in his arms and never let me go.

“I-I-” Wes stammered, unable to come up with an excuse. He, too, knew what the look in Adan’s eyes meant, and fear filled his own. “It wasn’t me! I was overcome by my feelings-I’m sorry!”

“That’s all you have to say-that you’re sorry?! Look at her!” Adan roared.My sobs were slowly subsiding, but I could not stop crying no matter how hard I tried. “How could you do this?! I trusted you!”

Wes trembled in Adan’s grasp. “I-I’m-” he stammered again. He looked from Adan to me and then back again.

“Get out of here! You can be glad Aaleyah’s standing here, because if she wasn’t, I would kill you!” Adan said, his voice full of rage. He pulled Wes away from the wall and shoved him toward the door.

“Forgive me!” Wes murmured, looking at me, his own eyes filling with tears. I knew he was in torment inside, and I was glad. He deserved it.  Then he raced across the porch, down the steps, mounted his horse, and urged it into a hard gallop.

“Adan!” I sobbed. He turned and came quickly to me. He wrapped his strong arms around me, and my crying slowly stopped. “It’s okay; he’s gone now. I’ve got you,” he said in a soft, soothing voice.

I was so exhausted and shocked by the whole thing that Adan holding me in his arms caused me to go limp with relief. “Steady,” Adan said, straining to hold me up. I was much heavier with this huge baby inside of me. I knew it must have hurt him quite a bit to do that. “Come on-you need to lie down.” The use of my legs returned, though I still felt weak and drained, and Adan helped me walk back to our room.

He helped me lie down, and I begged him to stay with me. “Please-just stay,” I pleaded.

He laid down next to me and stroked my face with his hand. “Ssh. I’m here-I’m not going anywhere,” he said softly and soothingly as before.

I clung to him and slowly drifted off to sleep…

~

I awoke to find it night. My shoulder ached, and I could hear voices coming from the little kitchen we had. I stiffened, hoping with all my heart that it wasn’t Wes. I breathed a sigh of relief when I realized it was Adan and Japheth. It sounded like Mara, Aaliyah, and Shastara were all there too.

“I’ll hunt him down,” I heard Adan say. “You should have seen her, Pa! She could hardly stay on her feet once he let go of her. She was completely traumatized. I’ll kill him.”

“Son, revenge is not the answer,” someone said-Japheth.

“Pa, I will not stand by and him just do that to her! He has to be punished!” Adan protested.

“Adan, killing him would be a reward at this point,” Mara said. “I’m sure that right now he is cowering in a corner somewhere, petrified that you are coming for him. He probably can also not what he actually did. His conscience is probably very heavy right now-that can be punishment enough-more than enough-in some circumstances.”

“I’m on Adan’s side.” That was Aaliyah. “His conscience is not going to be punishment enough. He touched my sister with evil intent, scared the life out of her, and caused her more pain and trouble than she needs to bear.”

I sleepily got up, my head pounding from all the crying I had done. My shoulder screamed in protest, but I didn’t care. I wearily trudged from my bedroom out to the kitchen where I knew everyone must be gathered.

Adan was the first to notice me. “What are you doing up?” he asked, taking me into his arms. I rested my face against his chest.

“I couldn’t sleep any more,” I said.

Aaliyah, Shastara, Mara, and Japheth were all indeed there. Aaliyah came and hugged me, and tears welled up in his eyes at the sight of my puffy eyes. I had cried so hard before…I shuddered to think of what had happened. I let Mara, Japheth, and Shastara all hug me, and then I eagerly returned to Adan’s arms.

“Don’t…don’t kill him, Adan,” I said softly-almost inaudibly.

I felt Adan stiffen.

“What he did to me cannot go unpunished, but he seemed…truly repentant,” I said.

“Truly repentant. Ha,” Adan scoffed.

“No, Adan-listen. He did seem repentant, but even if he hadn’t…don’t kill him. I’m not worth having blood on your hands. Don’t do it like this,” I persisted.

“Aaleyah, I would fight a thousand armed men with my bare hands for you!” Adan said.

“Adan, please,” I said. “Just…don’t kill him. Please. Punish him some other way…but promise me you won’t go hunt him down and kill him.”

“I promise,” Adan said reluctantly.

Once again, that black fear gripped my heart.

Things were going so wrong…but why? The Dark One was weakening, so why did my life continue to take a downward spiral?

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